Which Summary Sounds Better?
I’m working on cleaning up TT a bit (going back and fixing typos, re-writing small things to make it smoother etc) And I want to change the summary. I’ve got a new one up now, but idk I’m not really happy with it I guess.
So what one sounds better in your guys’ opinion?
Original:: We think we know the tale of the New Order of the Stone. But in this world, things happened a little differently, and people are not who you think they are, nor are they how you remember them
Current:: The Order of the Stone is a tale as true as time. We know it, we know the real truth, and we know about the new heroes who have risen to take their place... Or do we?
New Option 1:: When time dances and fate is changed, we find that the stories we thought we knew, never happened at all. In this world, the Order did exist, but it’s not who we remember at all.
New Option 2:: Fate be Changed, look inside, View the stories changed by time.