Experiment:Â âGunsâ
A quick little experiment on plot pacing and research...
There was a soft clicking echoing in the hallway as a pair of fox paws walked its length. The tile floors and concrete walls did little to soften the resounding tic-tic-tic as the fox continued on his journey towards the steel door at the end of the hall.
A loud CLANGÂ rang through the once-empty room as the steel door fell back into its resting position. The fox winced softly at the grating sound as he was taking off his blazer, tossing it onto a nearby chair, metal-rimmed buttons connecting with the steel to create small tings as the coat folded over the back haphazardly. Before the blazer had hit the chair, the fox was already rolling up the cuffs of his shirt, the folded fabric staying put just below his elbows. The foxâs head shook a bit as the tie that had been around his neck was loosened and the constricting top button of the shirt was undone. A relieved sigh broke the silence, a deep breath following in its path.
There was a small clatter as the previously untouched rifle left the top of the table, coming to rest in the foxâs paws. Big, hazel eyes inspected the common firearm, the title AR-15 stamped into the metal receiver. The bolt was opened, cleared, and closed in a matter of seconds before the magazine was released. Another sigh. Eyes darted around the room, ending their movement at the table. 5.56mm the box read, the cartridges visible as the top of the box had been ripped open, likely without care by the looks of it.
A new sound filled the room, that of magazines being filled, six if anyone had been counting. As the final magazine was topped off, it wasnât set onto the table like the others. Rather, it found itâs way back into the rifle. The rest of the magazines were slipped between the foxâs belt and pants, ready for later use. The lucky magazine that had been put into the gun lost a cartridge as it was chambered into the rifle, a quick, pleasing symphony of clicks and slides as the cartridge was forced into its new, temporary home.
The fox looked across the room to the only other door: another steel barrier, but this door was banged up so bad, one could only imagine what might have caused it. A discordant groaning slipped through the spaces between the door and its frame, the hinges failing at their job to hold the steel in its intended position.
Deep breaths. Tic-tacking of nails on tile. A lung-filling breath. A large THUD against steel. A massive grunt from exertion of force. Hinges breaking. Steel hitting ground. Heads turning. Dust settling. Loud groaning.
The stock flew into the foxâs shoulder, eyes focusing down the sights that protruded above the barrel. A soft click went unrecognized as the safety was disengaged. One more breath in, this time held as his focus solidified. Another click, this time coming from the complete pull of the rifleâs trigger. The firing pin slammed into the cartridgeâs primer, the following combustion of the lead styphnate igniting the gunpowder. The bullet met the air, slamming full force into the head of the reanimated office intern. As the body hit the floor, the foxâs shoulder took the resulting recoil, the casing from the spent cartridge falling past it. Another cartridge was chambered, the bolt was shut, and the barrel was pointed towards the next groaning, undead victim.










