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Abhorrence 1-2 world building. BobbyBoy2341 was cooking but he needs a little help in the kitchen
My first thought was to rewrite the lore documents, but I heard that is already something he's working on since the spelling and grammar is off A LOT in Abhorrence 2. Still, I fixed a few with some input by a user on Scratch regarding the original project;
Marcus Aidan - "Another day of having to babysit this dweeb. He's a good kid. I still kinda feel bad for him. He lost his father to drugs and lost his eye due to medical reasons. He can be a bit annoying sometimes, so I only do this to get money. I guess one of the things he's good at is playing 'Cops and Robbers' with me. I usually play the cop because it's fun!~"
Rylee Hamson - "Rylee was one of my bullies from school. I HATE HIM SO MUCH! He calls me slurs and says that I should 'Go back to normal'. I don't know what had gotten over me. I know I should've told a teacher, butā¦I followed him after school carrying a baseball bat. After making him chase me into the woods, I beat him. I meant to beat him up. Teach him a lesson, but I went too far. Was I blinded by rage?"
Shel Dianne. - "Hello. The name's Shel Dianne. My life is over. I have thisā¦thing inside me. The same thing that infected my mother. It's given me murderous thoughts to people who are deemed as 'sinners' that need to be 'repented'. People look at me weird, my father hates me and my mother is dead because of him. It feels like a part of me has been shattered. I feel the need to make this town pure. To rid it of its sinners. God help me.."
??? - "I've seen posters around town about this burglar who of course hasn't been caught yet. I'd be a better police officer than these worthless fucks. Anyway, one night, he broke into our house. He couldn't get far, though, as my dad shot him with his shotgun. I don't know why it felt so satisfyingā¦seeing him die for hisā¦sins."
Music Box - "My granny used to have this lovely music box before she passed. Unfortunately, my father never let me over to his house. I just hear details from my mother. Speaking of which, she brought the music box homeā¦and something with it. My mother is acting strange, and I feel the same way."
Byron Dianne - "My fatherā¦oh how I HATE him. He never cared about me. He never tolerated anything really when it came to me. When he shot and killed my mother, it broke me. He tried to explain he was 'trying to save us before it was too late' but I don't believe him. He seems scared around meā¦ Good. He should be. I'll avenge her someday."
Jeffy Hoffman - "Jeff was known as the hippie, mainly for his addiction to weed. It wouldn't be so bad if he didn't smoke it while driving. While I was walking by his house, I got this familiar rage again.. He sinned, and I must correct him. I managed to cut his breaks during the night, and the next day my action had its consequences. I felt powerful.~"
Kerim Kingley - "Kingley was the mayor of the town. Recently, he passed due to a heart disease. His son, Jim, is an egotistical who tries to win over the town to become 'heir to the throne'. Who's gonna tell him that's not how democracy works? Anyway, the only thing noteworthy I found about Kingley is that he studied the supernatural and had a close eye on my mother when she worked as a police officer 5 years back. Something is up."
Shawn Vholes - "I HATE YOU SO MUCH YOU FUCKING CHEATER!! YOU'LL PAY, YOU BASTARD!! Sorryā¦I had to get revenge. Shawn was my boyfriend. We dated for about 2 months before I found out he was cheating on me with someone else. The urge..the rageā¦it all came back. I took him to my backyard, telling him I'd be back. He didn't suspect a thing. I did come back, but with a lawnmower. I used it to run over him, tearing him to bits. He looked prettier as a mess."
Cass Dianne - "I love my uncle Cass so much! He's like a father to me at this point, way better than my actual one. My father says he's a r* and a couple months late, but I could care less! I love him all the same!"
