Romeo and Juliet Evaluation
Shakespeare and Commedia Dell’Arte are two very different styles but ones that do share some similarities. Commedia Dell’Arte is all comedy whereas Shakespeare did both comedy and tragedy.
Commedia Dell’Arte is very over-the-top with gestures, voice and emotions. Commedia Dell’Arte made use of the seven levels of tension. And in those levels there were levels of how intense the emotion was. In Commedia the intensity of these emotions has to be very high for every emotion, there are no small emotions or gestures in Commedia Dell’Arte. The original Commedia troupes would have done shows mostly around improvisation. They had rehearsed lazzis where a certain thing would happen or a certain thing that a character would do such as the master and servant chair lazzi where the master is commanding their servant to find the perfect spot for their chair outdoors. The troupes would go on stage and be told what the story is and have to improvise it on the spot. Servants never do their jobs right either because they are stupid, don’t understand or just can’t be bothered to do it in the first place. Emotions of these servants can change very quickly which is very demanding on the actor as they have to be able to switch between emotions while constantly keeping a high amount of energy all the way through. If anybody on stage wasn’t giving enough energy then it makes the performance look unprofessional and boring which means the audience loses interest. Mime was also sometimes mixed in with Commedia with either no speech or very little speech or just simple noises. Commedia focussed more on the physical aspects of the body rather than the face; this is why every actor would wear a mask or have face paint. Their facial expressions were set in stone based on their character’s mask. Before the actor puts on the mask they have to pull the expression on the mask and keep it even when the mask is on. Pulling the same facial expression allows you to get into their character and holding this facial expression helps to hold the character. Because the masks covered the faces the facial expressions underneath the mask were mostly hidden so the actor has to focus on what their body is doing not what their face is doing.
Melodrama takes a lot from Commedia Dell’Arte such as the over-the-top gestures and body language as well as the difference in class, servant and master. Melodrama adds back in the facial expressions and so the actors do not wear masks (unless it is part of their character). Melodrama still focuses on the physical movements but with the addition of facial expressions. Both their faces and gestures had to be over-the-top. Character voices were also exaggerated and sometimes stereotypical which is something that Melodrama has in common with Commedia Dell’Arte; Commedia Dell’Arte was a type of comedy that would use politics and stereotypes as a basis for its comedy. For example, in Melodrama the villain would usually sound very evil and have an evil laugh that they would always do. Each character would have their own thing they would do to define them as that character. Commedia Dell’Arte also made use of this.
Shakespeare takes the big gestures from Melodrama and Commedia Dell’Arte because the audience had to understand the play and this was done through gestures more than the words they were saying, although the words are still important. Shakespeare would relate more closely to Melodrama because the gestures were not quite as big as Commedia Dell’Arte ones because Commedia was all about comedy whereas Shakespeare’s play were more serious.
In Romeo and Juliet, we all generally worked well as a team. There were times where we all needed to be more professional but times where we all worked very well as a team. There were people in the group that hadn’t learned their lines and this slowed down the overall process and left us with less time to go through the piece and polish things off. But in the end, we did all work together as a group and solve all the problems with the performance including learning the lines and it meant that the performance turned out pretty good in the end. Whenever I could, I asked if anybody else needed help with things such as setting up the staging, helping learn lines or going through blocking. I was always obliged to help. Personally, I stayed pretty well concentrated and focussed in rehearsals and there were only some times where I lost focus but when it came to me needing to focus to do a scene I always got back on track and stayed focussed throughout the whole blocking process. When it came to auditioning for the role I prepared a short piece from Act 2, Scene 2 which is the famous balcony scene between Romeo and Juliet. I asked another actor who was auditioning if they wanted to do a duologue, which the director allows, and they said they wanted to. So we helped each other with learning the lines and preparing for the audition. I did struggle with the lines and didn’t spend enough time going over them which meant I was nervous in the audition which caused me to forget my lines because I wasn’t confident enough with them; that let my audition down.
If I had more time I would work more on using more gestures and going through every line and finding a gesture that I could do that would help to get what I’m saying across to the audience. As a group, we would all spend more time rehearsing and polishing scenes off so that we would be more confident with all of our lines and scenes and cleaning up some areas of weakness such as the ball scene. In that scene we had many issues such as not being in time and actors not projecting enough over the ball music. The last thing I would spend more time working on is the emotion in my voice. I would spend more time getting into character and the feelings that my character would be feeling and then using that emotion to go through my monologues. I did do some of this but if I had more time I would spend even more time doing it and that would make my character more believable. In the next project I will push myself and make my performance more interesting by using more emotion memory and gestures. Using both of these things are very good ways to make my individual performance much better and entertaining. I will also push myself to try new things such as singing.
The target audience for our play was everybody who was interested in Shakespeare, from people at school who are starting to learn about it up to adults who may or may not have seen a Shakespeare play before. There was no explicit content or gore so this play would suit a wide range of people. Our audience did enjoy the performance overall. There were just little problems that needed working on such as entering at the right time, remembering cues and being confident with lines. Other than that, the blocking and stage combat were very interesting and the venue added to the overall immersion of the piece.
Strengths:
Projection – I found my projection was quite good and the audience could easily hear me over the noises such as birds and the wind.
Lines – I was good at remembering my lines and at one moment where I forgot what line came next I remembered a couple lines ahead and carried on from there which still worked and got the important information across to the audience.
Emphasis – I emphasised certain important words so that the audience think about those words more. For example, I exaggerate the word ‘deep’ in the line ‘adding to clouds more clouds with his deep sighs’. It stresses just how affected and sad Romeo is.
Tension – I showed clear tension during my fight scene and it was very clear that I hated Lord Capulet and that I was very angry and wanted to kill him. I felt the tension in my hands and with the adrenaline we both used a lot of energy for the stage combat.
Etiquette – With Lady Montague we showed clear etiquette. She had her hand on my hand and I always led and was in control. During those times the men were in control and always led.
Status & Posture – I clearly showed my status through my posture and body language. It was very clear to the audience, based on their feedback, that I was very upper-class and full of myself and in control. I barely ever looked at Lady Montague and constantly had my back straight, chest pushed out and chin up. It was clear I was important and the leader of the family.
Weaknesses:
Emotion – My emotions were clear but I felt they needed to be much stronger especially at the end. I felt I needed to show much more sadness in my last scene because my character finds out so much bad news: Lady Montague dead, Romeo dead and that Romeo married Juliet. For example, I could have tried to cry or kiss Romeo’s forehead. During the time it takes to walk onto stage I could used more emotion memory to get into the feelings my character would have felt and shown this emotion through my voice and body.
Rhythm & pace – I felt that sometimes I spoke a little too fast for the audience to try and make sense of what I’m saying. I think I needed to slow down a bit to allow time for the audience to take in the important parts of what I’m saying before I say the next bit.
Iambic pentameter – I could have tried to make use of iambic pentameter rather than only emphasising certain words to see if it would have worked better.
Gestures – I could have used more over-the-top gestures and thought about one or two gestures to go with each line I’m saying to help the audience to understand what I’m saying. I’m giving the audience important elements of the plot so it’s important they understand.













