GodBaldur77

[77god77]

Looking for beta reader.

Hello writers.

I am a new fanfic writer who recently made a story called Fate/A Demon Promise it a crossover between Black and the Fate series. The premise is that five month after the Spade arc Asta get teleported to Fate/apocrypha and he now have to win the war to eventually go back home. Right now the story Have three chapter and I'm just finish with the three draft of fourth chapter and I need help with it because it the first major battle in my story. So if someone can proofread my story see if anything wrong like plot issues, pacing stuff like that and someone I can bounce Ideas from will be really great too.

[77god77]

Fate/ A Demon Promise (on Wattpad) https://www.wattpad.com/story/402745177-fate-a-demon-promise?utm_source=web&utm_medium=tumblr&utm_content=share_myworks&wp_uname=kingboo999 Five months after the defeat of the dark triad and the king of devils, Luifero. Asta, the Anti-Magic Knight, while training found a cave in the forest near his hideout. Going into the cave he found a portal and after an incident happened the portal goes haywire, sucking him in it and sending him to another world much different then his own where a silent war was happening, now he has to find a way to win the war and to get back home. Will he be able to do it, or will his spirit be broken in the face of absolute destruction? (I don't owned the rights to the character in this story. both of these series are own by their respective creators.)