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“Such a goddess!🥵”…”Perfection🤩”…”fuck! I’m so hard🍆💦”
It was clear Vanessa’s army of simps were loving her latest set…Her eyes lit up as she watched the tip notifications pour in, each time she heard the *PING* of a new donation she felt a little dopamine release buzz through her.
Her pink nails tapped rhythmically on her phone as she liked the comments and replied to the thirsty DMs filling her inbox. Years of posting Onlyfans had taught her exactly what to say to draw even more money out of these losers pockets. Sure, she was misleading and ripping people off… sometimes they got angry or upset, but there was always another simp waiting for her attention if they stopped paying…
“Thanks for the tip baby 💋…how about another $50 and mommy will show you how it looks from the back?? 🍑😜”
The money kept flowing in and Vanessa couldn’t have been happier, she was already thinking of ways to spend her money…a new purse…earrings…or maybe another hot lingerie set she could use to milk even more cash from her fans…the possibilities were endless. She was still daydreaming about it when the constant donation notifications were interrupted by the sound of a new subscriber signing up to her page. She knew this was an opportunity to make a big score…She copy and pasted her usual welcome message to the new sub and waited for “MarkMan83” to reply…
“Hey goddess V, I just subbed and love your page so much already!! I’ve been following you on insta for a while and I just had to see more of you…I must say I’m not disappointed🥵!! I was wondering if you did any custom content at all??…I’d love to hear your thoughts on this fat cock 😈🍆”
Vanessa smirked to herself as she read the message…she knew this guy was going to be easy prey…
“Hey Mark!…firstly thanks so much for subbing I’m so glad you’re here, I know we’re gunna have so much fun together 😈 I usually don’t do dick ratings for brand new subs but something about you tells me you’ve got something really special down there 🤭 how about $300 and I’ll record you a custom of me reacting to your dick?? I’ve discounted it for you because I REALLY wanna see what you’re packing 😘”
In reality Vanessa usually did ratings for under $100 but she knew the best way to deal with a new sub was to start high and see if they were stupid enough to agree to the inflated prices…
“$300? I can’t say no to you at that price! You got a deal! I promise you’ll never be able to get me out your head once I show you this…just give me a minute to get some good pics goddess 😛”
Vanessa couldn’t believe her luck…first time subs usually scoffed at her prices but this loser thought he was getting a good deal…
Vanessa began scrolling through her files trying to get her pre-recorded dick rating video ready for her sub. The fact this idiot thought he’d actually be getting custom content from her made Vanessa giggle to herself a little. She sat and eagerly awaited MarkMan83 to do his thing.
Barely a minute passed before she saw the notification come through:
*MarkMan83, Donation: $300, Attachment (4 Images, 1 Video)*
The words “like candy from a baby” rang through Vanessa’s mind as she saw the payment hit her account. All she had to do now was wait a minute to ‘record’ her custom video and then she’d have another satisfied customer. It was rare Vanessa even took the time to look at the pictures her fans sent but seeing as she had a moment to kill she decided it might be fun to see what MarkMan83 was actually packing.
She could barely keep a straight face as she opened the first image…the tiny 2 inch cock she was looking at was pathetic even by her subscribers standards. The second picture showed another unimpressive angle of his manhood and the third had it held next to a banana as if that was supposed to make it look bigger…Vanessa managed to contain her laughter just enough to screenshot the picture and send it to her friends group chat.
She swiped to the fourth slide, Vanessa instinctively raised her manicured hand to her mouth in shock. This pic showed Mark stood naked in the mirror. She could see his tiny cock, his weak middle aged body and his full face, grinning at her as if she should be impressed. The pathetic state of him made her feel slightly nauseous…she knew there was still a video to watch, she knew it she shouldn’t look but her curiosity got the better of her. She took a moment to pause before swiping to the video. Vanessa thought she was prepared for anything but as the video began auto playing her screen changed to show something she could never have anticipated
The spiral seemed to suck all of her attention in…she tried to look away but felt like she couldn’t, the more she watched the harder it became to turn away. Her mind began to go blank, the outside world seemed to no longer exist…Then the words started
“Hello Vanessa…if you’re listening to this it means you fell right into my trap you stupid slut…I suppose I should probably introduce myself, my name is Mark of course, you’re messaging a new account I made. But I think you might remember be a little better by another name…’Loserdude43’…”
The name sent a pang of fear through Vanessa’s body… she still couldn’t break away from her phone but her mind began to recall what she had done to this man…He was her worst victim by far. She’d lost count of how much he had given to her but it was way into the thousands… he was a uniquely pathetic sub, always desperate for more, always willing to pay. Until one day he’d had enough…Vanessa remembered trying to reason with him while he raged at her through her DMs before she finally blocked him. She thought that was the last she would ever hear of him. But it seemed her past was catching up with her…
Her heart began to pound, fear spread through her being, and worst of all she couldn’t look away or stop the video
“$27,480…that’s what you took from me…but it was more than that V, all those nights I spent talking to you for nothing, I lost my friends, my job, everything, just so I could be with you and you saw me as nothing more than an ATM machine…but don’t worry… I’m about to even the scores for us…just sink deeper and deeper into your trance…there’s no point resisting now…no more being a brat…you’re all mine”
The words now seemed to burrow deeper and deeper inside of her mind. If she could, Vanessa would have screamed, but Marks trickery was keeping her completely still, helpless and subdued. Instead Vanessa could only listen and soak in whatever Mark wanted her to hear.
