Don fBleach

he/him, art, comics, writing, and general nonsense

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AGRESTAL: Magic Studies Oneshot (3/3)

thanks to anyone who got through all that. I am proud of myself for actually completing a project of this size, in a reasonable timespan, but I do also see plenty of room for improvement. the delivery of key information could be clearer, and the writing and dialogue are very weak at points, but hey, I've definitely read worse.

Again, if anyone has experience creating longform comics for the internet, or just have experience in comics or writing in general, any criticism is welcome.

This is definitely not the last you will see of the AGRESTAL gang. If you would believe me this whole thang was actually the conservative, low investment ministory in the larger story i have in mind. I have gone back and forth several times on whether i want AGRESTAL to be a comic or a novel. I envision it more in my head as a comic but a full comic is a lot of work, but the final complete story would be over 20 times the length of this comic... my hubris and my sloth are battling in my head like wolves

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AGRESTAL: Magic Studies Oneshot (2/3)

obviously when you have no experience making comics you first make a one page comic to get your footing and then immediately sit down to create a 72 page "single issue" comic

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AGRESTAL: Magic Studies Oneshot (1/3) A self contained "pilot" for a larger fantasy comic story I have been developing for over a year. This is probably the most ambitious thing I have worked on, 72 total pages including cover. This was a lot of work so please enjoy. If anyone reading has experience creating or posting longform comics, any criticism is greatly appreciated.

As a "pilot" the designs of the characters, details of the story and world, and the general art style and design are subject to change for whenever i get started on the full project.

[CONTENT WARNING: lying, violence, brief depictions of war and public execution]

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Gift for @scififrenchfry, based on his DND character.

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A map I made to commemorate the end of a Legends in the Mist campaign I ran. The map shows the world the players travelled throughout the campaign.

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A short little comic testing out a design process for digital comics. Expect to see more of these guys in the future, where nothing bad will happen to them.