Fuck yeah Potter sues!

In which two girls who's names start with C and K post and complain about badly made Harry Potter OCs. You're welcome to ask us if we think your character is a sue as well! We like to think we know quite a bit about the Potterverse. Just remember not to take our advice to heart! We're just two opinions. Do take it into consideration though! SUBMIT SUES PLEASEEEEE

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This is my sisters old Harry Potter OC *from what I can remember*

Name: Sarah Riddle (Sarah btw is my sisters name)

Age: 14

Eyes: Green (but they flash red when she’s angry)

Hair: Black with red streaks (but the streaks change colour with her emotions)

Body: Tall skinny (but with double d boobs)

Sarah Riddle is of course Lord Voldemorts secret daughter. Shes an animagus who turns into a snake OR a dragon OR a pheonix OR a unicorn. Depends on what she feels like. She speaks parsletongue. Shes cold and distant to almost everyone around her. Shes half vampire. 

Lord Voldemort loves her and is very protective of her. She is his head death eater and all other death eaters fear her. She tries to escape voldemort because of reasons one day and ends up in the forbidden forest. She collapses in the forbidden forest where Hagrid finds her and takes her up to the hospital wing. Dumbledore decides to let her stay at the school as a student (because sure) but since she was never sorted she just floats between all the houses and goes where she wants.

She is of course AMAZING in every subject and soon gains the attention of Harry POtter who is deeply in love with her at first sight. She gets conflicted because she falls in love with him too but knows her father wants her to kill Harry. 

Draco treats her like a little sister. 

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I do not believe that some of these are Mary Sues or Gary Stu. I don't want to sound conceited but in RL I am beautiful, I play sports, video games and I am very smart as I got into psychology and criminology University courses, and I AM real. So characters who play quidditch, are smart and beautiful should not be called marysues.

That's your opinion. -C

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Is it Mary Sue-ish if the oc's family are rivals/enemies of a pure blood supremacist family eg. The malfoys or the lestranges ???

You should be a-ok-C

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[b][i]Name::[/i][/b] Phoenix Riddle [b][i]Nickname::[/i][/b] Nyxia [b][i]Gender::[/i][/b] Female [b][i]Age::[/i][/b] 17 [b][i]Year::[/i][/b] Sixth [b][i]Bloodtype::[/i][/b] Pure-blood [b][i]House::[/i][/b] Slytherin [b][i]Wand::[/i][/b] 6 inch Phoenix feather core Ebony [b][i]Pet::[/i][/b] A Cat named Embers [b][i]Personality::[/i][/b] She is a sweet yet calculating person, who does whatever she needs to do to get what she wants. [b][i]History::[/i][/b]She grew up in an orphanage. She learned who her family was and loved being part of the Riddle family. She didn’t care much for others until she went to Hogwarts and met a few others there. She hates muggles for the abusive upbringing they supplied her with. [b][i]Crushes/Relationships?::[/i][/b] Friend of Malfoy [b][i]Other::[/i][/b] She is one of the best secret keepers she knows. She is the Cousin of Voldemort.

[I didn’t make this sue, for the record. I found her on this site

http://www.chickensmoothie.com/ ]

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Okay.  So I read this awful sue awhile ago.  It must have been taken down though because i can’t find it anywhere.  I saved a picture though because it was just that bad.

I remember that she was attacked as a baby with the killing curse (that she somehow survived) and that’s why she has a purple eye (that she ‘s blind in) and her black streak in her hair.

She’s the illegitimate daughter of Lucius and she was taken to an orphanage and abused and eventually adopted by Lord Voldemort (???).

Her birth mother was killed by a dementor and she was obsessed with them so she was able to cast her phoenix Patronus spell in her first year (she helps Harry later).

She’s bi and dates Luna. (-_______-)

The last thing I remember is that she’s an animagus (a white wolf with the same eyes as her human form).  

All in all, awful.

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Do you still review sues here?

Of course. -C

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Want to see my intentional Sue I made out of boredom in about five minutes? (　^ω^)

Yesssssss. -C

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Bella Narcissa Malfoy Future Mrs. Potter

Oh my god, this girl. 

She’s the sister of Draco, A Deatheater, Harry Potters future waifu, Shes pregnant with mermaid/vampire twins, Shes a recolour, She is also a vampire, She really hates Ginny and is convinced she ends up with Harry instead.

