me at 2pm: hmm. i should nap now. (immediately gets sleep paralysis)
me at 2am: so OBVIOUSLY i have to move the sleeper car conversation to before Jenny's introduction, what was i even thinking, it'll set up the anticipation for Ophiuchus as a villian so much better and putting it after we switch out of her POV is just an unnecessary plot drag and clumps Aries' issues too close together, and honestly now that i've listened to Everything Moves - Bronze Radio Return fifty times in a row it's so clear that Jenny has to stay a pseudo-antagonist EVEN AFTER the canyon scene because Leo wouldn't trust her that quickly (not with Aries and Taurus' input) and even if she's not gonna attack them she'd need more nudging in the right direction, WHICH MEANS THAT… RAVEN CAN GO STRAIGHT TO OPHI which sets up a weird dynamic but i'll fix it later-- so Jenny can formally join them after they've finished up in the Sandstone Castle or honestly maybe even, although maybe this would be too late in the plot, she can join them in the Permafrost Archive when Leo gets bitten, i'm not giving Aries ANOTHER loss there so Jenny can step in, so i guess the real question is when her interrogation should happen, before or after ? would she have seen enough of Ophi's crimes to have that speech yet ? actually should the half-siblings have any interaction before the confrontation in the Archive anyway-- wait, when should she fall for Aquarius,