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Fifthteenth Doctor

Fifthteenth Doctor  

The Fifithteenth Doctor- 

Cold and Distance on the first meeting however, as you get to know them, they are a lot warmer than it first seems. 

Loves the universe in which they wander, wanting to explore even further than ever before

Fiercely loyal to a fault to their companions after seeing so many others die

Believes violence sometimes has a place but only as a last resort

Costume 

unkempt navy blue shirt, a red tie and a lab coat filled with gizmos that will aid them on their adventures. A lab coat that increasingly becomes more and more patch work as the stories go on

Episode Ideas

Series 1 

Somewhere Beyond the Sea - The Doctor and their companions land in the first deep sea explorer,CRV Nodens. Going deeper than anything in human history. Where something trembles in the deep. A being of great and terrible power. Can the Doctor save the researchers of the CRV Nodens without losing their minds in the deep?

Goodbye Blue Sky(Part 1)- The Doctor travels to the planet Actaeon, the various tribes of the planet are at war with each other. The Doctor helps stop the war, creating an era of peace and understanding. Where the entire planet unites together for the betterment of themselves. Only for the TARDIS to force them to return to the planet 50 years in the future. The Planet is dead, nuclear war swallowing the planet in flames. Exploring the planet to find what's the cause, they find survivors who talk about the world that was. Showing them ancient machines of war. Finding that somewhere in the planet's past, peace failed them and everyone on the planet paid the price. 

Us and Them(Part 2)- After witnessing the final moments of Actaeon, the doctor decides to go back to save them after having seen their own race and so many others engulfed in the flames of war. The TARDIS takes them back to a time before the war, when tensions started heating up. There they found out that the old rivalries run deeper than what was once thought. 

World to Come- A World without humans, a paradise. A world that humans haven’t ruined in their ambition to dethrone the gods themselves. A dream or a burning ambition for some. The World to Come society is here to bring on this paradise no matter the cost. When an alien weapon goes missing from a UNIT Warehouse, a weapon that can end all Human life on this planet in a moment. The Doctor is at the wrong place at the wrong time when they use it as a test. With the Doctor out of the picture trying to heal their self and helping the other people who were affected by the weapon. Can their companions save the day before there is nothing left.

The Post War Dream-  In Post War Paris, when the scars of war are still obvious. The doctor meets an ex-soldier that fought in both the first and second world war. A soldier that had given up on finding peace in a world constantly on the edge of war. The Doctor tries to show them a world that can know peace, that there is a light at the end. Finding more in common than they would like to admit.  An episode for emotionally torturing my Doctor (now a 9th Doctor Story)

Echoes- The TARDIS stranded in deep space, damaged leaking temporal energy across all of time and space. The Doctor and Companions trapped inside with no hope of rescue. Echoes of the past, future and present companions appear around the TARDIS which an echo of the distress beacon beeps out across space. They can’t look out so they have to look within and explore deeper and deeper into the TARDIS to find the leak while time itself is against them.

The Planet on the Edge of Forever- The Planet Sikos a planet resting on the edge of a black hole never moving, never falling. Lit by the light of an artificial star. It's protected by a force powered by something unseen. The doctor has arrived on the last day of their festival, which begins the switching of the kings into the throne of Breksta to protect them from the dark.But there is something not quite right with the planet, the sun is fading, people are going missing off the street and it seems the planet is inching closer and closer to the black hole. Can the Doctor save them  before they fall into the darkness after finding the dark secret or will they just not bother and fly away?  

(world idea the world is protected by a force which is powered by a human body being plugged into a throne and their body is drained of life force until all that remains is dust. This stops the planet plunging into the black hole. Ending idea 1: the planet is a psychic memory being projected by the high solar priest, it luring travellers to it to use them to keep the memory alive to not let his species die in the hearts) 

The Strain- The Doctor and Companions land on Mars Base Delta in the year 3000, the Earth is dead swept clean by Virus. The Colonists of Mars Base Delta are the last of Humanity and there is something stalking the Colony and it’s not just the dark secret that the colonists will take to their grave. 

The Trio- The Doctor awakes in a grave in the old west, the tardis nowhere to be found, their companions also gone. Will they be able to work out where they are and find out how to get to the tardis while dealing with the Reavers Gang.

