Hey guys! I have a little question to You. Here it is! The fragment of my friends story, i tried to translate it to english, but... ya know it's not my native lango so there are lots of mistakes. Please, if U have moment read this short fragment and give me some opinion. I will really appreciate that. And if U liked this I'll give U more! Anyway, just enjoy!
By opening the gates of hell, starting everything.
Carl ran one of severed underground tunnels in the suburbs of Brownhood. He was a tall dark haired guy with blue eyes. He belonged to the Inquisition, which aims was to maintain the world under control and prevent chaos which endanger it. This organization existed for a long time, but not in its present form. The world is not populated only by the people. The barrier between heaven, hell and earth has faded centuries ago, making the angels and demons could get into the world of mortals. After this event hybrids appeared, combining the essence of blood of the two races. Carl was one of them. Inquisitor jumped on the track and moved into the tunnel. He was here for one purpose. He have to check the tip, given to him by the informers. A dangerous criminal of the first category was near. In addition, Carl had a personal cause to him. Usually white, but now dirty by mess from walls Inquisitorial outfit had many golden ornaments, such as buttons or threads on the edges of the material. The uniform composed of jacket, which were dressed belt and tactical vest. Under the white material a whole were located Kevlar plates. Usually uniform was customized by the user, but Carl do not toyed with anything like that. It remained a standard look a whole white pants and assault shoes, despite the lack of their practicality, do not put him off it. Although the uniform that he was wearing, was rather for the purpose of presentation than combat. The clue was too sure and too important. Carl steps echoed down the tunnel.
In the end, he was on the right platform. Everything was overgrown, cobwebs where stretched across the ceiling, cracked tiles and old posters on the remaining four columns. Stairs leading to the surface, to the abandoned suburbs were barred, but Carl felt that he is not alone in this abandoned tunnels.
With one leap he jumped from the tracks to the platform. Hybrids greatly exceed people physically. Strength, endurance, reflex, and even lifespan. By this they have many enemies, such as, for example, the Brotherhood who does not respect Them. This organization moved racism to the whole new level. Carl passed the first column. He made eye contact with somebody. Just ten meters away had been his goal, a man much younger than him, with an average build. Long brown hair in chaos, brown eyes full of contempt. He was wearing a black leather coat, almost reaching the ground and the usual jeans and boots. On his chest he wore a plain white shirt contrasted with the rest perfectly on it presented a silver amulet, but at this distance even Carl could not see the details. On the back he wore a quite sizeable sword with a wide and long blade. The handle was simple, and just under the blade was a cavity in the shape of a diamond with a red stone on the bottom.
- So, however here you are - Carl said, leaning one hand on his hip and the other improving hair.
- Indeed. I was hoping you were coming - he replied, without leaving sight of the inquisitor.
- Where You were hiding all the time? Truly admirable. Dad and mom would be so proud ...if they could live! - Carl laughed at the boy's face which was covered in anger - What's up Dante ?! So much time have you been hiding, ? Seven years is very long . Later it was about you very loudly. In particular, a year later, as Ravenwings were sent to the land of their ancestors. We both know that you have the finger in this pie! Joffrey was not happy!
- Yes, yes, yes. After the whole incident once again you disappeared, but from what I know you were all alone. You don't keep an eye on them. And alone right now you will die! - Shouted Carl, in one motion he pulled the Magnum. The bullet cross through the air, a few inches past from the face of Dante. This cold-blooded criminal dodged the shot - not bad!
- I'll kill you like a dog! - Shouted criminal. One motion by pulling the sword from the back. Weapon held on the mantle through sewed in it circle, which magically kept a sword.
Dante leaped forward, avoiding the next bullet. The third shot stopped away with the sword. Seeing this, Carl threw the gun and reached for their thermal blade. The weapon was one of the top technological developments. The blade was extremely sharp, and the heat system was able to _ raise the temperature of the blade to such an extent that without anything cut metal. Thermal sword, more like a cutlass, when the handle trigger placed responsible for all the heating apparatus. More than that inside it was a container containing a load where the energy was responsible for the entire process. After a while, the two blades met, likewise hateful glances. Criminal in one motion pushed the enemy from yourself and attacked , but Carl beat the strike with his blade.
- And you call yourself a demon hunter?! - Mocked Inquisitor- My grandmother fights better! Nelia would be angry, that I killed you! - Carl jumped back and then with a quick movement of the finger drew a pentagram in front of him - Thou has created the earth, Support me! - Magic spell, hidden in plain sentence, triggered power. Pentagram fired stone spike of with intimidating speed and pointed arrowhead.
Dante did not wait long, Cerberus took the thigh. Black three-barreled shotgun, having a hellish past. Cursed weapons fire burst from all the barrels, thereby turning a stone projectile in a pile of gravel. Carl like the lightning attacked, the blade hit the Cerberus, the hunter had used to block. With the other hand made the attack, Inquisitor expecting this, jumped to the side. The blade broke down only a few plates at the site of impact.
- Asking for the grace of earth! To bring for you death! - Another stone arrowheads cut the air. Dante raised his right hand, focusing his will. Even through the glove and leather jacket, red light shone. Between the criminal and the bullet the field appeared. Crimson pentagram surrounded by all the other symbols from the Chinese characters to the glyphs. The missile struck, smashing up formed field - Not bad. - Carl added, moving to attack again.
Thermal blade sliced through the air, hitting the pillar and greatly damaging it. Inquisitor was surprised. Moment ago his target was in front of him. He could not just disappeareven for this speed hybrid was unusual. Blade suddenly ran over his back, blood gushed, covering part of the ceiling. Carl attacked with a half-turn, but the blade hit the the blade of the opponent. The first thing that surprised Inquisitor, the current appearance of Dante's sword. Blood dripped on it, but against the laws of gravity. Instead of the ground, crawled toward the socket on the handle. More than this, on the blade as if something was hopping. Carl seemed that these are small, black lightning bolts, but before he had time to look at or respond, Dante took a step back, attacking from above. Carls body has been cut on a slant from shoulder to waist.
- Do not worry about your boss as soon as soon as possible, he'll join you. - Dante said after the blow.
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