[cloudtalker]

been writing something for class-

wet socks all in knots

cus babies been cryin’ since 3’o clock

back doors nailed up with boards

runnin’ away could never be a cure

I’ll find you, remind you 

I know some days feel brand new 

I’ll find you, remind you

brown locks, bleached from the top

what you say could never make her stop

[cloudtalker]

hi. PLS give me any kind of feedback, critism, or opinions on my writing. this is a song I’ve been working on, and would deeply appreciate any comments, asks, or replies!!!

verse 1

when I get dressed I think of you

thread by thread

and what we’ve been through

each stitch and seam

verse 2

a leather back

she stands sturdy

you think shes tough

does she even bleed

chorus

keep using it to cover up everything

my skin is thick as threads

keep using it to cover up everything