--inspired by the "ancient stone" prompt from @versesforthedew's NaNoWriMo
Chains bind me up to the lonely mausoleum;
despite the glistening marble, it cannot bear my weight.
My body erodes the slaves' manifestos on the columns;
with a shaken hand, they only make themselves known behind hidden identities and midnight's friends.
The present is supposed to be brighter than ever,
but a sacrifice demands everything more
from the ones who built this present sanctuary. --Elda Mengisto
Summary: After Y/N and Max make amends, he shows her exactly what a vampire can do.
Warnings: Language, SMUT, oral (m and f receiving), choking, roughness, Max using his vampire strength for the greater good, a mention of murder kind of?
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The hallway thrummed with the electricity that their bodies generated. Their panting harmonized with the jingle of Max's keys as he tried to blindly open his door. He had Y/N backed against the wall, their lips pressed together as their tongues explored each other. When he had finally unlocked the door he shoved her back into his dark apartment, not bothering to turn on the lights as his hands grasped for any piece of skin he could find. An open window let in just enough light from a street lamp that they could see each other and she noted that his pupils were blown, almost completely black as he looked at her hungrily. In moments she was back up against the wall, hands pulling at Max's hair as he took her breath away with every kiss. He pulled her bottom lip between his teeth before letting go, drawing a whimper from her at the lack of contact. They stood with their foreheads pressed together as they panted. His hands gripped her waist firmly. She could tell by his hold on her that she would have bruises in the morning but right now, she was only thinking about how good it felt for him to be so rough with her.
"You want me to show you what it's like to get fucked by a vampire?" The warm vibrations of his voice spread through her body like a wildfire. She nodded breathlessly and he brought her lips fiercely back to his. The small lace panties she had worn were already soaked through with her arousal. His lips began slowly trailing downwards until they were pressed firmly against her neck. When he had done this before, it had driven her absolutely crazy. Now, a looming sense of fear crept up her throat as his tongue flicked out to lick her flesh. Her pulse jumped sharply beneath his lips, causing him to smile wickedly as he continued to kiss her.
"I'm sorry, sweetheart. Does this scare you?" A chill coursed through her body. "Doesn't this excite you?" As he spoke she felt something sharp press against the vulnerable skin of her neck. "I could sink my teeth into your pretty little skin quicker than you can blink. I could turn you, restrain myself long enough to make you like me. Or if I really wanted to, I could drain every drop of blood out of this gorgeous body. Doesn't that turn you on? Can't you feel the excitement building as you really ponder how dangerous I truly am." The sick thing was that it did excite her. His words melted through her, causing her clit to throb. He moved his head up and down, causing his teeth to scrape against her skin. The mix of pleasure and fear made her knees buckle, Max grabbing hold of her waist to steady her.
"I'm going to show you what I can really do, sweetheart. Is that something you want?" All she can do is mumble a small yes, looking deeply into his eyes. "Look at you. You're already a mess." His words pounded in her head as she cleared her mind, ready to accept any pleasure he would give her.
Max brought their lips back together, as he explored the rest of her now. His large hands cupped her breasts through her shirt. A small whine escaped her as he pinched her nipples hard. Ready for more, he helped her take off her shirt and bra. He clamped his mouth down around her nipple, sucking it lightly through his teeth. She snaked her fingers into his hair, giving a small tug as he put more pressure on her nipple with his teeth.
Max stopped to begin helping Y/N out of her jeans. She stepped out of them, watching him kneel down in front of her. Their eyes met as he glanced up at her, his face agonizingly close to where she needed him most. He pressed his face to the front of her panties, inhaling the scent of her arousal. "Fuck, I can smell how wet you are. Do you want my mouth on this little pussy?" She gives a small nod, a moan trapped in her throat. As she does, pain shoots through her thigh as Max brings his hand down to smack her. She yelps loudly, startled by the sudden act of aggression. "I asked you a question."
"Yes, Max." He brings his hand up, threatening to smack her thigh again.
"Yes, Max ... ?" She grasps what he is trying to get her to say, swallowing thickly.
"Yes, Max. I want your mouth on my pussy." A groan vibrates in his chest and she watches as his eyes glaze over with animalistic need.
"Good girl." He suddenly buries his face in her panties, mouthing her clit through the fabric. Hands wrapped around the front of her thighs, Max works her over with his mouth like magic, bringing her close without even fully undressing her. As he hears her panting grow unsteady, he stops and looks up at her.
Before she can protest, he snags the front of her panties between his teeth, pulling back slightly. If she had blinked, she would have missed the sight of him throwing his head back and successfully shredding her panties apart. She gazed at him in awe, the remains of her lingerie in his teeth. He spit them out, returning his face to where she wanted it.
As she waited for him to put his mouth back on her, she felt him pull both of her legs up over his shoulders. She let out a yelp as he hoisted her up by her thighs, suspending her in the air with his face buried in her cunt. He devoured her greedily, tongue covering every inch of her. Both of her hands flew into his hair, trying to find some support as he ate her out like his life depended on it. From the angle she was in and Max's unrelenting tongue, it didn't take her long at all to cum. She began to convulse above him, afraid that he might drop her. However, he just gripped her thighs tighter, working her through her orgasm. As the shivering aftershocks rocked through her, Max lowered her back down so that she was standing in front of him. She watched through half lidded eyes as he licked his lips, cleaning her arousal off his face. She pulled him into a feverish kiss, wanting to see what she tasted like on him.
