Title: What You Become Genre: Post-Apocalyptic Horror / Body Horror Word Count: ~1800 Tone: Gritty, visceral, reflective POV: Second Person (Gender-Neutral Reader) Infected!Reader
What You Become
You never meant to get bitten.
You were careful. Always.
In this world, the careless don’t last more than a week—especially not in the Red Zones. You had a plan: mask up, patch in, grab the crate of antivirals from the pharmacy’s second-floor stash room, and ghost out before nightfall.
Easy.
But then came the noise.
A crash behind you—metal on glass, a shelving unit toppling in the dark.
You spun too late.
It was already on you.
You saw its eyes first—milky, filmed over, but aware. Then the stench: bile, blood, rot, and the chemical tang of the Vitality Virus leeching from its skin.
Its mouth snapped forward.
You felt the bite on your arm. Just above the elbow. A blinding burst of pressure and heat as its teeth sank into your jacket, through to flesh.
Your scream caught in your throat. You drove your knife into its temple without thinking.
It dropped, twitching.
You stumbled backward into broken glass, clutching your bleeding arm, breath coming fast and shallow.
You’d been bitten.
The realization struck harder than the pain.
Your mouth moved, shaping silent denials.
No, no, no.
You wrapped it fast. Tight. Tried to keep your hand from shaking. Infection needs time. You remembered that from the old posters. From broadcasts. From survivor gossip. You still had time. Maybe.
You found cover in a dead storefront, collapsing behind a wall of overturned mannequins.
The city around you pulsed with heat. Your skin itched. Rain sizzled against metal and concrete. The stormwater picked up glow from the cracked neon signs that still flickered in the skeletal skyline.
You didn’t dare cry. Crying wasted water.
But you wanted to.
You were alone.
And you were infected.
You fumbled in your pack. Found the last injector of anti-V. U-Strain only. Maybe. The dosage wasn’t even calibrated for someone your size. Didn’t matter. You jabbed it into your thigh and squeezed the plunger.
The cold flood hit you like ice in the marrow.
At first, you thought it worked.
Your vision cleared. The pain dulled. You could breathe again.
Then came the hunger.
It hit like a freight train.
Your stomach convulsed. Mouth flooded with bitter saliva. You curled forward and vomited—thick, black bile that clung to your fingers when you tried to wipe your mouth.
It smelled like rot. Like decay. Like everything wrong with this world condensed into a single, sticky mass.
You coughed until your ribs ached.
Something behind your eyes began to burn.
Your muscles spasmed—hips jerking, spine arching like a live wire. You gasped, and it came out as a rasp, animal and desperate.
Your nails cracked. Lengthened.
Your fingertips split, leaking threads of pus and something... stringy. Vein-like.
You reached for your mask, but your hands wouldn't cooperate. They twitched and clawed at your own face.
You screamed into your elbow.
The scream wasn’t fully yours.
Your reflection stared back from a shard of broken glass.
Bloodshot eyes. Gray skin. Teeth that had grown too sharp, too fast. Your pupils shimmered—green ringed in crimson, unfocused.
Inside, your thoughts flickered like a damaged screen.
Eat.
Breathe.
Run.
Hunt.
You tried to say your name. Remind yourself who you were. It came out as a groan, wet and strangled.
Memories slipped sideways—your brother’s voice, the sound of an old record spinning in a safehouse, the feeling of sand beneath your boots.
All melting.
You blinked—and suddenly, you were standing.
You didn’t remember getting up.
Your legs carried you through the alley like they knew the path. Your body hunched slightly, movements low and tense, like a predator. You didn’t walk anymore. You stalked.
Every sound was louder.
You could hear a heartbeat. Not yours.
Human. Frightened.
You could taste their scent on the wind.
Fresh.
Your tongue slid past your teeth—longer now, prehensile. It lashed the air, gathering data like a serpent’s.
Behind your forehead, what remained of you screamed: STOP.
But your body moved forward.
Claws flexed at your sides.
Your mouth parted.
Hunger drowned everything else.
You remember it later, in flashes—climbing a wall in one leap, crouched on a rooftop, the city stretching like a maze below you. Every alley a hunting ground.
You moved with inhuman grace.
Fast. Agile. Fluid.
You were a shadow. A ghost.
And when you saw them—two survivors picking through a gas station’s remains—you froze.
One of them looked like they could’ve been your friend, once.
The other held a shotgun.
They didn’t see you.
But you saw everything: their breath in the cold air, their pulse in their necks, the warm glow of blood beneath their skin.
You felt yourself rear back. Ready to strike.
But then—
You hesitated.
Not because of mercy. Not really.
Because you remembered.
A flash of who you were. The sound of laughter. A voice calling your name.
It was enough to stop your body for a second.
And that second was all they needed.
The one with the gun turned.
You bolted.
Your mind screamed for control. You leapt fences, tore through plastic sheeting, ran until the hunger blurred into pain and confusion.
You ended up alone again. In the dark.
You curled into yourself and waited.
The sobs that came weren’t yours.
But they came from your throat.
The infection doesn’t kill everyone the same way.
Some people just go feral.
Some mutate—get claws, bile sacs, venom tongues.
Some, like you, stay aware. Trapped inside.
You are a Carrier now. Maybe worse.
You still think. You still feel.
But you are no longer “you.”
And when the hunger takes over, nothing can stop it.
You don’t know how long you’ll last before there’s nothing human left.
But for now, you write this message on the wall of an old bunker.
In charcoal. In blood.
What you become… isn’t the worst part.
It’s remembering what you used to be.