Lavrentiy Nesto - "I woke up in a warehouse with my brother after we were walking home from school, tied up while this Russian man spoke to someone on the phone. I was terrified, thinking we were gonna be trafficked..but then the rage in me came back again. I managed to escape my restraints and ambushed him, pushing him off the ledge and falling onto the pipes, impaling him through his back. I freed my brother and we both escapedā¦"
Melanie Maddison (MY BELOVED!!) - "Another bully I had in school. She was worse, saying stuff like 'I have bigger tits' and 'At least I don't look like a wart.' I did a similar thing to what I did to Rylee with her (Me when I lie), though my urge (as I now call it) was at its worst. I kidnapped her, doing some..enjoyable stuff. I ripped out her teeth, eyes and tits. They ain't bigger than mine no more. (ref) I should feel awful, but I feel satisfied. Another sinful mortal repented." (Me when I lie 2x)
Deana Dianne - "My motherā¦my light in my worthless life. Everything was perfect before she brought in Granny's music box. It seemed to possess or influence herā¦and it's gotten to me too. She got fired from her policeman job after getting reports of acting violent towards criminals. When my father shot her, claiming it was a good thing, I didn't believe him. Even if I should. I will avenge you soon enough, mother."
Lenny Boy - "Lenny was the postman that came through our neighborhood every Tuesday. I got the feeling that something was off with him, so I decided to stalk him for a few days. I found out that he was transferring drugs to local gangs and drug dealers. Unacceptable! The neighbors dog happened to have a hatred for mailmen, so when he came by that Tuesday, I released the dog, watching it maul him to death. It was gratifying."
James Dianne - "James is my annoying little brother. I'm not sure if I should love or hate him. He's the one my dad favors. Even when I tell him that James is getting involved with the wrong people at school. Soon, he'll become a failure like my father, and I'll laugh when I stand over him."
Sammy Maddison - "The sister of the cheerleader I had repented. Her and I never really interacted until I felt the urge return again. She's been robbing stores. Of course. Luckily, with her being depressed and most likely suicidal, all I had to do was leave a few notes on her window while she slept, telling her it was her fault. A few days later there was news coverage of her suicide. I feel like she honestly wasn't worth the troubleā¦"
Mel Mcgee - "This slimeball was a truck driver who would pass by the town. He was a known racist, committing multiple hate crimes. The urge I became familiar with came back again, telling me to make him repent for his sins. I grabbed a fire axe, while he was in the bathroom and started terrorizing him. Eventually, I got bored and wedged it into his head. I wanted to do more, but his screams were too loud."
Xavier Preston - "Xavier was a student in my school who was also being bullied. I never gave him any thought until the car crash that was caused by me rigging up Jeffy's car that he witnessed. The car Jeffy crashed into was his family, and no one survived but him. He found me a few days later and swore he'd get revenge on me. I shouldn't be too concerned about him, though. Right? What a creep."
Suzie - "I tried to get help. Any leads on how to get rid of this curse..this person seemed to know something as she kept staring at me. I tried to ask her about it, but all she said was that my family was cursed, doomed to repent others in violent ways. As we parted, I heard her laughing before a loud boom happened in the alleyway."
Failure - "I don't know why I did thisā¦I figured a sacrifice would free me. I kidnapped the owner of a flower shop, keeping him in my shed before I returned to cut his chest open. The hole turned into an eye..but it had no effect. Nothing. I wanna be NORMAL. WHY CAN'T I BE NORMAL???"
Since Abhorrence 2 takes place in 1975, when Shel is 15, they're likely less advanced than we are now. They didn't have mobile phones or many electronics back then. I'm gonna try my best to write perfectly for it.
So the town Shel lives in (I'll give it a fake name, Grisdale or some shit its not really relevant) was already a pretty small town, but once Shel started wiping people out, it got even smaller by the time it was 1995 by either people moving out or being killed. This will be important for later.
Shel went to Grisdale high but dropped out when the "urges" got too strong. As she said in ???'s document, the police don't do jack shit so she probably got away every time.
Byron (Shel's father) did shoot Deana, but I like to imagine she's not dead. She's currently dormant, which means her body isn't decomposing and instead is preserving its energy, and wrath, for some time until 1995.
Noelle has moved out by now and works elsewhere, and Byron escaped Shel's basement with his son, James. The 3 team up begrudgingly to make sure Shel and Deana do not find them again.
