I love love love your fics!! I'm not very good at analysing writing so sorry if I can't quite describe why but AAAAH I LIKED "SAME SIN" SO MUCH!
The reader's thoughts feel so erratic, quickly building upon eachother to really make you feel their panic, then slowly being guided into something calmer the more they focus on Frank's steady presence. Matt's mentions feels so haunting. I LOVE the inclusion of those past words from him and Frank, really making their differences clear. You expose so much about their relationship through so little words.
Idk if any of this makes sense but please be aware I'm gnawing at the fic like a wild animal.
Also!! I saw so many people fighting for a part 2 and though I'd be very glad to see it I actually quite like the open ending you give! Hope you don't feel pressured by all the requests.
this is actually so kind of you to say, oh my gosh. what makes this so great is that you actually touched on some of my biggest insecurities with my writing, which is that i always worry i'm not conveying emotion well or i'm being too wordy for no reason lmao so to hear that someone doesn't think that and that my efforts to improve are actually paying off? means literally everything to me
also, the part two thing -- i would hug you if i could rn.
i love any and all comments, so requests for another part on fics never bothers me! BUT it has become a running joke in my friend group that i can't write without an open ending (and lemme tell you, i don't think a single one of them are happy about it haha). so i'm glad to hear that you liked the open ending! i personally love an open ending, cause i feel like it leaves room for readers to daydream and decide for themselves where they want it to go (and to me, fanfic = daydream fuel anyway).
anyways, i'm gonna end up typing way too much here haha but seriously, thank you so much for sending this! it's made my whole day and means so much to me!
you're fantastic and i hope you're having the best day ever <3