Beth Miller

Copywriter/Copyeditor/Proofreader/Artist — a real whole in one

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Copywriting Z Gallerie catalog

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Inside front cover editorial Z Gallerie catalog

2017

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“This is a toast to the giving season. Here’s to finding gifts for all on your list. 

We raise our jeweled glass to the glam and the gracious, the modern and the luxe. To the the one-of-a-kind, the naughty, the dazzling, and the nice. 

To the golden child in all of us—we toast you twice.

Cheers!”

Inside front cover editorial Z Gallerie catalog

2017

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“Mother Nature whispers gift-giving secrets, and we’re listening. Alluring objects in gemstone hues. Sliced agate with all its flourishes. Chunks of geode revealing treasure. The perfect gift is one as unique as the person who receives it.” Editorial copywriting

Z Gallerie catalog 2017

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Editorial copywriting

Z Gallerie Catalog 2016

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Fun, random typo catches out in the real world.

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Copyediting Rodan + Fields

2018

Simplifying language; fixing typo, “login” as a verb should be: log in

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Proofreading Rodan + Fields

2019

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This is the stuff I HIGHLY appreciate you helping to catch and bring to our attention. Whenever you need a boost, just let me know and I'll tell them how freakin awesome you are and crucial to our team!

Beth Azeveda, Sr. Manager, Packaging, Rodan + Fields

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side-by-side rewrite

WAS: Soften hardened oil and build-up for easier removal by using the system after a hot shower or after steaming skin with a warm, damp washcloth for one minute.

MY EDIT: For easier extraction, first take a hot shower or steam skin with a warm, damp washcloth for one minute.

Copyediting Rodan + Fields

2019

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Proofreading  Rodan + Fields

2019 What changed: hyphen in “under-eye”; space needed in “productis”

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Copyediting Rodan + Fields

2019 It may seem small, but it can lead to counterfeit-bad looks.

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Copyediting Rodan + Fields

2018 Seeing uneven baselines.

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Copyediting email Rodan + Fields / Australia

2018 copy not centered.

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Proofreading Rodan + Fields 

2018

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Proofreading Rodan + Fields Canada

2019

Catching a mistake the translator missed. “Radieux” is “Radiant”, need translation for: “Rejuvenation”

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Copyediting/design Rodan + Fields

2018

Redesigned and rewrote infographic.

What changed: Used more concise language, got rid of double negative, combined elements and language that was redundant; drew on production art knowledge to inform edit on “Do not knock out colors incorrectly”