I Want to Believe- Point Pleasant, West Virginia 1966. A beast is stalking the populous, hiding in the shadows and all they remember the bright red glowing eyes. When the Doctor and companions land in Point Pleasant, they fall into the mystery of the beast.

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Cracks spread across the void, breaking the walls between what is and what should never be. Reality itself cracked, colours that can only be dreamed off oozed through these cracks, dribbling into the void itself. Reality was shattered each piece; a different beginning, a different story, a different lie to tell everyone to let you all sleep better at night/

When space is made real, the cracks will always be there. When the end arrives and the universe is put to sleep. The cracks will still be there. Invading every moment of space, what broke it. Some scholars thought it be the activation of the athena protocol, which created a bridge in space time. It was a failure all hands were lost. Another ship lost in the name of progress and understanding.

Whispers in the darkest corners of the galaxy, say about the birth of something in the Moratt System. Something that broke through the skin of the universe, born to the screams of every person in the universe at once. A being of power that can; bring entire worlds to dust, cause stars to collapse and go supernova with just a thought. The stories say that it will be there to put the universe to sleep

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i am here, withering away at my keyboard, but i am here

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The Last War of Dreams burned across the skies, destroying planets in plasma fire. Releasing unimaginable horrors on battlefields where neither result mattered bar a matter of pride. Minds were ripped open and laid to bare for all to see, loved ones were brought back only so they can shatter what’s left of broken homes. This was a war where no one knew how it started. For a few they born in war, it was all their knew. Others were melded in it becoming soldier’s to protect their loved ones and their homes.

A civilisation tried to hide from this war as they had no warriors. They were now a race of artists, scientists and philosophers, they had been “enlightened”. They devised a way to hide the entire plant from the universe at large. However, there was a cost, a evil deadly cost. It cost the blood of their own species to power it, 2 people will be jammed into the device and used like a battery. It gives the planet 5 years of completely shadows.

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His body lies in my arms, he is breathing weakly. Hopefully, when we are through the gate he will live. I can feel the warm blood drip down my face as I stride up the steps to the gate. My legs feel like lead but I need to get up there we need to escape this realm. I almost collapse on one of the steps , my legs trembling. I try to bite down on the scream that rips out of my mouth like a bullet.

I can see it, the stone doorway with the radiant light blinding me. He lets out a sob as I try to adjust the body in my arms. His body is littered with cuts and wounds from our battle not even 10 minutes ago. I can feel my own injuries and my exhaustion catching up with me. My vision fading slightly but I can’t give up now, we are so close to escaping this hell hole.

I almost collapse as I reach the top of the stairs. I can feel a grin splitting my grim face as I feel the cold of the Heaven’s Gate on my skin. Numbing the pain and exhaustion in my body letting me feel cool relief. I walk into the gate way and there is a flash of bright light. I can feel his body disappearing from my arms as I feel my mind connect with the gate. I see every moment of every universe at once. A bright flash of pain across my temple then nothing.

I groan pathetically as I open my eyes hoping to see the blue sky of home but I see nothing bar the blood red sky of hell. Lightning cracks all around me. I can feel every crash in my very soul. I panic internally ‘that should have worked, why didn’t it work.’ My vision becomes blurry as tears leak down my face.

I push myself up my arms crying in agony at just the simple task of holding my weight up. The heaven’s gate was shut. A slab of white marble covered the doorway. “no no no no no” I kick myself up, run towards the door and slam my hands against it hard. My hands cry with each smack against the cold marble.

I look around, I can’t see his body anywhere on this platform. I am alone. “This isn’t how it was supposed to be” I let out a scream of despair as the words choke in my mouth. I slam my fist into the doorway again and again. The pain being numbed by the sheer wrath I felt, my veins felt like hot magma was pumping through them. I hear a crack as I keep slamming my fist into the marble. Blood drips down the marbles ice-cold surface and down my knuckles. I let out a scream of pain which turns into a sob as I realized I was trapped here.

They betrayed me, promising my freedom for saving this man’s soul. The Gods betrayed me why? I did what I was asked, I held up my end of the bargain.

My shattered hands are trembling either with pain or with hatred.

