In Which, Viktor Dies.
Tagging: Greta Grimm, Viktor Grimm, and mentions of Hans Grimm
Timeframe: Takes place prior to the Grimms coming to Arain, during the time of Viktor Grimm’s passing.
Location: Grimm Manor
Notes: This was my audition piece, thought it was time to share. Love you all <3
Most people had a difficult time identifying pivotal moments in their lives, that moment when their life truly took a turn. Greta was not among them, every choice she made, every step she took, and every gamble she placed, she carefully planned.
She stood now in the saloon of her families’ estate, Greta knew what was to come would be a defining moment for her, a moment she had been waiting for, patiently, for most of her life. Her greatest victory, her crowning achievement. Now, all that remained was to bask in these last few final moments of anticipation.
Gazing out the large, paneled windows at the grounds of their estate, Greta remembered keenly roaming the vast extent with her brother. Poor Hans had always been shortsighted – so caught up in fairytales and wasted ventures that he never quite became the man that Father had tried to make of him.
Their father was a serious man, but an academic, and a Professor of significant social standing at the local university. Viktor Grimm had received accolades for his works, and for his teaching methods, but he was not a warm, nor a compassionate person. His life works could fill much of the families’ extensive library, but around the home in question, there was barely a scrapbook or family portrait in sight.
This particular day was thick with a morning fog, it seemed to roll on and stretch across the grounds in an infinite expanse, obscuring what might have been the families’ barn, and replacing it instead with an endless abyss of uncertainty. Wispy edges caressed the windowpane, seemingly inviting her, calling her towards the void.
“Madam.” A small voice broke Greta’s concentration, one she recognized at once. It belonged to a small, meek woman, with mousy unkempt hair that was perpetually getting in her face. Her uniform, neatly pressed, each crease of the black and white ensemble she carefully ironed into place. Greta had known her since childhood, and then, just like now, the woman seemed incapable of meeting Greta’s eyes.
“What is it?” Greta questioned as she glanced back over her shoulder from where she stood at the window, a glass of brandy gingerly clutched within her grasp. She could not bear the sight of the old woman; the clumsy maid was a reminder of all the things about the Grimm children’s childhood that Greta wished to put behind her. Yet, here they both stood.
“Your Father is asking for you.”
For the first time in weeks, a smile graced her features as Greta carefully set the glass down next to the crystal decanter. Her Father had taken ill a few months ago and since then his condition had only deteriorated, all the while, Greta, the dutiful daughter had nursed him. It was a very public affair and for her selflessness, Greta had become admired by her peers. One reporter even going so far as to write about the matter in the local paper, the story had gained some attraction, but good PR was hardly her aim.
“Greta Grimm: Selfless, Brilliant, Inspirational.”
Greta had seen little of her brother Hans, outside of a few letters; it had been many years since the siblings had been close. The elder of the two, Greta had left home the first chance she got, and, at least it seemed, that Hans had never really forgiven her for leaving him behind. It had taken her twenty years to get to this point, to realize that however she tried to walk apart from his shadow, her father followed her every step, her every thought. He was in the face of every person she tried to love, and he was staring back at her every morning in the mirror.
Greta did not follow the maid through her family home, she knew the path to the dimly lit room, where the air was musky and thick. Father had developed a bedsore recently and since then it had become infected; the stench that permeated the man was enough to make Greta crinkle her nose in disgust. Just the same, she approached him, even though she barely recognized the invalid before her as the harsh, stern father that raised her. His skin had yellowed and his eyes were sunken in, his cheeks had grown hollow and Greta could tell from his vitals that this was the weakest he had been. The previous day their family doctor had told her that it would not be long now.
“My darling.” He whispered as she sat at his bedside and took his cold, withered hand in the warmth of her own.
“I’m here Poppa.” She answered her voice soft and light as air. Greta had missed the passing of her mother when she was thirteen – car accident, and apparently, it had been quick. Not like this.
“My sweet, sweet Greta.” He reached to touch her face but his strength was failing and his touch fell just short. “Where… Where is Hans?”
The question felt like a dagger in her chest. Where was Hans? Hans was not here. She was here. She was the prodigy. She was his heir. She nursed his pride, his body – she had taken care of EVERYTHING. Her teeth ground audibly as the words replayed repeatedly in her head so loud that she could have been screaming them. Her eyes, wild and flared, she settled them on her father before she looked sharply back at the maid.
“Leave us.” Greta said flatly and watched as the old woman retreated; it would be the last time Greta would ever have to lay eyes on the miserable old wretch.
“Where – where is my son? Please Greta you must…” He began rambling, his eyes in a state of panic, but she merely pressed a finger to his lips and let out a quiet shush before he refocused on her.
“He’s not coming Poppa, there’s only me. You will never see Hans again because… Well because you’re going to die and very soon.” Greta said as she caressed his face, he seemed confused as his eyes tried to find an answer in his daughter’s unreadable soul. “Your heart is starting to race; this state of panic will only deteriorate your condition further, I know, you must be in a lot of pain, but before you go I need you to know something.” Understanding crossed his features as he looked to Greta with rage, almost immediately gasping for air as his face and skin turned violent shades of red.
“Yes Poppa, it was me.” The gasping stopped and suddenly her father was perfectly still, statuesque even and Greta knew he was done. She leaned towards the corpse, unbothered by the heated stench of his musk and filth, her words a violent whisper of venom and spit. “This is for Hans.”
“Someone help please!” Greta screamed as terror flooded the room and tears began streaming from her face, within a moment the room was flooded with people and Greta found herself back in the saloon, pouring herself a brandy and basking in her greatest victory. Lights flashed through the window as the once still house grew loud; she wondered where these people were before, why they waited for the girl to become a monster instead of pulling her from the jaws of a beast. She waited, and found justification in the silence of her greatest victory.







