Despite rewriting the plot and characters, I will not be covering redesigns because I am frankly pretty bad at coming up with them. This will be about plot and characters only
This is a CRITICAL blog. Yes, I'm doing a rewrite but that's because I truly like the concept of these shows but the way it's written is not the best. So if you're a diehard fan of canon and will fight anyone who disagrees with you, don't go any farther than this
Speaking of which, this is solely for fun and I support nothing that Vivziepop has done (or any of her more questionable cast and crew) looking at you Ralph or whatever the hell your name is
Harassment of any kind will not tolerated. If I see you being hateful for no reason in the reblogs/comments or if you send in hate via inbox. I will block you immediately. You have been warned
Feel free to talk to me about the rewrite in my inbox! Or even share your ideas with me, I love listening to others' ideas about rewrites. Also if you have any concerns about how I portray any of the more serious material, don't be afraid to reach out
Edit: I'm starting a masterpost now!! I'm gonna keep adding on to it as time goes so they'll be more
Okay I just had to get this out because it is driving me insane
(Ramble under the cut. If you are a fan of Morgan Reacts, Not So Average Fangirl, or Mosco, please do not read any further)
So the reason I mentioned those three is because they are the reaction channels I watch more frequently than anything else, maybe Mosco a little bit less, but I have been watching her and Morgan's MLP reactions mostly and not focusing on the other stuff for now
But something needs to be said about the endless praising of Vivzie and her shows, because yikes
I literally cannot get through the Apology Tour reactions because it's just so painful, the endless uwuification of Stolas from them is insufferable. And in Sinsmas when Octavia was basically cutting off Stolas, I remember Elijah going "That's not fair :( that's not fair though :(((" tf you mean it's not fair??? I think it's perfectly reasonable
And if you know Morgan, you might know of this whole phenomenon where they were crying during almost the entirety of Masquerade from Hazbin, which the internet then started ruthlessly bullying them for, and also just being very insensitive and misgendering them (Morgan uses they/them, this may be a critical post but the way that Morgan was treated by getting emotional over a portrayal of sexual assault was unacceptable and I do not support what everyone was saying about them)
With that being said, they then proceeded to laugh at Pentious' assault a couple of episodes later.
And these reactors will go to great lengths to defend Vivziepop to no end, and a couple of other shows with terrible writing decisions and questionable creators (Arcane being the main example) also the way they instantly go to make fun of critics whenever given the chance is rlly annoying but that could just be me
So yeah, sorry about this being an incoherent rant, I just had to say what's been on my mind the past couple of days and maybe see if anyone agrees with me
look I think ppl got a little too upset over it but it is a valid criticism. and the way that Viv responded is just so condescending (ex: "kissing his boo boos"). it just adds more fuel to the fire. "he's a powerful grown up" and then treats him like a child in the show. make it make sense
And look a lot of that "precious screentime" was devoted to some weird ass bondage kink with Al and Vox so don't even girl 😭😭😭
Vivzie, Dani, that's a 16 yr old child year attacking.
Of course, there's a chance that Vivziepop and Dani did NOT see the '16' in the bio however, you should really be publicly attacking someone for *check notes* liking a ship as well as being critical towards the series.
Not everyone is going to like you or your stuff and that's okay as long as no one is harassing you or attacking you either.. I'm personally not a HuskerDust fan, I honestly miss Husk's old design where his wings would have little heart, clubs, diamonds ect shapes in them but I understood why his design was changed so that he is a little bit easier for animators to animate.
But yeah tldr: Do not attack people for liking a ship and being critical ESPECIALLY if their a minor.
Which side note, kids shouldn't be watching Hazbin hotel or Helluva boss for OBVIOUS reasons.
Yep, I'm back finally rewriting Hazbin. I just wanted to wait until season 2 wrapped up to get more ideas and find inspiration. And here I am. Hopefully someone here enjoys my word vomit
Charlie Morningstar
(Sorry that I grabbed a screenshot of her looking depressed. I didn't feel like looking for another)
Anyways yes, Charlie, Princess of Hell and Lucifer's creation daughter. She's still the naïve optimist we all know, but with an actual backbone. She doesn't just let others walk all over and get away with it. Sure, she doesn't exactly hurt them, but she will definitely call people out and occasionally threaten people in her demon form. No one knows that they're empty threats, and even if they suspect of such, they're not taking any chances.
