I participated recently in a last line tag game, and honestly I’ve now rewritten that entire scene because I hated it. So, if anyone’s interested, this is what I’ve gotten out of it now, after deciding it’s almost 3 a.m. and I should seriously go to sleep.
Concrete is…rough, Vegas thought, running her hand along the crumbling outer wall of an abandoned warehouse. Her nails caught on it, sending shivers up her arm and down her spine, and she yanked her hand away. It felt like…well she didn’t have a good equivalent, not really. It was textured almost like the foundational layer of synthetic skin, but she’d worked with that before and synthetic skin was fluid and moving, whereas concrete was stiff to the point of brittle. Her nails even being able to catch on it like that was just weird. Not to even mention how useless something so fragile would have to be. Vegas fixed biotech that lasted longer than this concrete on a regular basis, and concrete was supposed to be a building material.
She shook her head. No one came this way for a reason.
The pockmarks and rebar jutting out looked like grotesque skeletons reaching out to the sky as they slowly eroded beneath Titan’s harsh weather. And while she knew that southeast Malina wasn’t very populated, there wasn’t any sign of life beyond the obvious remains of drug deals and mafia hideouts. Windows were somehow shattered—which lead her to believe they must’ve been made out of glass—so she avoided that disaster waiting to happen.
Southeast Malina gave her the creeps. It was so empty that her breath got swallowed up by the sheer clustered height of everything around her and her footsteps sounded muted, like she was a tiny ant in comparison to these gaping relics. Which—okay, sound waves would definitely get distorted in the kind of environment she was in, but it didn’t help her fraying nerves.
“I’ll be in and out,” she said to herself. “I’ve been tracking this part for months, I know Lynch left it here.”
The real question was why she agreed to fix biotech almost two decades old, but too late for that now.
This was started by @brynwrites and I really liked the question.
How are you choosing to tell this story? (POV, narration style, plot-structure, genre, etc.)
So this is kinda hard. I originally wanted the POV to be subjective omniscient, and I’m still not sure that I shouldn’t. I’ve been writing it third limited as of now and it sounds good, but I’m more worried about getting it down than deciding everything at the second.
It’s sci-fi. On a scale of hardness, it’s not diamond, but it isn’t bordering on science fantasy either. I draw on real-life possibilities and theories to build the world of Solar Cities.
Five-act structure for this novel. Each act is defined by either Vegas’ or Syra’s specific motivation for the arc. It works out rather well, actually, especially when constructing subplots and weaving them in.
I’ll tag: @panticwritten @incandescent-creativity @albatris @lefoxwriting and @priyaele
Urbanization Challenges and Sustainability Demands
How will cities meet the needs of swelling populations?
Here are some positive solutions to the urban future.
Car-Free Cities
Momentum is gathering around the world for cities to develop plans to manage air pollution through the banning of petrol and diesel cars. For example, London plans to introduce a zero-emission zone in 2025. This is expected to ban petrol and diesel cars from the very center of the city (hybrid cars will be excluded from the ban), and gradually expand until it covers all of the capital by 2050. The UK could see a ban on all sales of new petrol and diesel cars by 2040. Globally, a number of cities and countries are looking to enact such a ban as early as 2025.
Sun-Powered Cities
Reducing costs and exponential growth in demand for solar technology are showing the perceived value of this technology even in the UK market. An indication of the potential of this renewable energy source was achieved briefly in the summer of 2018, when solar power eclipsed gas power stations as the UK's top source of electricity. Solar power could lead to entire cities which are designed to generate their own electricity. Skyscrapers could be covered in transparent solar panels. Solar paint could also be used to absorb moisture from the air and turn it into hydrogen fuel.
Eco Cities
Ever-increasing populations raise issues of congestion, distribution of resources, and increased pressure on waste management, infrastructure, healthcare, and education. Sustainable cities have an essential role in responding to increasing urbanization in a manner that improves residents’ lives. The aim is to achieve this by focusing on environmental initiatives including limiting emissions, using renewable energy sources, and bringing greater awareness to environmental issues. Eco-cities will increasingly draw on lessons from the natural world and be modelled on the self-sustaining properties and ecosystem structures of our planetary environment.
The Urban Future
Each of these solutions share a common thread: they integrate foresight, environmental best practices, and urban planning to enhance the well-being of citizens. Advances in each of these areas are essential to creating a very human future.
So it’s been a while because I needed to get my computer fixed, but I’m finally getting around to writing up the short stories for the WHG!! Thanks so much to @ratracechronicler for hosting this year’s WHG. If anybody would like tagged for this let me know, and without further ado, the first prompt.