Here we have why Harry should be with Bella instead of anyone else:

(( xD yes Bella my OC honestly, my OC personal because she understands him very well doesn’t go crazy fan girl over him unlike Ginny him help him cope with mum and dad death help him when he gets visions gets scared she always there no matter what she may be a malfoy deep in her heart she really loves Harry and Harry never realize how a woman like her stand in front of him no matter what she always him safe and protect him no matter what shes just sweet kind of person but she just simply lily evens version of Slytherin she stands up for bulling over Harry and she ends up Marring him having 4 kids ))

So doone

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Yay, you're back! I missed you

we missed u too omg dfbshdsbkld

-C

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How do I submit character reviews

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Zellania Andressis

Zellania Andressis

Name: Zellania Moon Andressis

(even the name sounds sueish!)

House: Gryffindor

Grades: Straight A+'s

(Straight A+'s? really?)

Age: 18 (seventh year)

(unless her birthday is on a school year or something it's all right)

Friends: Ron Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Lavender Brown, Oliver Wood, Neville Longbottom Boyfriend: Harry Potter

(Oh suuuure... the ' I'm dating a canon character' crap! uggghhh)

Bloodtype: Muggle-born

(her muggle parents must be drunk when they were naming her..)

Info: You, Zellania, are truly radiant. You are the prettiest, most powerful witch at Hogwarts.

Every single girl wants to be you. Every guy wants you. You are shy and consistent, sweet yet startling. Your boyfriend is crazy about you, Harry Potter, and you wouldn't trade him in for any boy in the world. You are te top student at Howarts, Chaser at Qudditch, and would stand a miraculous chance up against Lord Voldemort.

Every girl wants to be you? Every guy wants you?Boyfriend is crazy about you? top student? chaser?miraculous chance up against Lord Voldemort? OH MY GOD THIS IS A SUE! TOTALLY A SUE! I"M GONNA DIE NOW! BYE EVERYONE!

And, to make it all up, you have a pet unicorn named Presley,who has been with you as long as you can remember. Hermione Granger: Zellania? Oh, ZZ? Yes. She is, omigod, I cannot even pronounce the words she is so great. Like the sister I never got. I am a year older than her, 19, she is still 18, but I wouldn't mind sharing a room with her. She barley owns anything! Just Harry otter's heart, his love.

Ron Weasley: BLIMEY! SHE IS GORGEOUS! Do you SEE her hair? It's ure WHITE! And silky! You can feel the silkiness by jsut looking at it! SHES IS GORGEOUS! I WOULD KILL HARRY FOR HER!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOPPPPEEEE!!!!! RON WOULD NEVER EVER DO THAT!!!

Harry Potter: Zellania. She is my love. My burning passion. My beauty. When I first met her I was gasping for air. Our first kiss was magical. When she told me that she loved me I literally fainted. I told her she was so beautiful, songful, and she whispered in my ear: "You're my beauty...you're my song"and kissed me so feircely I fanted. Zellania, I ove you! (And I plan on proposing to her this Christmas, at the ball.

PLEEEEAAASE, SHUUUT UP!!!!! ENOUGH! THIS IS! THIS IS TOO MUCH!!!

Ginny Weasley: I hate her. I HATE HER! I HATEHERIHATEHERIHATEHERIHATEHERIHATEHATEHER!! I HATE HERSO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE IS PERFECT! Do you see the way he looks at her? The way he moves his hand and she then holds it? If Zellania moves then Harry moves, like a dance. They follow their every steps. That is love. So much love. It is powerful, and when they enter the room together, it's like the love spreads around, and soon every one is in love but me! :( *cries and runs out of the room dramatically*

this is completely out of character....

Fred and George Weasley: ZZ?! We love her! She is almost as good a prankster as us!! Quite a sneaky one. She ran all around the castle, past Filch and Mrs. Norris, as a dare, even without being invisible or using an invisibility cloak and she did it so easily! BRAVOOOOOOO!!!!!!

this is..this god-modding!

Draco Malfoy: Zellania is hawtt. To bad she is in love with Potter....the girl is sexy, don't tell Pansy. I am thinking of wasting Pansy and then slipping some Love Potion in Zellania's tea. I mean, that girl is going to fall in love with me. Tha girl has sex in her walk and her smile.

no

Pansy: She's a slut. Enough said.

exactly, Pansy.

