Writing Diary: Editing with Agents = Cutting
Wednesday, 17th August 2016
Okay. Starting the day at 8:46 AM, that’s a good time. A very good time. And here we go!
10:20 AM: 100.913 words! Yippieh! 500 words, and they took me a while, but that is alright. I am getting there. I am on page 195. Cannot wait to see how much I still manage to cut like this.
It is really good going through the entire manuscript again, by the way. I have spotted a few egregious mistakes that I wouldn’t have liked to send it off with.
This may also be the first time I have used the word egregious.
12:37 PM: 99.825 words! And I was so engrossed I didn’t even notice it happen. Page 230. I feel like it is slower going now, as if there isn’t as much to cut as in the first half, but I remain optimistic. René and the Count are about to make their first appearance – I cannot wait to explore more of them in Book 2!
I love the club scene, by the way. René has just turned up – I love René. He will always be Santiago Cabrera to me.
1:37 PM. 99.490! And page 247, so lots cut. Thought every 500 words could be a milestone now. Only a few more to go, after all – seven times 500, plus a couple more for the scenes between Rea and the Prince.
1:47 PM: Oh, I have forgotten how much I enjoyed keeping this diary! Well, I’m off for cake and tea now with a friend. I wouldn’t need a break, but I take my social life very seriously. You have to when you’re a writer, I think.
4:35 PM: Until 4 at Lotte’s plus food, which was too long, but very enjoyable. Just hit 98,933 words. Going very well.
6:16 PM: 97.997 words. This really is going splendidly. I’m supposed to go to a BBQ soon. I’d much rather go on. Did I mention social life is important? It really is.
Favourite line of the day (just written, too):
We do not fit within their lines. So they make us hate ourselves. Hide ourselves. Hurt ourselves.
6:26 PM: It is no use. I need to go. I am doing well though. Maybe I can come home early today and still get some work done.
10:58 PM: We got back at around ten. It was an incredibly fun evening. But continuing to cut is also very good. I have cut an entire scene, between the Queen and Rea. I believe I can live without it very well. At 96.711 words thanks to that.
11:26 PM: It is time to stop. 96.518. Let’s see what tomorrow brings.