Evaluation Question 3: What have you learned from your audience feedback?
From our initial idea to our finished product, we have received great feedback from teachers, other pupils and the amount of views we got on YouTube. All of our feedback was mostly positive from teachers and fellow pupils as we see in our focus group and through the comments left on YouTube. We received very little criticism. Looking back at our focus group, it was ideal that we used 18 year olds as they were part of our target audience so any feedback we were given we knew was going to be right from an audience and genre point of view. One of our responses was that they liked the time lapse as it added an entertaining feature into the video and it looked very professional. He also commented on the cutting of the beat and how it worked well in relation to the song and the visuals with the couples. Also, the fact that the moods changed in order to the song, and through the different colors that were used. The use of the camera effects that we used on past, dated shots was brought up and how well it looked in relation to the black and white shots looking back at the couple. One member referred to the cutting on the beat and how it kept a steady rhythm throughout the video. Another positive comment that was said was how we used color correction on all of our shots which made them look very professional and made the shots seem more realistic. Also, they mentioned how well our lip syncing was and how well the lyrics fitted with the visuals.
Other than the focus group, we also used comments from YouTube that people has posted. One comment said how we used the location very well and the use of camera movement. This would perfect as we wanted to cover these aspects well and really make them stand out as we felt they were important. Also, they mentioned how well our production design, interpretation of music and cutting on the beat was, similar to the focus group. We took these comments on board very well as they were all positive and we also received 10 likes and no dislikes.
When receiving feedback about my digipak and advert, my teachers and pupils all gave me very positive comments. My teachers said they loved the use of having the male actor being the main feature on ,y advert and how he was also present throughout my digipak. One pupil commented on the way I used the four different images on my front cover on my digipak and said how it all fitted together really well. They also said how the extra information on my advert with the record labels and ratings made it look very professional and realistic. One improvement that came from my teacher was that next time when producing my digipak, make sure the images are of really goo quality because when viewed on a computer and zoomed in, they became fuzzy and pixalated.
When it comes to negative comments on our music video, we didn't really receive any only a few on our focus group. One comment was that they didn't like the ending with the fading of the main male actor looking out across the lake. We took this into consideration and agreed, it may have looked better without the fade but we were trying to create and sense of loneliness for the boy and how he’s forgetting about the girl. Another person said that they didn't like the still shots that were apparent in our music video and i agreed totally. Looking back now, you can see they stick out completely and look out of place surrounded by quick shots and moving shots. Our final negative comment that was also mentioned in the YouTube comments, was that we could’ve used the lighting better in some of the shots we filmed. You can see that in a shot of the girl lip syncing, the lighting is way too light and blocks out some of the female actor which didn't look professional.
Referring to my digipak and advert, i received very little negative comments as all my feedback was verbal as I only posted my final products a few days ago. However, one comment that was made was that the four images on the front cover of my digipak could’ve been positioned better in relation to the title. Also, someone mentioned how the title could’ve been bigger and bolder on my advert.
If we were to produce a music video next time, we have learned from our feedback that we would make sure we had a lot more time when editing as this is the most important part making everything perfect. Also, planning more shoots in different location was key as this would gives us a range of different location to use when editing and we would have more than enough shots of the same thing to go with and choose the best ones. Next time i would definitely take out the steady shots that were in there and replace them with moving ones as this conformed to our pop genre and keep the shots consistent throughout. A way we could do this is by reviewing our shots after a shoot and seeing where ones could go in relation to our storyboards and plans and then film the same shots at a different location.
For my ancillary texts, i would definitely next time have more photos available to use as i feel this time i was limited to ones with only a black background. A way around this would be to use the shoots when we were out filming to also take photos of the actors and the location in order to use them for our ancillary texts as well.
The comments that i have received have taught me that the production and editing side need to be spent the most time on and to have all the group members available for every session as it allows a flow of ideas and every shot can be perfect. Also, next time i would definitely get feedback when editing as this would allow you to change certain things as you go such as the type of shot of the color of one. This could easily be done. Also, when planning making sure that shoot days are fully planned out making sure everyone can attend and that all props and equipment are accounted for.
For my ancillary texts, the comments have taught me that the quality and amount of images needed is very great as you can use loads of different images and choose which one looks best which you cant do if you are restricted. Also, making sure that the images you choose, especially for your digipak, are of the same color and location (if you want consistency) as it is easy to see if they are not and it can not look professional. Editing also requires a lot of time especially when editing each individual image and importing them onto the final product.