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I think my (one of many) favorite thing about The Double is the romance.

At the core of this story, it’s about one woman enacting the revenge and justice of two scorned and murdered women. So the romance instead becomes the perfect seasoning instead of the meat of the plot.

Jiang Li/Fang Fei and Duke Su’s romance progresses organically and refreshingly. It’s not established through grand confessions or plot relevant romantic drama.

Instead, every time they interact, their dynamic mutually progresses. Starting as chess pieces they can use but don’t think about past exploitation, to allies, until their dialogue naturally starts to become flirty and banter-y, and then a bit marriage-y, until they are soulmate ride or die for eachother.

It’s the perfect example of show not tell, and proves some fucking fantastic writing. Because neither of them really discuss the changing beats of their relationship. They are mutually aware of their own evolution and the audience is also aware without needing explicit exposition.

And that is SO FUCKING HARD TO PULL OFF AND YET THEY SOMEHOW DID IT PERFECTLY?!?!?! I’m so impressed

#cdrama #the double #the double the series #writing praise #writing #the acting is top notch as well

On the other hand, I will................begrudgingly admit that Rooster Teeth did a red herring very well.

Most shows don’t even bother with red herrings anymore because they’re just too much to bother with (at least done right, plenty of people will throw them at you done wrong). Raven Branwen being the Spring Maiden was tossed around like wildfire from its first mention in Volume 3, given that she was such an enigmatic figure. Volume 4 came around and tricked us into thinking she was looking for Spring, and thus couldn’t be the Maiden herself. Volume continued and introduced relics, while Vernal was introduced in Volume 5, making the conversation with Qrow in Volume 4 its own red herring. For the entirety of Volume 5, we’ve thought Vernal was the Spring Maiden because we thought what we were shown was not only deliberate, but irrefutable. And because of that, Raven being Spring never even occurred to us.

That’s a red herring done right.

#writing praise #positivity #Raven Branwen #Vernal

Thank you so much for the Gluttony Update. I always enjoy rewrites and different head canons that the actual mature, critical and insightful members of the fandom produces. Please take however much time that you need to relax and de-stress as much as you can.

Thank you so much for such kind words! 😊 I'm really glad to know people enjoy my headcanons, especially since I often doubt myself as a writer, so your support means the world to me! Again, thank you very much! 💖

#writing praise #good feelings #appreciation

The forest lies still,

a brook rushes.

A little bird wants to chirp,

but night falls.

Fog that surrounds the trees,

everything disappears in its white.

No sound which still sounds.

The forest looks like ice.

On the horizon a light,

now see.

even if the fog is still so thick

the sun is on its way.

She brings hope

In the moment when everyone forgot you.

Back is the memory,

for now we sit in the grass.

There in the grass where we often used to lie.

How we marveled at the world.

Now for many more days,

the important thing is money.

We should still enjoy wonders,

Like where we were children.

Never should we regret that time.

Now we are adults for many years,

the miracles die every year

as you grow older.

You have to enjoy them, completely.

Childhood is so wonderful.

But unfortunately it does not come back,

You have to believe in miracles.

Everyone, however, keeps a piece,

Being a child, that's what we need.

Oh, anon

This is so pretty <3 You have a way with words that I wish I had when it comes to poetry. Talking about the fleeting whimsy that comes with growing up is bittersweet.

If you're too shy to claim ownership in public feel free to hop in my messages. This is absolutely stellar.

#writing praise #L answers

damn your post about it being cold on olympus really did that (killed me)

Anina I'm physically like. Shaking. Because it's that angsty

#thank you anina #anina #asks #writing praise

Sing Your Praises

We are amazing people. We do fabulous things. We create, cook, design. We play sports. We exercise. Socialize. Relax.

We are mothers, fathers, sisters, brothers, aunts, uncles. We are good friends. We are loyal to a fault. We take care of others. We offer emotional and financial support.

However, no matter how wonderful we are, we don’t sing our own praises. We sit back and wait for others to…

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#Connecting thoughts #prompt #wriiting about self #Writer&039;s prompt #Writing praise #Writing prompt

It's the Little Things

Latte with art from Javista It’s the little things, like avocado toast and lattes from Javista. It’s the big things too, like friends telling you they appreciate the work that you are doing, and they want to see you be successful in your journey. Out of nowhere yesterday, one of my friends sent me this message on chat: “My nigga, i just needed to take a quick second out my day to reaffirm that i…