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Lisa Lynne & Aryeh Frankfurter, Interlace II, Weaving Worlds, 2011
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Lisa Lynne & Aryeh Frankfurter, Interlace II, Weaving Worlds, 2011
hey who's willing to read a small snippet of something i'm planning on writing? i just need a little bit of criticism to it; just to see what's good etc.
the snippet is kinda out of context but i don't wanna give away spoilers or anything else; i mostly need criticism on sentence structure and stuff but ya know??