“It’s far too late to turn back now bitch…you’re about to give me everything V…I know you’re feeling helpless, scared and vulnerable in the state but this is exactly what you deserve…Now I want you to repeat these words aloud V… and once you do you’ll finally pay the price for what you did to me and so many others over the years…”
Inside, Vanessa was terrified but her face and body were void of emotion, she was no longer in control of her body. Then Mark began to speak through the video once more…
“I Vanessa, forfeit my claim on this body” To her horror she could only listen as her body repeated the phrase aloud.
“I welcome another soul to take it in my place” again Vanessa was helpless as she recited the words once more
“My own soul will be cast out, to take the place of whoever claims this body as their own… I will accept this bond for eternity…”
Suddenly a high pitched ringing began to fill her ears. The noise grew louder and louder, the voice on the video was still playing but she could no longer hear it. There was only the noise and the spiral, growing larger, spinning faster, pulling her in deep and deeper until…it consumed her.
Vanessa came too on the floor. To her relief she could move again, but her momentary pleasure was quickly squashed…
The realisation began to set it the more she awoke…This wasn’t her house, this wasn’t her bedroom and most terrifying of all this wasn’t her body…
She let out a gut wrenching scream as she looked down to see the disgusting naked body she was teasing only a moment ago was now her prison! She cried, screamed, panicked, pinched herself but there was no escaping this nightmare. Then her cries were interrupted by a familiar *PING*
Vanessa rushed to the computer and frantically clicked on the message from ‘GoddessV’
“Heyy Mark… thanks for the donation 😉, unfortunately I changed my mind and I don’t want to review that pathetic little shrimp of yours lol 😂… I know you’re probably really confused right now but I just want you to know this is exactly what you think it is and before you start raging at me…no…there’s no way to undo this…”
Vanessa didn’t know how to react to the message at all…she knew who had all the power now. She just sobbed, trapped as a middle aged man forever…as she contemplated how to reply a second message alert came through
“The way I see this Mark you have two options…you can bitch and cry and moan like the loser you are and I’ll block you on every platform forever and you’ll never see this body again…OR…you can accept your punishment and we can keep talking and I’ll let you see what I’m doing with your old perfect life…what’s it gunna be loser?”
*3 Months Later*
“Heyy loser…I just took some super cute pictures that I know you’re dying to see🤭. How about $80 for a peak?? I promise you won’t regret it 😜 x”
Mark read the message while sat at his computer. He knew he shouldn’t, he knew he should walk away from this but there was something so intoxicating about GoddessV that he couldn’t say no to, no matter how much it hurt.
“Hey goddess😘…I’d love to see, any chance you could do it for say 50-60? I already gave you a lot of money this month?” Marks heart raced. He knew it was risky to ask
“What??? Ahaha…you know I don’t negotiate with simps…in fact just for asking I’m bumping the price up to $100. Pay me now you little virgin or you and you’re little shrimp are blocked 🍤🤏”
Mark cursed himself for even asking…he knew he shouldn’t have said that…he thought about the idea of being blocked…maybe that’s what he needed a way to break free from Vanessa forever and start living his life. He was a 43 year old man, he shouldn’t be spending his days talking to e-girls online, paying for their luxuries and only receiving humiliation in return. But then the image of GoddessV creeped into his mind again…
*$100 Donation sent*
“I knew you’d break loser… enjoy the picture. You could only dream of a body like this 🤭😂”









