I FOUND YOU. Y'know, when your fanfic was still incomplete, I was left like a dog with rabies, trying to bite everything because wdym you just left it there. I dropped everything. And then when I came back, IT WAS COMPLETE! I AM IN HEAVEN. I am taking it slow. One chapter a day. Because my heart CANNOT take me binge reading everything all at once.
I need to know, what was your inspiration? Do you really think Stoick is just as bad as a father as he is? How do you write like you? Do you have any tips on how to write fanfics for new HTTYD fans?
Hi there! sorry for the late reply, I haven't checked this account in a few days. I'm so glad you enjoy the fic! Just so you know, the story's not over yet ;) the first sequel is underway now!
As for my inspiration: there was another fic (that I have since lost, if anyone knows which one it is please let me know) where Hiccup had left Berk and ended up with Viggo years later, and Viggo asked him to come along to convince another tribe to stop hurting dragons without telling Hiccup that it was Berk. Berk, unbeknownst to Hiccup, believed that Hiccup was dead.
I was inspired by the basic concept of Hiccup leaving Berk and them thinking he was dead without him realizing it at first, and then him ending up with Viggo down the line. The rest just kind of came to me like a vision from an angry god. I texted my lovely beta @shire-baird (who puts up with so much shit from me, bless her) for several hours in the middle of the night about the concept. Little things changed between the original concept and the final result, but the core of it stayed intact.
In terms of Stoick, that's a complicated answer. Do I think he's a good father? Absolutely not. It's a miracle (and, let's be real, probably self worth issues) that Hiccup ever forgave him. Do I think he was as outright neglectful as he is in the fic? Probably not. But he easily could have been. A lot of this fic boils down to "what would have happened if people made slightly different choices?" and all of those choices lead back to Stoick completely checking out of fatherhood. This led to Hiccup leaving, leaving Stoick, in turn, to become even more bitter and more stubborn.
As for how I write, honestly, my biggest piece of advice is to let the characters feel what they feel. My writing is very character driven, and I've described my process multiple times as 'X character grabbed me by the shirt and dragged me along'. For example, Viggo was originally not the simp to end all simps, but when I was writing the first chapter he decided that's how he wanted to be written and I didn't fight him on it. The Gobber Interlude was originally going to be a single scene in 4 that made up a chapter, and then he dragged me along for 14k instead.
As a writer, your job is to make a story the reader gives a shit about, and enough of a shit about to keep reading. The best way to do that is to let emotion drive the story. How do your characters feel about any given event? How does that feeling drive their actions? The most simple and boring plot in the world can be a fantastic read if the characters are good enough.
Overall, my biggest advice for new fanfic authors is to write whatever the hell you want to. This is your fic, and it is, by definition, a passion project, a labor of love. Don't let comments (or lack thereof) discourage you! (On my old fanfiction.net account, someone once told me my writing 'read like the cliff notes in a drug addicts notebook.' Shitty attitude towards those struggling with addiction aside, the point is, all your favorite authors have had negative reviews.) This is your story, and you don't have to change it for anyone. If someone doesn't like the format, or how you portray a character, then they can open a doc and write something themselves.
Don't motivate yourself with the words of others. do it for you, and no one else. That's how all my best fics are written, and that's how I started actually finishing fics: by caring less about what others wanted my fic to be and just writing it for myself. It feels like much less of a chore that way. And it should never be a chore, because fandom is a space of passion for the source material, not a 9-5.
Also, this might sound weird, but if you want natural sounding dialogue, try saying it out loud! It will be a lot more obvious that something doesn't sound like anything a real person would say if you try saying it out loud and it doesn't sound right.
I hope this answered your questions, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!