I just finished reading your rewrite for S11 and i love it so much !! 💖💖 You did a great job emphasizing everyone's role in the rewrite, and the backstory of the scrolls? BEAUTIFUL !! I'm always a sucker for metaphorical riddles and i'm- i'm in loss of words
You did a REALLY good job with the art too !! The title cards looks amazing ! 👏👏👏👏👏
Thankthankthankthankthank!!!! Ahhhh!!! I’m glad you thought that the roles were good because that was one of the things I wanted to improve about s11. And also the riddle!!! I was kinda inspired by the snow queen which seems to have inspired most of s11, and I kinda struggled with the answer “until spring” because it doesn’t really have that poem-y feel to it but maybe the charm is that it’s a really simple answer and the answer “eternity” was Zane overthinking the riddle when it’s not that deep ykno? Idk if that made sense lol.
And omg thank u the art took ages I have no idea when I started the rewrite (Edit: I STARTED IT IN APRIL) but I had all of the writing done it was just the art that I wanted to do that took forever (tbf it’s easier to write things in my notes app than it is to set up the drawing tablet and actually put aside some time to draw). I even delayed further by then realising the intro and outro wouldn’t have art and I wanted something for them so I had to go and edit three images together, but I think they look snazzy! Art is fun!
