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was reading sieg's gree route. chapter 2. and kuon-kun appeared.

The MC met Kuon on her mad dash walk to work. Concerned, he asked if she's okay and MC told him she just don't get enough sleep last night and proceeded to tell him someone's moving next door yesterday. And he asked if it's a guy hohoho

Kuon: "I see... If anything happens, you can tell me."

MC: "Yeah, thanks."

Kuon: "...if you want, you can come to my place."

['...you can stay in my place, if you want?' huh idk]

MC: "Huh?"

I don't quite catch what he said, since right when he said that, we arrived at an intersection, and his words were drowned out by the sound of cars. very convenient, cars

Kuon: "No, it's nothing."

HOW CAN I NOT PLAY HIS ROUTE

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5 / 5 of Prince Wilfred's Birthday event 2014: Claude's Route translationnnnnn!!

--As usual, click pic to see the photobucket album~

Stage 4: Normal End

Someone Whom I Wanted to Protect

This is sudden, but do you have anything planned for the day?

Is that even how you use 'whom'? I just want to make Claude (or the title) more elegant or something. But curse my intuitive linguistic skills for their lack of cooperation (do I even have one). So if anyone understand, please tell me if the title is grammatically correct. Then I'll change it.

is this a translation post or a cry for grammar nazis idk at least i finished claude's translation that's the only thing that matters

Translated stages: One, Two, Three, Four (Happy End), Four (Normal End)

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Four out of five! Just one more and it's doooneeeee!! Sigh, the things you can do... If only you could divert this enthusiasm to studying instead oh shut up

Stage 4: Happy End

Under the Cherry Blossoms Tree

Don't worry. From here on, please leave it all to me.

Eugh. I don't think the flow (result of my translation) is good in this one... Still, click on the pic if you don't mind.

For those interested, the Normal End will be up around another four hours or so... Or maybe faster than that. Idk. Maaaaybe I can make the Normal End translation flows better or something... Or maybe I'll just leave it as it is - I'm so sleepy rn ugh sorry if the flow is not that good. *bows*

Translated stages: One, Two, Three, Four (Happy End), Four (Normal End)

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Part two of Prince Wilfred's Birthday Event 2014: Claude's Route translation!

Stage 2: Like a Dream

Would you like to walk under the cherry blossoms with me? ...Don't tell his Highness.

Click on the pic for the translation album~ And I think the translation is (only) a bit less choppy this time, so I hope you can enjoy it more ^^

Also, any kind of feedback is welcome :D

literally the title means 'Time which is like a dream' sorry for butchering japanese and english again

Translated stages: One, Two, Three, Four (Happy End), Four (Normal End)

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Another shot of translating BMP GREE JP event. One full stage, this time! Oh, and I use photobucket.

Prince Wilfred's Birthday Event 2014: Claude's Route

Stage 1: My Boyfriend is the Butler

...You can't say that to other men. You can only say that to me, your boyfriend.

Just click on the pic if you don't mind choppy translation ^_^

anyway the title's translation sounds like it's ripped off of some cheesy shoujo manga i'm so sorry claude and everyone who suddenly got the urge to puke and why did he sound so smug ughhh

Feedback is really welcome.

EDIT: Changed the stage title in photobucket to 'My Butler Lover' (it's do-mkokoro's suggestion! thanks!) which is waaaay less cheesy fufu but I guess I'll keep that cheesy title up there for everyone to puke  stare in disbelief  laugh at

Translated stages: One, Two, Three, Four (Happy End), Four (Normal End)