Instead of having a normal childhood, Charlie was created in Lucifer's image, much like God did with Adam and Eve. Lucifer's original intention was to make a perfect daughter in order to spite heaven and serve him, she wasn't supposed to have thoughts outside of how much she adored her father and constantly agreeing with him. But unbeknownst to Lucifer, Charlie has been conscience for some time, and were helping out sinners from facing Lucifer's wrath behind his back, she would sometimes try and talk to other sinners which most of the time would blow up in her face. At one point, Lucifer was in his throne room, about to end a pathetic sinner's life, as one does. But to his surprise, Charlie turned on him, putting herself between the sinner and Lucifer. Enraged by her act of rebellion and disobedience, he banished her from his kingdom and forced her to live as a normal, lowly sinner for as long as hell is still standing.
Outside of Charlie's optimism and belief that anyone can be redeemed, she would be lying if she said their wasn't a small part of her that's doing it to prove everyone wrong. Of course she's not going to say that out loud though, no one needs to know about that
Overall, Charlie might treat others like children and not listen to others as much as she should, but she does have a good heart. Even if it irritates the others to no end
Vaggie
First things first, her name is now Valerie. Plain and simple. Second of all, she's not a fallen angel, she was instead a woman who died in the mid 80s in a car accident, in the crash a shard of glass stabbed her in the eye, hence the giant X
I don't really have the details of her original life figured out, but she did come from a big family that were very close to one another. And then one night men in masks broke into their home with guns, and looking for anything valuable. Valerie was hiding out with her sister in their shared bedroom before those men broke in, screaming and holding them at gunpoint. Valerie has never been more scared than in that moment, and in a moment of fear and adrenaline, she managed to slip past the men and run as fast as she can, leaving her sister and family behind
After that she had nowhere to go, so she took up odd jobs in order to make a living for herself, no matter how shady. However, at one point she was supposed to help out with a bank robbery as her employers' get away driver, she starts driving and at first things seem to be going smoothly, that is until they hear police sirens. Valerie tries everything in her power to lose them, since they need the money, but no matter what, they always seemed to be two steps ahead. Valerie was so focused on trying to lose them, she didn't have enough time to react to the car pulling out right in front of her
Yeah that's kinda the best I have for her backstory, but it's something. She feels immense guilt over abandoning her sister that day, so she hopes that staying loyal to Charlie no matter what, even if Charlie fucks up, that it will somehow relieve some of that guilt
Valerie is pretty similar personality wise, but she is kinda judgemental towards the others and their reasons for ending up in hell. But if someone calls her out and mentions her reason for being in hell (if they ever figure out the reason) she'll immediately get defensive
Angel Dust
Okay, so the thing with Angel Dust is that I don't feel like I have to change that much about him, just kinda make it so that he was an actual bad person who killed people while in the mafia. And took drugs and slept with other guys to cope with his situation, especially since he was his father's favorite, so he also had the pressure of that
However, one thing I will change is how his only personality is being a rape victim. Yeah, he oversexualizes himself because he thinks that's all people wants him for, but once he begins to better himself, his true personality shines through. It turns out when he's not telling repetitive, unfunny sex jokes, he's actually a funny guy. And once you're on his good side, he is deathly loyal to you. The only person he actually cared about and was loyal to in life was Molly
Alastor
Mr. Radio Man himself
In life, Alastor had always craved for something more for himself, a radio show to be specific. He has always dreamed of sipping his favorite tea while talking into the microphone. But that dream would never become a reality, with it being the 20s and racism running wild, everyone would mock his dreams at best or spit in his face and hit him for even suggesting such a ludicrous idea at worst
So, Alastor took it upon himself to make them pay, if someone so much as made a comment directed at his skin color or heritage, he'd make sure that's the last thing they ever say
In death, he's a charismatic radio show host and the most powerful overlord in all of hell. But the most important thing is that he's a radio show host first, and a serial killer second. He's been waiting for this moment for so long, he's not gonna let something as miniscule as killing be above that
Husk
I think out of everyone, he and Vaggie had the most normal childhoods, everything only went wrong after he got married
The happiest he's ever been is when he's with the love of his life, Ruby. About about a month later he got a call from his mother to meet her at the hospital. What he saw was his father in critical condition on the brink of death, having had a stroke. Despite the doctors doing everything they can, he died a couple hours later
Husk falls into a deep depression after this, he and his dad has always been close. So he starts going to a bar to get a couple drinks to take his mind off it, and he was keeping this from Ruby for quite some time, until one day she revealed that she was pregnant. Slowly, Husk started to quite his drinking and tried his best to prepare for the baby, which was revealed to be a little girl
He did everything he could to make his girls happy, putting on magic shows for his daughter, and just showered them with all the love
That is until one day an officer showed up at his door and told Husk that his mother had died from a heart attack, which destroyed him. Which sadly led to him going back to his old way, just saying "one small drink won't hurt." or "just one more."
