World: Alternia! Same AU as Renuti.
!! Hihi! Oh man I remember Renuti so well; I think you last updated your fan adventure at the end of 2020 and I saw that you used his updated appearance for it! I know it’s been a while since you’ve gone back to the well but I do hope you pick it back up some time; I love seeing people creating their own fan adventures and I like the themes you were exploring in yours.
Name: Prodit Narcor. Prodit is probably from the Latin root for loyalty, and Narcor is. Well. Narc. Narc core.
Lol got it ACAB.
Age: 7.62 sweeps/16.5 years. (same as Renuti)
Theme/Story: She’s the person who eventually calls the drones on Renuti’s radio station, and is then of course forced to “cooperate” with them when SGRUB rolls around. Also, I came up with her while listening to National Anthem, so there’s that.
Review Goals: General! Also, people frequently mistake her for a Blood player, so advice on how to push the Doom angle harder would be nice.
Strife Specibus: Fireworkkind? Because patriotism and also explosions.
Also quite Doomy. I approve.
Fetch Modus: No idea. I kind of think it would be funny if it was something very practical that she picked as a little kid and now regrets.
Oh that’s easy it’s a Hangman Modus which shreds the captcha card if you fail to guess in time. It’s Doom-themed, and is super easy when you’re a kid but becomes increasingly more difficult as you grow older because 1) you store more items, so you’re less likely to narrow the pool of the card up for grabs all that quickly, 2) stuff just gets more complicated, yknow? You may not be able to get “immersion blender” just from looking at the spaced and guess the most common letters, and 3) time-consuming, so you can’t just grab an item on demand. Also a nod to how much work it ostensibly takes to get the necessarily equipment when one is working for a public office.
Blood Color: Near-perfect cerulean (#005780). It’s a bragging point for her.
Lunar Sway: Prospit!
Title: Witch of Dooooom! She manipulates the rules of society to suit her own needs, causes explosions and death and forces the rules on others, and like most Witches, takes a maybe too practical and hands on approach without really listening to others. Also, I like the contrast of this very fancy, charismatic, preppy kid getting the most Halloween Spooky Goth classpect (in name at least).
I also like this, especially because she’s theoretically a very successful Witch of Doom right now! She’s doing a good job of narrowing everybody’s options to an increased number of failure states.
Symbol and Meaning: Scormini, the Fatalistic.
Handle: sweetieSnitch!
Quirk: She rep}a{es {ertain }etters with symbo}s. It }ooks }ike b}owing a kiss, see?
Ooooh I like that.
Special Abilities: Mild mind influence–basically weak charmspeak, if you’ve read Percy Jackson. She swears up and down she’s just a nice person and that’s why people do things for her.
Ehhh T B H idk that she need a power. we can tell an interesting enough story about a cerulean exploiting their position on the hemospectrum to take structural power without adding the psychic abilities, especially since mutations like Vriska’s appear to be somewhat rare.
Lusus/Guardian: A Monarch Butterfly, because it’s pretty, poisonous, and, well, monarch. Prodit loved her as a kid, but now that she’s older she doesn’t spend much time with her anymore. Call your damn mom, Prodit.
YEAH LOVE IT.
Interests: Listening to music and dancing (badly) in her room, messing with other people’s code, trying and failing to care for her pet cactus (the fifth one this sweep), playing Troll Ace Attorney.
Appearance: Just fyi, the sprite used is a slightly recolored FarragoFiction sprite. Didn’t want to take credit where it wasn’t due.
Yeah absolutely, thanks for letting me know! Always appreciate people giving other spriters credit where credit is due.
Personality: Prodit is genuinely a very friendly person. Yes, she’s also kind of a manipulative asshole, but she does have some actual friends who she actually likes as well, and is easy to get along with. She’s practical and perceptive, but tries to ignore any twinges of moral dissonance by going along with the flow and not causing a stir unless she wants to. She’s also great at talking her way out of bad situations, and will get you out of a jam as well if necessary. She’s very self-confident because of the aforementioned traits, and thus far her confidence hasn’t exactly been proven wrong. However, she tries to stick to her own caste–she has some sense of what life outside her bubble is like, and she doesn’t want her perfect view of the Empire disrupted.
Hmmm I can see why people think she’s a Blood character; this bio leans heavily on relationships and charisma as her backbone. It might make a little more sense for it to go like this: she has plenty of Cerulean friends because she has to; she’s seen what life is like outside her caste and sees the spectres death and destruction. Her friendships with them are borne out of genuine care but also out of obligation; if she doesn’t have them, who can she even count on? She can still affect self-confidence, but it rests on an empty shell and she knows it.
Land: I kind of want to use Land of Truth and Consequences, because it’s a fun name and I think it makes sense for her. Learn to face the hard Truths of Doom or face the Consequences, Witch.
That would imply that the Feel of her land is one of Truth and the Quest is one of Consequences, which is a little difficult to visualize. How about instead it’s land of Tabloids and Yarns? It’s all about the tales being told about her and her fellow questees, putting the onus on her to right the story and unite the planet in truth? I’m picturing a planet plastered with print with big colorful string connecting everything a la a conspiracy theory board.
As for the appearance...I’m gonna be real, I have no notes! I know it was sprited by another person, but I believe that you had-draw your adventure, correct? The vibe is right, the horns are good, and the outfit recognizably conveys what it needs to. It’s good to go!
-TR