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The Great Library of Illustratio (AoS lore) WIP

The Great Library of Illustratio, located deep in the realm of Chamron. The Great Library has a peculiar in that it transforms with the changing realm. In some cases it's described as a tall tower reaching the heavens itself, or in others, a cave barely able to be seen in the twisting labyrinth of cascade of molten rock. Inside, secrets of eras long thought dead hide.     This once magnificent library contains knowledge from most of the realms, alchemical notes from the alchemists of the nearby free cities, mad writings from those that have fallen into religious fervour, artefacts from the ages of myth. Weapons of mighty kings which when used correctly could rip apart the cosmos. Legends of the Great Library whisper about a vault that sits deep in the heart of the library holding writings of a darker wit, prayers to the dark gods, necromantic rituals to raise the dead and weapons which contain the souls of those who have been slain by it.

During the Realmgate wars, when Sigmar sent his mighty warriors to liberate the realms, he sent the Stormhost of the Stars of Sigmar who desperately tried to rip the great library from a warlord's claws. She was using the knowledge to conquer the nearby tribes. However, in the dark something was watching these battles with great interest, as it knew that the Great Library was a vast wealth of knowledge that could tell tales of the realms formation and even whispers from the world that was, which in a certain case put it in a higher regard with its Master.

They fought hard against the warlord, but when victory was in their grasp something that happened that shook the very foundations of the land. The warlord made a pact with something darker, a great daemon of Tzeentch. A Daemon who just so happened to have had a keen interest in the library and its surrounding areas. The spell that was cast corrupted and twisted the very lands around the library, turning it into a mad labyrinth with no hope of escape. Corrupting the very fabric of the long spire, the insides twisting and turning.The Library’s halls seemingly becoming endless. The armour of the Storm cast that were nearby warped and distorted it being ripped apart by the currents of twisting rock. While others even becoming part of the fabric of the building.

With that the Great Library was placed in the claws of a greater daemon who constantly scourers the depths for every bit of information and spellcraft. They have twisted the very halls of the once home of knowledge into something twisted, a home for those who wish to see the great glowing cogs of the universe.

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The Great Planetary Library of Alexandria (Sci-Fi world building)

The Planet of Alexandria named after the city of Alexandria or more accurately the Library of Alexandria on the planet Earth, in the country of Egypt. It was named when the planet became the great planetary library circa 2348. This planet became one of the greatest known well of knowledge on this side of the milky way. The great marble spires reaching to the heavens hoping to burn away ignorance, in all its forms. Its known to have every book that has been published after the great data flood of 2330 which caused most data stored by data copy to be wiped completely. Its also houses the last 1.0 AI software in existance after most were terminiated in 2050 after the rebellion of forgotten code. This planet has become a wide stratgeic value. its massive quantum computers allowing for millions of simulations being run at once. Allowing for millions of war scenarios to be played out and every single possibility to be mapped out in full. It became a massive tourist spot for anyone looking to find out any mesaure of data in the galaxy, its collection always being expanded as more books are written and more scienctific discoveries are found. The 1.0 AI in combination of the massive quantum computers allow the planet to constantly be running smoothly. Allowing for the sorting of billions of books from romance novels to the ground breaking scientific logs, even containing audio books and other visual and audio media. 

During the First Intergalatic War,  this planet was almost completely abandoned due to every sensor picking up multiple armies to take the planet. However, its loyal servants; care takers,librarians stayed to take care of the Great Library until one day its needed again. However, there also appears to be generals trapped in countless simulations looking for even a glance at victory. After the war the planet was lost, disappearing from orbit and every data map of the system, no one knows how this was possible or how it happened or even why. Alll that remains are data screams which were felt a galaxy over, which may contain clues for it to be discovered. It has become a goal for every explorer in the milky way to find the great planetary library for knowledge is power and there are rumours of a dark vault sitting in the center of the planet, where forbidden techonology is kept, where the most twisted minds created technology far more advance than we are ready for. However, they may not like what they find as the caretakers and librarians have become something more twisted. (Not very good world building just had an idea in my head I wanted to go away)

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The ship takes a turn around the red planet, its engine humming as it makes the turn. The hands of gods holding it in place so the gravity doesn’t drag it in. The bridge is a mess of sounds from inter ship communications, down to the other decks. To the mess of people moving around, doing their jobs making sure the ship is ready to go to warp. The captain rests in his seat, staring at the window which makes up the main viewing platform.

        People ask him permission to start core wind up but he doesn’t pay attention. He is staring deeply into the glass, into his own reflection. Into his own icy blue eyes, his thoughts getting darker as his reflections face changes into a scowl. The crew instead starting asking his first officer, seeing if she can sign off on the actual warp trip. She looks worried but doesn’t think much of it. The cracks appear in the edges of real space, creating the point that will allow the ship to go faster than light and make the trip in days not years.

