#yap-esty

[itsyamajesty]

I don't think I'm gonna draw it but has anyone done like.

You know how Salt and Almond have the same VA.

White Lily has Salt tied up and is like "lets see who you REALLY are."

Takes of the helmet and its Almond

[itsyamajesty]

There's no way to get on/off my kingdom's Eternal Sugar island without going over water tiles or being placed there, so I gave Elder Faerie his daughter since he was alone with Cream Ferret

I think Sugarfly told him what happened and there is now a murder in planning

Kinda reminds me off the time Elder Faerie was in his own area, and all the Cookies I dropped by him immediately left. When I came back after afk-ing, Red Omanthus was with him, but started leaving. But then they actually walked through half of my kingdom together and that was nice to see

I love imposing character on the overworld cookies, specifically my Elder Faerie

[itsyamajesty]

Rumi is Ambush

If Zoey is support

Edit: Ok Ranged, good I'm paranoid forever

Saja boys hair made of soda omg

[itsyamajesty]

ok this kinda goes against my like... "content philosophy" but I'm both tired of CRK while also having an AU idea I kinda like so. Basically deciding which is stronger through yapping.

This is a "interest check". If people like the idea and it's actually original, I'll try to cook.

Very concept so:

Idea is that it's mostly canon until Beast-Yeast. Golden Cheese ends up getting Burning Spice's piece of the souljam and ends up completing the Virtue of Change. But when she sees how the other Ancients ended up, they've been corrupted. Along with White Lily being Dark Enchantress just hitting her a lot harder, she decides "fuck character development, return to virtual world" but not just the old golden city. Using her new power (plus whatever plot stuff, I'm thinking she gets the other souljams) she creates a new virtual world while wiping the minds of the people she drags there in order to create a perfect world. Including the Ancients (minus White Lily) and the Beasts (minus Burning Spice). I imagine she also brings some characters back from the dead cause, well, virtual world. A sorta sandbox with characters inside the simulation living their new fantasy or realizing it's nature as such, with a pinch of those on the outside trying to get through to it or survive DE because she is still out there.

Again, heavy concept interest check sorta thing.

Edit: eh maybe I'll make concepts and do an interest check off that

[itsyamajesty]

I am going to explode

I'm not gonna say any spoilers I don't KNOW what to say.

I don't even know what reaction image to use just.

Holy shit.

[itsyamajesty]

I'd make art if I wasn't planning on drawing Pressure OCs

Please stop aura farming during someone else's update Salt-

Also I was a SILENT Silent Salt wisher but like. His voice is pretty good. I was hoping that Silent Salt's voice would at least be quiet/a whisper as a sort of compromise (but also it could sound pretty cool), but this is fine

[itsyamajesty]

Holy shit Doughael can't enjoy their own update

First they die faster than even Elder Faerie does then they keep stacking up Silent Salt news a decent bit before that update, like come on

(not saying I'm not excited for Salt- I do have Rising Charcoal to start actually writing instead of "start→???→cool thing→???→end" but come on- give Doughael more than 2 seconds)

[itsyamajesty]

How would you rewrite Beast Yeast? Ive just kinda been asking this to some other creators who made a rewrite-

Well I ain't exactly a rewriter. Not even a good writer honestly. My only AU only has chapters 1 and 2 happen that is the closest I get (and that's more for AU plot than "oh I hate Beast Yeast") but I guess (in vague order kinda)

• I'm fine with Elder Faerie dying, but make him more than a plot device please.

• Maybe change the order of the Beasts around? Probably keep Mystic Flour first and Silent Salt last, but maybe switch the other 3 to Eternal Sugar, Burning Spice, then Shadow Milk. I don't know how to explain why I think that could be good hence the maybe. Its generally fine how it is.

• Actually have Dark Choco and Cacao properly reunite at some point. I'm fine with it being in the epilogue. Ideally this goes for Tiger and Hollyberry as well.

• Change the pacing of Ch 11-12. Spread the lore dump between the two episodes, especially if it's out of order or missing details initially to invite theorizing. I feel like we were given so much in Chapter 11 that 12 was kinda barren in comparison.

• Either make the legendaries more important to Beast Yeast or cut them from the final chapters. It makes sense for them to intervene in universe, but it feels forced (especially when Millennial's event was right before the final chapters) and a bit ex-machina-y in Ch 14 specifically.

• This is technically apart of the point above but forget about Sugar Swan. Also make Sugar Swan and Black Sugar Swan proper seperate characters like what are we doing.

• Keep avatar of destiny out of the plot or make them more important to the Beast Yeast. One side story before Ch 11 and 12 does not do enough for me. Beast Yeast needs to stop cramming stuff in, one side story does not count.

• I don't know how, but make better use out of Ch 13 and 14. Chapter 13 didn't feel like much and Chapter 14 was trying to do too much when only the last few cutscenes were interesting to me.

• Use the Ultimate Cookie more. I dunno, I was expecting more than a few cutscenes from them.

• Have White Lily and Dark Enchantress (and if you're really committed to it, AOD) fuse to recomplete White Lily with a hopeful message about self-improvement or something. If people are willing to redeem the beasts, DE shouldn't be off the table either.

Again I don't actually know how to write things but you ask so I answer. Also this isn't necessarily everything, it's just what I could think of without thinking too much. I generally didn't mind Beast Yeast's flaws until Chapters 11 onward.

Edit: Oh yeah, let Black Raisin and Strawberry Crepe be apart of Ch 7 and 8. I am forgetting something else but forgetting something I'm forgetting.