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Shadow AU. I'm still thinking about potential forms Lanyon's Palace could take from his issues. I still like the Crime Novel setting, but I'm coming to like the concept of Sinking Ship in a Dangerous Sea under constant attack more and more. And the first can be folded into the second.
(Not to mention that my alternative idea for Robert's persona - the Count of Monte Christo - used to be a sailor.)
So much symbolism can fit into the metaphor. Drifting through life = staying in his cabin while his father used to steer. Or having his own, smaller vessel that Robert let drift in safe waters but always in the safety of a larger ship. Then he took over.
The ship's lifelike, based on the model his father showed him as a child. He also knows the entire lingo. It has an entire section that's basically a very comfortable prison in a cabin. Ships in bottles.
The sea itself is a metaphor on several levels. From Robert's feelings: On the surface everything seems calm; underneath is a maelstrom that can rise to the surface with storms. The sea is dangerous and treacherous because the weather and thus the waves can change any time (public society). Monsters lurk, both real ones as well as the metaphorical ones (prejudice, persecution, etc.) And then there's the power using the Instability => poisoning the sea / tearing it apart.
I'm still thinking about how the crew works. They'd might represent a bunch of different feelings. One of them gets murdered, as an echo to the danger of the Palaces.
Ooooh! A ship would be a great palace for Robert! Given his father's history and how much it links to Robert, a ship would be very fitting!!! I also love how it fits the Count of Monte Cristo too, I love it when multiple threads just connect together perfectly like that
The metaphors with it are great and really fit Robert's character! Robert's shadow being a captain but not wanting to be and is always struggling with the responsibility of it, unable to keep the ship afloat and all his crew members safe and everything running properly simultaneously, something is always wrong or imperfect and maybe his cognition of his father is always there to berate him for even the smallest slip up, representing how his constant criticism as a child always haunts Robert in whatever he tries to do
It would be interesting if the crew did represent his different feelings! Always trying to keep them completely under control and in line, doing his best to never let them step even a foot out of his control, maybe even keeping the emotions he doesn't want anyone to see working below deck where they hopefully won't be found. It also makes the idea of one of them being murdered interesting because there are symbolic Options for that. Like it could be his childhood innocence or his passion or any other number of positive emotions that he believes he doesn't have anymore, leaving behind just the colder, more ruthless emotions that will help their survival. Or maybe the reason he hides some of his emotions below deck is because they're more positive emotions like that and he's desperately trying to protect them at the cost of repressing and hiding them.













