Oh but, these only count if we’re not discussing betty being a flawless character. Remember people say she’s perfect and a mary sue, so these 3 instances did not happen at all just so they can’t be proven wrong.
Camilaart
So....I wanna talk about this for like the half hour I take to write and post these things.
To Define a Mary Sue, to begin: Mar·y Sue, noun, (originally in fan fiction) a type of female character who is depicted as unrealistically lacking in flaws or weaknesses.
Just on this definition we have problems. But let’s go with my own definition of a Mary Sue. A normal character acts on the world, a Mary Sue is acted upon by the world, inevitably to their benefit.
With these two definitions in mind, let’s begin. Oh yeah and heavy spoilers.
So the first moment that gives people this idea is inevitably her (actual) introduction. You know, when she shishkabobs Sans. At first, yeah it kinda seems that way, she steps in like ‘Yo what up?’ and murders the....second strongest character from the Underground? I think? With ease. But I can explain this two ways, if you prefer. The first is in-universe: Betty laid a trap that they fell for, a carefully planned manipulation to try and obtain Asriel’s soul...or probably just A soul. The second is out of universe and a concept most works use called ‘Beginner’s Luck.’ that is ‘A character who has only just appeared will do far better than later on to make them seem credible.’ Or I guess in this case a credible threat.
The second is her defeat of Gaster, and survival of the eradication machine. This is probably the most credible point? She basically just by luck happens to snag a soul and get enough power to turn the tides. Sorry Camilla I can’t defend this moment MUUUUCH. BUT Storyline wise if it ended here that’d be kinda a boring as all hell story soooo....Though I am curious myself how, if her shell is human, she did survive the eradication machine. Maybe I’m forgetting a detail.
I don’t need to talk about the Undyne fight....like at all. It’s a good 5 minutes of Betty NOT being a mary sue to the absolute limit. She gets her face pounded into burger meat. She gets DUNKED harder than Darius could ever dream (god I’m a nerd). I have a thousand euphemisms for Undyne giving Betty a proverbial spear bukkake session. I just wanted to use some of them. Even when she manages to survive by getting that hate vial, that was still set up as an option she had that she took from Jessica. (I was thinking Rachel for like half a minute for some reason, I should stop doing these at like 4 am) Her escape from Undyne is a bit confuzzling but you can just go back to storyline wise it being uninteresting. (To most people, personally Undyne breaking her in half would’ve been fine with me)
The next one is prooooobably her beating Asriel in a manner of seconds, and well...he is a kid. I doubt he used his infinite power to train himself in sword-play. He didn’t have the millions of resets Frisk did to get used to fighting, or even get used to fighting in this new body. (After he’s possessed by hate I’m assuming he’s just taking pointers from Betty or somefin) And then we have the second time where Betty gets disarmed, this time far more literally, so that’s where my defense can stop. Her getting away after Sans is freed I just attribute to the aspect of Fear being amazing at running away...actually that makes a lot of sense for her getting away from Undyne too.
Her fight against Mettaton is more just her being strong. Mettaton isn’t used to fighting and experience just wins out. And then when everyone arrives she takes a good few minutes to scare the piss out of the audience and declare her plans for the world that make me guess she doesn’t know that killing Chara will just sorta, blip everything out of existence. Also do they not have like magical nukes? Or Like anti-magic materials? There’s so much about this world I wanna explore. IM GETTING OFF TOPIC AHHHHHH Anyway yeah that’s my summation of why Betty isn’t a Mary Sue. In any case above the situations are borne of her own plots or her abilities. She even gets thrown into an industrial fan by Undyne to really hammer home how not a mary sue she is. She gets blue screened by a fish-shaped virus. She gets microwaved on high for 6 minutes.
Alright I’m done. I doubt this’ll convince anyone but I have nothing better to do at 4 am so- I just noticed I totally just left the definitions I gave behind in the dust, I guess they’re more comparison pieces then? Well what’evs. I can make a more concise one tomorrow if anyone wants. I’ll probably start posting actual content I’ve made myself rather than making theories about something I could never hope to match the quality of. Now I’ve made myself sad. Gnight!