Nothing can touch him as Jackson sinks to the bottom of the lake, the silt pillowing toward the surface, hiding the harsh reality of tension only a few feet above him.
This reaping is different, he can already tell. The rumors have spread like an oil spill, coating everybody’s lips in thick grease. We’re well off here, they say quietly and behind closed doors. Surely it’ll be fine.
Jackson knows better, has seen the way children get pushed to exhaustion because surely we don’t need assistance. Assistance is a higher likelihood of death, and everyone agrees that they’d rather their children be yanked under by a rip than be gutted on live television like a prized catfish.
That’s no hypothetical either. On average, three kids drown every year right before the Reaping. Jackson has attended every one of their funerals since he was old enough to walk, along with his mom and dad, who faithfully pay respects to each family.
His mom refuses to talk about it, refuses to acknowledge the creeping of the calendar, and Jackson thinks he understands. She’s a strong woman and the wife of District 4′s governor, but five of her six children are being entered this year, himself included.
Not that it matters. Nothing has mattered to him for years beyond the deepest, darkest lakes or choppiest, churning waves District 4 has to offer. Even the harshest sunlight distorts and blurs beneath the water, and he embraces the muffled hush, seeks out snatches of the in-between. He may be the governor’s son, but Jackson navigates his district easier than breathing.
Familiarization means survival, and if he excels at anything, it is always that.
It’s been almost four minutes now, and his lungs burn, his throat bobbing with the effort of holding his breath. The bottom of the lake still reaches for the surface, and once again he hasn’t found what he’s looking for.
Surely he will someday. That day is not today.
“Where’d ya go?” Pearl chirps as soon as he walks in the door. She’s sitting on the kitchen counter kneading dough for bread. “Mom’s been looking for you for hours.”
Jackson huffs and flicks his little sister on the nose.
“Hey!” she squawks, pulling back and glaring.
He shrugs and grabs a glass out of the cabinet. “Do you know what she wants?” The tap is warm, but he doesn’t bother with ice.
Pearl shakes her head and goes back to kneading the dough, though her eyes trace the kitchen counter as if the linoleum has suddenly become fascinating. “Prob’ly about Ana,” she says, not offering anything more.
Which can only mean one thing, Jackson thinks, and chugs his water in one go, avoiding eye contact with his sister. That makes seven kids this year and one of the worst Reapings in the last decade. His throat tightens at the thought, his fingers squeezing the glass in his hand until his knuckles are white, but doesn’t say anything. Pearl’s too young for the Reaping, and he wants to keep her out of the loop as long as he can.
He doesn’t want to think about Ana, about the little girl that used to go with her mom on outings and had an eye for navigation. The stars fascinated her, even when she didn’t need them for navigation, and now that he’s thinking about her, he remembers a lot of broad-faced smiles and belly-laughs.
He doesn’t want to think about Ana, a girl who will never make it to fourteen. Doesn’t want to wonder whether Pearl is next, or maybe Tyler or hell, even Vick. Maybe it’s the Games, maybe it’s the assistance, maybe it’s none of those things, just a regular fucking riptide.
Surely it’ll be fine---and he fucking hates that it has to be.
That fire never lasts long, never burns beyond fleeting, and just as quickly as he worked himself up, he calms down, puts his glass in the sink, and heads for his room. Pearl says nothing as he leaves, and he shouldn’t be grateful but he is.
Ana had two sisters and a half-brother. The sisters are young, too young for the Reaping, and Jackson can’t remember their names but he can see their faces, can see the youngest one trailing after her sister like a lost puppy. The half-brother is the oldest, if Jackson isn’t mistaken, and about his own age. They’ve never spoken past regular hellos, and that’s probably because Torrance doesn’t stand out. Jackson’s familiar with his name because he makes it his business to know everybody.
His mom and dad pretend to know everybody, and his siblings don’t even try, but Jackson watches the people around him, watches them work dawn until dusk, and goes out of his way to converse with all of them at least once. District 4, with its lakes and rivers and coasts, with its salt-encrusted and gritty wealth, leaves its mark on him every time he goes out looking for something he’ll never find.
Tomorrow will undoubtedly be Ana’s funeral. The day after is the Reaping.
Jackson sits down, leans against his bedroom door, head between his knees, and lets the anger recede, lets the hate simmer. He stares at his hands, unmoving, even though in his mind they clench and break and destroy, and waits until all traces of it fades into the background once again. Until his own body doesn’t feel foreign, like it might betray him any second.
Days are numbered before he crosses the point of no return, before he doesn’t want to return, and he can’t help but hate how much he longs for it.