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[lovinglyourz]

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[rvcket]

Could we please get a first look review? Thanks!

Here’s you review, babe! My graphic isn’t loading or something, so here you go.

THEME: 10/10 

I don’t like this theme, although that’s my personal opinion. With the theme you had, though, you created some lovely graphics. I love the color scheme and the overall look and feel of the page, and that really showed that you put effort into this RP, unlike other appless roleplays. 

PAGES: 0/10

One of the many reasons I dislike appless RPS is because the navigation. Just because there isn’t an app, doesn’t mean you can’t separate your information into pages. I have OCD, so this is extremely hard for me to look at, it’s so cluttered. 

PLOT: 4/10

Not only is this plot overused, it’s also very short, and I don’t think it showcases your writing very well. It doesn’t make very much sense, and it doesn’t have any appeal or depth. And who would name their child Cinderhella?

OVERALL: 6/10

The admins are very dedicated and active, which makes me happy. You don’t see such effort from a lot of appless admins. I think this RP could go far if you lengthened the plot and changed the navi. Good luck, babes!

[rvcket]

(omg sorry I didnt read the 10/10 .. ) could we get a first look review? Sorry again!

Don’t worry about it babe! Your review is under the cut.

Disclaimer: All opinions expressed are my own, and they shouldn’t discourage you.

URL: The URL is simple and it gives a cool feel, also, it goes with your icon, which is A+ material right there.

Theme: The theme is quite overused, but the dark color scheme made me smile. It’s lovely. The only two things I’d suggest was to put an outline on your text links, and clean up the lines on the Lana PNG. Anyway, it looks pretty good!

Navigation: The navi’s well organized, while I think banners can make anything look pretty. The plot is well written, and it’s intriguing. I’d like to see how this turns out! Also, the perspective it’s written in is wonderful, absolutely love it.

Bios/Characters: I think it’s OC?

Overall: This RP is well done, although the graphics could use a bit of work. Good luck!

[rvcket]

Hey beb, we would lalalove if you could give us a first look review, please? Thanks a bunch.

Yes, you’re welcome. 

Disclaimer: All opinions expressed are my own, and they shouldn’t discourage you.

URL: When I first saw your url, I thought of trailer parks, but I highly doubt that’s what this RP is about.

Theme: I absolutely love this theme! I wish I saw it more often, but it’s great. I’m a sucker for hover links, and I love how the background isn’t those boring old stripes. Great graphics and color scheme, too. My only concern is the font, I’m not the biggest fan of Courier New, but that’s an opinion thing.

Navigation: The navigation’s organized well, and I really like it. The plot’s original in the sense of the troubled teen part, but with other aspects, like Parker’s, it’s kind of overused. I see so many different institutions/schools/MTV shows things that are supposed to bring people together. Overall, the plot’s fine, but doesn’t personally appeal to me. The rules are short and sweet and I like that. I’ve noticed that one of the admins has Maia Mitchell as their FC, and I want to bow down to them. The “Around” page is fabulous and a great resource.

Bios/Characters: N/A

Overall: I think this RP is well set up, and these admins seem dedicated and cool. The plot is interesting, and you guys have a lot of potential.