what SUCKS about being a dialogue-first writer who was in theater & watches too much tv is that i can SEE what all of the action around the words are and watch it play out while I'm typing everything out. but as soon as i actually have to write it down I'm at a loss for how to describe it like???
yeah at THIS particular moment it should be obvious that they're squinting their eyes bc i made that word in the dialogue in italics. OBVIOUSLY they're shaking their fists afterwards because theres the exclamation point at the end!
but no, i gotta put that shit in there, otherwise the reader gets to control what the characters are doing, and not everyone automatically gives the characters actions while they're talking like i do lmao










