We Shall Never Speak of This Essay Again, Okay?
My Statement of Scope/Annotated Bibliography essay is definitely an essay that I regret. This essay technically isn't even an essay, if you think about it. It's basically an essay about the outline for an essay. We had to write a statement of scope based on our summer reading novel, Gabriel Thompson's Working In the Shadows. We got to choose the topic of our paper, but it had to somehow relate to his novel, and the subject of his novel. We then had to then write about what we would write about, and what sources we had to use. Then we needed a annotated bibliography for our sources.
I would definitely change this essay. How? Well, I would first make sure to not rush this as I wrote this. I would also for one make sure to go back and fix grammar mistakes and make sure that it sounds better. I also think I would pick a better topic than I did. It was hard to find good sources to use, and I as I was writing this, I wasn't as enthused to write this as I originally was.
I would basically rewrite this paper. Do a total makeover of it. Make it look nothing like it was previously. You would think that writing a essay about what you would write an essay about would be easy, but for me I found it difficult, and definitely struggled with it.
Saari Annotated Bibliography