Max hugged her tightly, lifting her up so that he could carry her into his bedroom. She was wary as he maneuvered through the dark living room towards the bed. However, they arrived with no incidents, Max stopping to turn on his bedside lamp. He helped her to stand up beside the bed before sitting down on the edge. Turning to face him as he reclined on the bed, she moved to get up next to him. Before she could he put a hand on her hip and pushed her back slightly. "No, no, sweetheart. I want you right here." He pointed between his legs, which were spread wide enough for her to fit. She promptly knelt down where he wanted her, sitting back on her heels. "Do you want to do something for me, Y/N?" She was about to nod eagerly, but she remembered her lesson from earlier and spoke up.
"Yes, Max." This made him smile widely, gripping her jaw in his hand.
"Good. Undress me." She worked diligently to help him out of his shirt, his pants and boxers following quickly after. As his clothing disappeared one by one, she was finally able to see him fully exposed for her. His length sprung up into her face, causing her eyes to widen. Max let out a laugh as he watched her take him in her hands. "That's the great thing about being a vampire. Everything is bigger and better." She met his gaze chuckling as he brushed hair out of her face. "Go on. Give it a taste." It took no time at all for her to begin working his hardness with her tongue. She kissed the tip, gripping the base of his cock tightly. He groaned as she licked a long stripe from the hilt all the way to the head. Taking a fistful of her hair in his hands, he helped her get his length into her mouth. "Oh fuck me. That feels so good." He breathed, making small thrusts as she sucked his cock. "God, your mouth is so fucking warm. You're driving me crazy, Y/N." She smiled around him as she listened to what she was doing to him. "Get off, get off, get off." He demanded, pulling her mouth off of him as he sat back in the bed. She scrunched her brow.
"Did I do something wrong?" He laughed.
"No. You did it right. Too right. If I let you keep doing that I'm going to cum without getting to fuck that tight little pussy." This was all the justification Y/N needed as she climbed up into bed next to him. He propped himself up on his elbow to flip her over so that she was underneath him. She watched him get out of the bed to stand right at the edge, gripping her hips to pull her closer. The sight before him took Max's breath away. To think this was the shy little human he had hired just a few months ago. Now, she was spread for him, a small smile in her face as she waited for him to fuck her.
He lined up with her entrance, his hand over her stomach. Y/N couldn't help but close her eyes as she waited. He had never been like this with her before. She didn't know if it was the most basic instincts inside him or if she had brought something feral out in him. Was this what it meant to be with a vampire? Getting fucked by a predator, an animal that sees you as something to devour? It was primal and real and she never wanted anyone else. He was taking over her whole being with his smell, his voice, his hands, his tongue, and now she wanted him to take over with his cock. All it took was one small push of his hips and he was inside her. Eyes still shut tightly, she winced as he began to stretch her open. It took everything in Max not to plow right into her without a moment's hesitation. The instant he had slipped the head of his cock inside her, the warmth had swallowed him whole. It was breaking him apart and rebuilding him all at once. It was the most exquisite burn he had ever felt. He would have given everything, anything, to stay inside her like this forever. After a moment of stillness, she gripped his wrist.
"Max, you said you were going to show me what a vampire can do. So do it. Fuck me like you want to. I can see you hesitating." Her words erupted through him as he pushed in another inch. She was focused solely on him, her mind empty of anything but this. He raised a brow as he questioned her.
"Are you sure? I don't know how well I'll be able to control it if I let go." She nodded.
"I'm sure." That was all it took. He bottomed out immediately, growling as her cunt swallowed him greedily. This made her scream as his thickness pushed her to her limits. He pulled back out and pushed in again, filling her up. As he began to thrust harder now, she gripped the bedsheets like a vice, trying to anchor herself on something solid as she lost herself inside of him. He was fast and unrelenting, allowing himself to take over her. "Fuck you feel so good. You're so tight around my cock." Her panted whimpers became screams of exhilaration as he shifted to hit the perfect spot inside her.
As Max pumped in and out of her, he wrapped his hand tight around her throat. In the suddenness of the motion, Y/N began to panic. When he saw the frantic wideness of her eyes, he leaned down to pull their lips together. As he ran his tongue along her bottom lip, his grip relaxed and so did she. Once she was used to the restriction she was able to enjoy it, letting out a raspy moan. He watched her expression change from panic to pleasure as he squeezed her, keeping up his brutal pace. They both began to feel a familiar warmth coiling up in their stomachs. "Play with your clit while I squeeze your throat. Cum with me." She did as instructed, circling her mound intensely as his thrusts became sloppier. All it took was one more good, hard squeeze to her throat for her to come undone. She began spasming wildly, arching into the pleasure. As she did so, she clenched tightly around him which sent him over the edge as well. He pulled out, just barely quick enough, thick ropes of his cum shooting onto her stomach. They both squirmed and panted and screamed and shook as they came down from their highs.
Once they knew they were finished, Max headed to the bathroom. Coming back with a washcloth, he cleaned her up and threw the towel into a laundry basket. Y/N was completely immobile, laying on the edge of the bed. Max took her arms and pulled her back so she could be tucked under the blankets. He joined her quickly, pulling her close to his chest. The feeling of her heaving chest against his own made his stomach flutter. Stilling his breathing, he tried to feel her heartbeat against him. Sure enough, the quick thumping sounded against him, lulling him into a sense of security. There were a million things he wanted to say to her in that moment, but he decided he'd rather let her sleep. He knew there would be time for that later. In his exhaustion, he decided to sleep, letting her warmth coax him into a slumber that was filled with thoughts of her.
The violent struggle between the incredible art, world building, character writing, visual aesthetic, and handling of dark themes of Made In Abyss against the author’s blatant, unignorable, overwhelming indulgence in his underage piss fetish