When Deana reawakens, she still has a bit of maternal instinct for her children, especially Shel and Noelle. She'd be a bit miffed that Shel made James overdose, but at the same time she'd feel disdain towards him for selling drugs to minors anyways, as she taught him better.
Deana's plan is to assist Shel in purifying the town, but also wants to reunite her family, and that includes Byron and Noelle too. She also wants to get the town back in order, as its fallen into a state of disarray and possible extinction.
Since the demon or entity wants to stay in this area specifically, they can't leave, so Deana comes up with a plan to put a curse on the entire town. If a sinner is killed, they won't go to hell, but Grisdale will BECOME their hell.
They'll be dead, but still moving. Serving as a warning to others. In addition, they can't leave, and anyone who enters cannot leave again either. This is to repopulate the town. Deana just hopes they'll adapt and accept fate.
Its honestly really not that bad of a place. It stays clean (Shel and Deana make sure of that) it has good scenery, just be a decent person and ignore the bullshit going on.
Deana has sent Shel off to actually retrieve Byron and Noelle, since she has to stay behind and make sure the curse stays in place and the people actually act the way they're supposed to.
Byron escaped Shel's basement, bringing James and moved in with Noelle after getting into contact with her. Noelle still doesn't fuck with him, not because he killed their mother, but because he didn't think to baptize or exorcise her first and now she's running wild. Still, its her dad and 2 less individuals she has to worry about.
He appreciates her help, even if he doesn't deserve it. He's still a bit anxious about Shel finding him, so he goes to work with her sometimes so he's not alone.
This is Shel's first time out of town really, in 20 years. She doesn't have negative opinions of her sister for leaving, as she knows she would've done the same.
Shel's first thought was just getting Byron and James back and continuing to torture them, but she assumed he'd go running off to Noelle, so to kill 3 birds with one stone she's gonna try to find him and get to her through him. Not necessarily through violence, but manipulation. She carries fond memories of her sister so I don't think she'd try to hurt Noelle unless she suspected Noelle of a crime, but Noelle hasn't committed any.
Noelle and Bryon would both be absolutely horrified at the nonsense Grisdale has turned into, but helpless. Noelle would try her absolute best to make it a better place meanwhile Byron is trying to find a weakness that leads to an exit.
Deana would make an effort to appear the same way she did before her passing to soothe Noelle, which does work sometimes. Noelle does miss her family after all. I think Deana would be very proud of her for becoming a nurse, even more so for working in a sketchy mental hospital.
Shel and Noelle would be a bit more awkward, as they were both teenagers and its been 20 years since then, but I think they'd generally be friendly. James and Byron are on thin ice.
After Deana's takeover, they've settled into 'normalcy'. Deana is the matriarch obviously. Shel stays as the sheriff and Noelle is sometimes allowed to work in Queenston, only if she comes back.
Deana acts more or less the same, but with a shorter temper. James and Byron still aren't on good terms with Shel, but they're not allowed to argue under Deana's roof.
Byron tries to stay normal around Deana, which includes sleeping in the same bed as her and otherā¦things. (No she did not rape him. Bro got NO play for 20 years, he'd be hesitant but eventually accept the opportunity.)
Deana only really goes full form when punishing sinners, around her family she's normal.
Deana is even more protective over her family than before, usually smiting anything that causes harm to her. This includes Aiden, as she has become maternal over him too.
Deana cooks well and spends time with her family, usually getting more irate if a crime is committed during this time.
They all either don't sleep much, have wacky sleep schedules or are nocturnal.
Shel and Deana both just became accustomed to not sleeping so they can be more vigilant, meanwhile Byron and Noelle's are more trauma based. James just sees hallucinations sometimes.
Shel is more tolerant of her father and vice versa.
Noelle is the only one who leaves Grisdale to continue her nurse work. She must be back after every work day. Shel and Deana don't have a desire to leave and the other two aren't authorized to.
Shitty ass family I hope they all ROT
