#thelostonesrpg

[nikkiofrph]

Can we have a shoutout please?! We’re a new travel/runaway Bio/OC rp! We are a family of people that we met along the road. We travel together to where home can be wherever we lay our heads. We die young and live fast. Come join our lovely rp and maybe apply? Everyone is open! Thanks!

Everyone go check them out! They've got tons of bios already out and are currently making some more. Why don't you go take a look at one of them?

[hanofrps]

Can we have a first look review please?

That you can, cupcake. The first thing I see is that you have tons of promo posts on the main and it’s a little cluttered. I’d make a promo blog so you can queue posts and get the word out about your RP without clogging up your main page. I’m not a huge fan of the theme, but the color scheme is cute. The plot is nothing I haven’t seen before. I got excited when you said you had bios, but I don’t really consider the list of traits, names, and FCs you have bios. If you’re not going to write full-length bios, you might as well make it OC so at least people can use the FCs they want and make them their own. I wouldn’t join this roleplay.

[vanessahudgensrph]

Can we have a shoutout please?! We’re a new travel OC rp! We are a family of people that we met along the road. We travel together to where home can be wherever we lay our heads. We die young and live fast. Come join our lovely rp and maybe apply? Everyone is open! Thanks!

[rvcket]

(omg sorry I didnt read the 10/10 .. ) could we get a first look review? Sorry again!

Don’t worry about it babe! Your review is under the cut.

Disclaimer: All opinions expressed are my own, and they shouldn’t discourage you.

URL: The URL is simple and it gives a cool feel, also, it goes with your icon, which is A+ material right there.

Theme: The theme is quite overused, but the dark color scheme made me smile. It’s lovely. The only two things I’d suggest was to put an outline on your text links, and clean up the lines on the Lana PNG. Anyway, it looks pretty good!

Navigation: The navi’s well organized, while I think banners can make anything look pretty. The plot is well written, and it’s intriguing. I’d like to see how this turns out! Also, the perspective it’s written in is wonderful, absolutely love it.

Bios/Characters: I think it’s OC?

Overall: This RP is well done, although the graphics could use a bit of work. Good luck!

[fcknrpharc-bye]

first glance review please?

Sure thing, love. Underneath the cut. 

9/12

THE ICON - 1/1

The icon goes with the roleplay. It also matches the scheme, the URL. I’m not so sure about it matching the plotline and presenting what you want to present as a first impression, but I can’t think of a better image for you to use.

THE URL - 1/1

The URL does what you want it to do. It grabs attention and it has people wondering who the lost one’s are. It pulls the roleplayers attention. It also has nothing to break the words up and make it seem off, which is fantastic. It looks nice as one URL. 

THE THEME - 3/5

It’s obvious from the second you go onto the page that the plot is going to be based around something with Lana Del Rey, and the GIFs made from scenes in the Ride video gave away that it was likely to be something to do with the song. Although I’m in love with Lana and girls, I wish you would have used a few GIFs of the bikers that were in the video, or even a few boys that would have been running away. 

One of the GIFs also don’t look to match the scheme but it’s not too noticeable. 

THE PLOT - 4/5

I’m in love with the song and the fact that you used the song to inspire the plot. There are a few bits where I think  you could have put your own words into it and expanded on it. As far as I know the plot is very open for events and such. But there might be a bit where you want to explain how they all stay together. 

NOTES - 

Very original plot from what I know, and I think the roleplay will go far from what I see as a first glance review. 

[chrissyrps]

opinion please? :)

Sure babes. 

The theme is very simple, but cute and functionable. I love the mauve/purple, but maybe add a splash of color? It's a dad drab and might not grab attention like you'd want. I like the plot, but I can't say it's original. Yeah, that's about all I can say.