Fanart and Review: Pretty-Psycho-Boy
Author: SD_Ryan
Summary: Sebastian doesn't know what to make of the sharp-eyed criminal who slams into his life in a scuzzy back alley. Anyone else would run, but Seb isn't just anyone.
Pairing: MorMor
Rating: Explicit
Warnings: Angst, Explicit sexual content, graphic depictions of violence, rape/noncon
Word Count: 7762 (incomplete)
Excerpt Illustrated: I tense as he reaches up to brush some imaginary lint from my shoulder. His fingers are so close to my exposed skin, I have to resist the urge to lean in, rub myself against him like a cat.
“You have quite a mouth on you, Sebastian. I’m going to enjoy teaching you to stop speaking out of turn.”
Then he cups my cheek and rubs his thumb over my bottom lip, and my stomach plummets.
Holy fuck.
It is not lost on me that this is the same move I used on Carmen—she was on her knees, lips wet from sucking me off, and I touched her in exactly the same way. It feels like confirmation. A sign that he was there, watching me. Proof I’m not crazy.
Review: The part about this fic that really sets it apart is Sebastian's voice. I had some troubles with it at first - (really? he talks like that and he uses the word egress to himself?) But the characterization is so strong, and so consistent, that you'll find yourself enjoying just the flow of his words as Seb tells his story. Usually when reading fics I'm distracted by imagining the author struggling to find the perfect word; with Pretty-Psycho-Boy, I felt more of a sort of voyeuristic thrill from reading Sebastian's thoughts. It's just getting started, but this fic is promising to be everything you want from a MorMor story; tense, violent, and barely restrained. Grade: Fic Incomplete. Request a Fanart Review