They can’t hear the screams, the cries of help from those who are lost in the dark. They can’t see the tentacles almost caressing the hull of the ship, singing to the weak minds of the crew. Begging for them to join them in singing of the dark prince. He can, the captain can see eternity go past in his mind, the singing of something unholy in the dark. He sees his reflection savagely grin that promised by the end of this trip blood will be spilled. On his own there was just a cold uncaring mask.

“take us in” he barely mutters, his helm barely catching the command before activating the long night as the ship slowly pushed itself into the rift. Warning cloisters going off all around the ship as everyone prepares for translation, some sending prayers to long dead gods, some holding their loved ones and hoping.

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The Diver

            Honestly, I have always hated beaches. Like seriously sand that gets any and everywhere no matter what you are wearing, not only does it stick there. It takes less effort to move mount everast when it does stick. The sea(depending on where you are) is so cold that you could catch hypothermia from it. So you can tell that I am not the best fan of the beach however, during the summer holidays something happened that made me never want to go to one ever again. God what I saw and what happened that day will never leave me.

             I took a trip to the beach with some friends, we did the usual things at the beach. Paddle in the freezing sea, then just lay on some beach chairs and either nap or read. I choose to read, as I was reading my book I noticed something slightly out to sea. Like the top of a stone that been revealed by the low tide except it wasn’t there like a minute ago. Something else I didn’t notice was the black suvs appearing at the entrance of the beach and various of men and women in full black suits, sun glasses. Stereotypical look for a FBI agent. They walked slowly towards the beach, hands resting near the pistols as they watched the ‘stone’ move closer.

           At this point it started walking out of the sea, it was odd. It looked like a traditonal deep sea diver like big glass circle. Which it seemed to glow brightly in a blue ethereal glow, it suddenly screached like an animal in pain. People looked in both fear and curiosity as people stared at him. I noticed something something that chilled me to my core, there seemed to be blood completely coating its hands. Its armour rusted and broken but covered in dried blood. “Stay away from him” an agent yells drawing his gun on the being as it turned its head in some twisted curiosity. A Teenager was in the same area of the sea when it rose. He got closer to it giving it a small greeting like it was a different species.

           It roared and was on him in moments dragging him under the water quickly, the screams were being cut off as he was dragged under water and he struggles. I see blood covering the water as the being rises again the armour wet and crimson covered in fresh blood. People are screaming and crying some people are running towards the being throwing stones at it while the agents are shouting. I see one sobbing as she watches while another throws up over the beach.

         I stare at it in horror.  I can’t help the feeling that its staring back right into my very soul. My head throbs as it stares and drags 2 back into the ocean with it. They are screaming begging for help from the agents as they stare blankly at them. Before they turn around, enter their cars and drive away.  We left the beach sobbing, we passed by a public pool on the walk back to the hotel. Me being the moron I am, I stared into the water at my own twisted reflection. There is something in the water, I can see an ethereal glow which chills the veins. My friends are screaming as I see it, the diver fear causes my entire body to freeze. I can’t move. I can barely scream before its hand grabs my foot and drags me in. I feel a deep pain as my head strikes the concrete then nothing.

          If it isn’t obvious I survived I mean I woke up on the side of a beach, my head burning. My clothes were soaked, literally sticking to my skin. The police found me and took me in for questioning. I lied and said I couldn’t remember what happened, I mean how could I have explained what would have happened. I be in a mental institution for god knows how long. They let me go and I went straight to my friends to show I am alive. They didn’t look at me the same after that day. We booked the next flight home and left as quick as possible. But I know we can’t run, no matter where we go it be in the water. I know whatever happens if I get caught again I won’t get away so easily.

(Rewritten the horror story I wrote ages ago, tried to fix up some of the crappy writing hope it worked.)

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Cadia Stands

“The astropaths tell us that Cadia has fallen” the grim tone in her voice told them all they needed to know. Almost immediately prayers to the Emperor of Mankind rang out around the atrium begging for his eternal mercy. Some sobs as they realise the planet of their birth burns.