Unfortunately, along with his drinking, also came the gambling. He tried to deny the betting, but before he knew it he already bet $500 without a second glance, which he wasn't able to hide from Ruby like the drinking
Because of course she's going to catch on to where the money is all going, and Husk, not being able to lie to her, admitted to everything. Ruby was understanding, yet warned Husk that the next time she catches him doing that, it's over. And Husk tried to clean up his act, he really did, for Ruby and his daughter. But gambling away $100 turned to $1,000 and before he knew it, his family was completely in debt. Furious, Ruby claimed that she wanted a divorce
Devastated, Husk decided to go to the bar one last time, seeming as he has nothing left, he drank as much as he could in so little time that he collapsed and died in that bar
Niffty
The woman with no personality, this'll be fun
Her parents didn't have a lot of money, so after a lot of consideration, they married Niffty off to her wealthy, soon-to-be-husband from America, he promised her parents that as long as Niffty is an obedient and submissive wife, he'll send all the money in the world out towards her parents
Niffty didn't want to leave Japan, especially to go to America of all places, but she didn't have a choice. As soon as she got settled into her new home, her husband immediately demanded her to do everything. Wash the dishes, cook him dinner, basically deep clean the whole house, and if she sat down for even a minute her husband would shout at her and call her lazy, saying that he'll never send money to her family at this rate
So with no choice, Niffty just has to be an obediant house wife for however long they live she supposes. No matter how much he screams and hits her, she just has to endure it. Until one day, she snapped, years of resentment has been festering within her for years. So while preparing dinner, she slips some poison into his drink, slowly killing him. His death was slow and painful, which is just what Niffty was hoping for
But unfortunately, the authorities had caught on to what she's done, and called her in to get a lobotomy. She barely even survived the first hit
In death, she still acts like her show self, but it's an act in order to cope with being in hell. She kinda sees it as an outlet in a way, the fact that people can just do whatever they want with no repercussions intriques her
Sir Pentious
Back in the 80s, Pentious was a well-known in inventor and admired for his intelligence. He appears sweet and caring on the outside, but on the inside he's a jealous, envious man who will do anything in order to keep being on top and be recognized for his greatness
He use to aid in making inventions in helping people during wars, and he would make anything his clients requested, no matter how questionable and dangerous they were
But there were other inventors too, ones that were rising too quickly, too effortlessly, which is a massive insult in Pentious' book. A couple aspiring inventors even reached out to him in hopes of a partnership, which he either shut down or accepted, only to then secretly sabotage them later
He remains doing the same thing in death, though he must admit the fact that barely anyone knows his name in hell is quite... a humbling experience
tbh if my so-called friend allowed my abusers to unpredictably enter my safespace i would just give up and stay with my abusers too. nothing hammers “unworthy of safety” in your head more than somebody willing to give ur abusers a chance even after you’ve said no. somebody who smiles at the man who has trafficked and raped u for years.
what is this writing man, angel feeling bad about being brainwashed and hurting a friend shouldn’t be the only reason he feels conflicted about returning
Just said this on Twitter but god, this would have gone so much harder if she'd casually blown up that room full of rapists who assaulted him of instead of...you know, not doing that. If he were alone in this strange, hostile place and remembers when she was his knight in shining armor for a moment.
They included a Rapist, a character that Rapes People, in a friendship fixes everything song. In the season finale. And then they had his Rape Victim rejoin him after that. The Rapist.