Luna Lovegood: *smiles* ZZ is very kind. I like her. Harry and her make a perfect couple, both powerful wbeings. Potter surviving He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named and Zellania being raised by a mother dragon and then a unicorn. She's Muggle-born and after she was found in a cave in the Forrbidden Forest Hagrid starte caring for her. I love her!! ZZ is my best friend and the only one I know who can name every reason whyyou should wear your shoes to bed.

WHAT IS THIS CRAP!?RAISED BY A MOTHER DRAGON? THEN BY A UNICORN? FOUND IN A CAVE IN THE FORBIDDEN FOREST? WTF!?

TEACHERS: Albus Dumbledore: Ahh, young Zellania. She is my best studnt. My star at Hogwarts. She is a student celebrity and be far the smartest. Beats Hermione at spelling bees and is top score in all exams. Her final year at Hogwarts will be the best, I know it. I recall Harry Potter, Zellania's love, telling me that he will propose to her at the ball. A shock at first, but might as welll get the best while it's still avaliable.

DUMBLES NOOOOO.....

Professor Severus Snape: Yes, yes, Zellania. A good student. My best, of ccourse. But it might not even be her *scoffs* for all we know, they unicorn that had taken care of her and helped her with magic just simply gave her the answers!! Professor McGonagoll: Severus, come down!  UGH! Excuse his crude behavior. He is jsut upset because his student knows his own teaching better than him. No, no, Zellania ia a fabulous student. I feel so happy for Harry, I think she's the one. They are going to be in enchanted happiness togwther. Bless them.

NOW THIS IS YOUR FUTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When Christmas finally comes and you're dressed in a beautiful ballgown, white to make your eyes pop and to match your long, white silky hair. Harry puts his hand on your waist as you swat t the music, at the ball. Ginny watches with tearfull ees, no date whatsoever. He leans forward and whispers "I love you," which was quite unusual for him because he usually keeps their love private. But you lean forward and kiss him passionetly with your glossed red lips. Slowly, Harry winks at Dumbledore and Dumbledore stops the slow music, as rehearsed. "Zellania Everglade Andressis" he smiles "will you be my life? My love? My savior? My wife??" He looks at you hopefully and then you kiss him. You just do it. You kiss him and whisper "Yes, Harry Potter, yes." And for the first time, you don't care that your love with Harry is private. You get married 6 months later wearing the same dazzling ballgown you had that winter. You marry him in the field outside Hogwarts, near Hgrid's hut, and Hagird was proud. You continued to meet with all your friends. You lived with Harry outside

GOOOOOODSSS WHYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

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"Belladonna Eleanor Ariana Dumbledore was not an ordinary girl by anyone's standards. She was a witch. And not just any witch. She was the sole daughter of Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. Not only had she inherited his mind and magical talent, she had inherited her late mother's (Eleanor Maybell Ackery) good looks and charm. She was a beautiful talented young girl, with a secret. It seems she had inherited her aunt's ... mental instability. Although nowhere near the degree it affected Ariana Dumbledore, Belladonna was always a bit off. She didn't have 'attacks' but her own personality was slightly warped. As such, her father kept her close to him - she spent most, if not all, of her early years in Hogwarts." I don't know about you but this OC sounds pretty shitty already. If you want more, I can submit more

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I think I done gone and made a Mary-Sue

Okay so this is an OC I have created for a post Battle of Hogwarts roleplay.

Florence is in Auror training along with Harry and Ron...personally I think she might be a Mary Sue, not sure though lol...

BTW I'm not from South America, I'm English, from Somerset, I live in London. I didn't know there was an influx recently of exchange students in Harry Potter, I just liked the idea of her having experienced working in another ministry of magic.

