|| The Write Angle || Are Adverbs Really Evil?
The road to Hell is paved with adverbs. Or so a lot of people say. And not just internet people, who - let’s face it - will say anything. Even best-selling, full-time writers dish this adage out amongst their advice for others. I believe it’s actually a takeaway from Stephen King’s book, On Writing! Nevertheless, the topic persists as one of those never ending wars of attrition within the writing world (similar to the war being waged over the battle cry “said is dead”).
But, surely there must be a reason adverbs are so pervasive, so natural in our writing. It goes beyond writing as well; tell a story aloud to someone, even if you’re just relating the events of the day or what you saw on your commute. Notice all the adverbs that roll from your tongue! Now imagine those same conversations with those adverbs stripped away. Though this is not precisely what the “eschew adverbs” advice is advocating, it makes speech seem slightly... wrong. Flat maybe. Adverbs evolved as a part of human language for some reason, I’m sure of it. I suppose the question comes down to this: because it comes so naturally, does that mean it’s right for the craft - or wrong?
What’s your stance on adverbs in creative writing? How often do they make an appearance in your own writing, and how do you address them in editing?
Bonus! Just for fun: what are some of your favorite adverbs??
From my own perspective, adverbs are just another tool for writers to make use of as skillfully as we can. They’re pervasive in my own work - that much is clear. If you’re in doubt of my belief of their being a natural part of language and storytelling, check how many time I used adverbs in this short post! I understand the crux of the matter is to use more evocative writing, such that you don’t need adverbs to qualify your words. But, hear me out -
“Said softly” holds an entirely different meaning than “whispered.” This is my hill and I will die upon it.
My bottom line is that I want to use whatever combination of words best gets my meaning across - regardless of what parts of speech they are - and of course style, the general flow and melody and picture the words make on the page, factors in. That said, what I try to cut from my writing are filter words - anything that mitigates or puts distance between the reader and the story. A lot of these turn out to be adverbs, as it happens. My writing has a lot of “slightly” and “mostly” and “somewhat” in it that makes it weaker!
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