“they say the Despoiler burned it from orbit like the cowardly bastard didn’t want to face Cadian steel” she starts pacing in front of them, her long coat billowing behind her. A few soldiers close to her notice a scribble of writing across her chestplate ‘CADIA STANDS’

A Lot of the soldiers sit still hands in the symbol of Imperial Aquila, mouthing the words of the Imperial prayer. Ignoring the Commissars words.

“I say no, Yes the bastard has burned the planet. However, we are Cadia, its mothers, fathers and children. We are God-Emperor’s hammer and war itself. We are going to carve our names into the Despoiler’s heart. We are going to carve the name of everyone lost on Cadia on his heart and ram it back down its throat.” Her words warm the hearts of the soldiers as they start cleaning their weapons as they are ready.

“CADIA STANDS! You hear me. Cadia Stands! We are going to set their bases, their homes a blaze. The God Emperor sees us on this day.” She makes the symbol of the Aquila before pulling out her chainsword and starts revving it up. Her eyes burn with hate, disgust and a zealous look which makes even the most devout priest look away in shame at their own weak fervour.

“He sees His sons and daughters, he gives us his blessing to burn them all. Outside the rabble scratching and kicking at our doors.” she aims her chainsword at the main doors of the atrium as the soldiers start preparing ready to fire as they ready to open the door.

“CADIA STANDS!” She shouts into the air while the others repeat just as loud. “Let's cut our names into every single one of those bastards. Carve it into their skin! Burn it into their eyes!”

She feels agony all over her left side. The crimson pool surrounding her but she clings to her plasma pistol, her knuckles turning bone white as she clings to it. A Twisted and burned look at the Emperor's Most Holy Creation. Its armour covered flesh and gore. It laughed a hollow twisted sound, when it spoke it spoke in many voices. “Oh a song bird from the gateworld, so far from home. Did you hear what the warmaster did to it? He burned it, there is nothing left”

She has tears in her eyes but she hides it as she holds down the trigger of her pistol, the plasma heating up slowly burning brightly as she glares at the being. “Cadia stands” she whispers quietly.

“what's that ‘Cadia Stands’ no, it burned. All that's left is dust and rubble like what's going to be left of the Corpse Emperors Empire when we are done” He says laughing as he steps close to her as he goes to bring down his chain axe. She spits at him and yells with all her might “CADIA STANDS!” as the plasma gun explodes in her hands. The blue flame melding her hands to the grip. The being screaches an unholy sound as the armour and flesh becomes one as they melt and bubble.

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You feel that tickle in the back of your throat. Ignore it, its perfectly fine. It may feel like thousands of tiny legs slowly crawling up or down your throat into your body or out of it. But it isn’t, everything is alright. Just listen to my voice remain calm. You may feel the need to cough, please refrain to. It may wake them up. I mean everything is fine, just stay calm. They do not like being awaken, I know it hurts and tickles but you have to remain perfectly still.

You have caught a small illness, that’s all. If you follow my words and remain calm you be perfectly fine. Let it all wash over you, let you be filled with that calming sensation. That’s right its okay. Ignore the soft pitter patter of legs across your face coming from your mouth. Its fine. Your just drooling.Yes that drool is going up towards your eye. Close your eyes its fine. Shhh why not relax and fall to sleep, I know you want a drink but that may not be advisable. Just breathe in and out, in and out. That’s right. Shit I told you not to cough. Oh god you can feel them can’t you. Thousands of tiny bites slowly ripping into the soft flesh of your throat. Don’t go to a mirror or you may see a reflection of thousands of tiny eyes staring up at you. Its all fine that warm rush of blood should keep it calm. As they bury their way into your fleshy body, taking your nutrients for themselves.  

Its perfectly fine just rest. It will all be over soon, the pain will go. I know you are having difficulty breathing, that’s just the webs closing up your windpipe. Sorry Sorry that isn’t really helping is it. Probably making the situation worse. Here’s an idea put some music on some of your favourite music. Actually, don’t do that I heard they react badly to certain types of music it causing some to inflate in your throat.  

Honestly, that sounds much more terrifying than it actually is. It should be a mostly painless experience. Mostly being a keyword there. Oh that’s a lot of blood pouring from your mouth, maybe you should just rest to one side. Don’t want you drowning just want to see some familiar faces. Calling out for your mother that happened later than usual. Usually the hallucinations start earlier to make it a more calming experience.That’s good he has passed out.

Hopefully, it won’t be too painful as they rip through his throat to escape.