Laidback Hole-in-the-Wall
Breezy Coffee Shop is the definition of a hole-in-the-wall coffee shop. To find other coffee shops in my local area, Iâve relied on internet research, but Breezyâs did not appear on any of my search results, instead a friend told me that I needed to check this place out. This coffee shop located on 3rd Street and 8th Avenue South, has a high-top bar for community seating, two-seater tables, and a couch area in the back. Also, on those sunny days when you want to sit outside, there are a variety of outdoor seating. Â For customers who are wanting to hangout and just grab a regular cup of coffee, like me, they have a variety of mugs that you can choose from to grab your own, unlimited cup of coffee. Breezyâs Coffee Shop definitely incorporates Jacksonville Beachâs community and beach vibe. There are a variety of decorations around the shop, and the light blue walls offer a comfortable, casual feeling. Since this coffee shop sits on the beachside of 3rd Street, it is easily accessible for a quick treat and offers a variety of food and beverages for coffee and non-coffee lovers.
Since one of the questions on the oral exam was about the four Câs of copyediting, âclarity, coherency, consistency, and correctnessâ, I decided to look back into the four Câs and apply them to my last entry (Einsohn 3). I have tried to apply clarity and coherency to my entry by clearly describing where Breezyâs is located, and what the shop looks like. The correctness of my entry can be seen with no errors in grammar or punctuation. I tried to correctly place my commas within the entry, and use hyphens when needing to tie words together. Overall, the consistency of my entry can be compared to my other entries. Throughout this blog, I have tried to focus on where each coffee shop is located, what the coffee shop looks or feels like, and how the options are for customers.











