How’s Spotteddusk’s relationship with Firepaw?
I didn't like how Forepaw's relationship with Spottedleaf was written in the original, but I'm still working on rewriting it because I only really wanted this story to centre around Spottedleaf's book, bluestars, and Crookedstar's because they're all somewhat connected, but if I ever get that far, I suppose I'd make them have more of a sibling relationship.










