#the syntax

[strawvbee]

miss info 💜💜💜

[boykingscourt]

i think a big part of why the sammy soda time post is so good is because it's one very long sentence followed by a short sentence followed by a shorter sentence

[elgreytea]

i feel like... he DO be kinda pissed though

[chuuphic]

trump has similar speech patterns to my grandma

[speiress]

ooc; I think I really need constructive criticism rn? I want to grow as a writer so badly, and although looking at websites and books are helpful, it'd be nice to get an opinion from someone who's seen my writing, y'know? (and nah, not fishing for compliments. I just wanna know... What I can work on!) I cant get better unless I know how I'm doing! ^°^