Character Name: Florence Susan Diggory Sex: Female Age: 27 Birthday: 22nd December 1970 Bloodline: Muggle Member Title: Half-Blood (Pure Blood Mother, Half Blood Father). Wand: 12 inch, Apple, Unicorn Hair. Pliable. House: Ravenclaw. Ability: Dueling (Florence fought at the Battle of Hogwarts, sustaining only minor injuries, she duelled and killed a Death Eater). Charms. Spell Creation. Defence Against The Dark Arts. Healing Spells. Occupation: Auror. Former Assistant in the Department of International Magical Cooperation, assigned to the South American Ministry of Magic. Father: Mr Amos Diggory Mother: Mrs Susan Diggory Siblings: Cedric Diggory (deceased) Children: None Marital Status: Single. Pets: Tawny Owl called Prince (inherited from Cedric). Colourpoint Shorthair kitten called Biggles. Playby: Keira Knightly Strengths: Intellegent. Witty. Loyal. Loving. Inventive. Brave. Patronus: Red Squirrel Weaknesses: Pride. Secretive. Hunger for Glory. Boastful. Bogart: The dead body of her brother Cedric. Personality: Florence shares many of the same traits as her younger brother Cedric, loyal and loving. However she is also wildly inventive, experimenting on her own brand of spell creation. Florence never forgets a slight, as proud and boastful as her Father, she is an individual to have on your side, rather than set against you. History: Florence Susan Diggory is the oldest child of Amos and Susan Diggory. After leaving Hogwarts her Father Amos helped her win an appointment as a junior assistant in the Department of International Magical Cooperation, working under Barty Crouch. In 1994 Florence won the chance to work in The Ministry of Magic in South America. While living in South America, her Brother Cedric took part and was killed in the Triwizard Tournament. She was very close to her brother depsite their age gap, communicating with him with regular owls. Florence's biggest regret is that she didn't accompany her Mother and Father when they visited Hogwarts to wish Cedric good luck, before the Third Task. In the aftermath of Cedric's death Florence returned to Little Hangleton to care for her distraught Mother and Father. During this time she reconnected with her bestfriend Nymphadora Tonks. It was Tonks who planted to seed that Florence should become an Auror. However out of concern for her parents, she decided to delay her application, continuing to work at the Ministry even after Fudge had fallen. Surrounded by Death Eaters at the Ministry, Florence followed the example of Arthur Weasley and Kingsley Shaklebolt, keeping her head down, and her nose clean. Unable to cope with seeing the injustice around her everyday at the Ministry, Florence used her Father's deep depression as an excuse to gain a period of extended leave for her position. While staying in Little Hangleton, Florence was alerted by her friend Tonks of The Battle being waged at Hogwarts. Deciding that the time had finally come to avenge her brother's death, Florence disapparated to Hogwarts, where she was just too late to save Tonks from being killed by Bellatrix Lestrange. While trying to reach Bellatrix to avenge her bestfriend, Florence duelled with and killed the Death Eater Walden Mcnair. Florence stayed close to the bodies of Tonks and her husband Remus Lupin, protecting them from futher harm during the battle. Since the fall of Lord Voldermort Florence has applied to become an Auror, to the great concern of both her parents.

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Can you review this OC plz?

Hi!  I've created this OC a long time ago, and I want to know what you think of her

Name: Eliza Mallard

Age: 15

House: Hufflepuff (they get no love)

Hair color: Blonde

Eye color: grey (glasses)

Family: Sister, mom, dad

Pet: Golden tabby with white chest

Patronus: Serval

Wand: a birch wand. In length, it is twelve and three quarters inches long. It has a core of kelpie heartstring.

Quidditch: HELL NO!  She is a bit scared of heights because of a bad experience when she was young

Personality: Boisterous, troublemaker, sometimes disrespects adults, Mostly cheery

Childhood: She was a shy girl when she was in school, always shadowed by her twin sister, who was basically good in almost everything.  No, Eliza didn't become depressed, but she kept practicing the one thing she loved, juggling.  Yes, she liked to juggle while her sister sang.  But, everything changed on their 11th birthdays. (Eliza and her sister are twins)

Since their parents are wizards, they both got letters for hogwarts.  Once they got there, Eliza's sister got into the popular crowd, and they dominated the school.  It took a while, but Eliza finally found a rag-tag group that let Eliza in.  Eliza does have a crush, Paul, who actually doesn't really like her.  She is currently in her 5th year, and she sucks at astronomy and potions and is really good at transfiguration and Charms.

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(Sorry for multiple messages - Andy Prince anon again) Her wand is hornbeam with unicorn hair and patronus is a pelican, because of the legends about them being brave selfless animals.

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