#rewrite stuff

[kirenkiddo]

Mii Plaza

[dorphizar]

It was so much fun to draw this goofy dude tbh

And yea a little headcanon that this idiot has hooves, referring to the kaibutsu form

[victoriansnakearts]

Wip for my asmodeus redesign! (He’s got a lot going on rn so I’m definitely gonna simplify him lol)

Also lil sneak peek on a verosika redesign (trying to make all the hellborn resemble their proper deadly sin)

[fatal-rewrites-warriors]

AAAA my friend @blorbologist made me a little rewrite!Redtail plushie and he means EVERYTHING to me holy shit

[anglhv-s]

Rewrite in my style :3

[otso-silly]

Umm since I need to look like I’m doing something here is TIO 

Also look at what I got!!

[angelic-ish-phantom]

I’m so unhealthily obsessed with doing narrative design for this show whenever I think about its existence for too long it occurs to me that I could be updating the blog I like about it instead of sitting on shit as usual. Will I get back to this thought? Hopefully. Maybe not tho. Maybe this is all anyone gets while I pretend I’ll get back to writing it out fr forever.

The first and second episodes, while not the earliest thing I’ve placed chronologically, do a really good job of introducing the shows main themes and characters, while establishing a bit of a pattern, immediately.

The whole thing with season one is covering a smaller scale story. The stakes are meant to be muddled. Danny becomes more secure in his position as protector of Amity Park, but he’s simultaneously maturing, something that is mainly seen through how he interacts with his friends. The trio is meant to functionally trauma bond over the course of this first season, hardships and shared secrets, leading to a halfway codependency; they become less friends of convenience and more friends of necessity. A bit of an it’s too late to bail so we should probably try harder to like each other situation.

[ogzieoggleton]

Re-writes are fun until you start questioning why you add everything..

I then recall that they had a lot of other filler things, so I asked as I cut down unnecessary stuff it should be fine..