Magpies (Wikipedia Page)
Magpies (comic)
Magpies is a graphic novel by Elliette Lin, published under Next Level Comics publishing house. The story is inspired by the internal racism and the environmental state of modern-day China and borrows directly from the Chinese myth of âThe Weaver Girl and the Cowherdâ.
Setting
The story is set in a fictional, modern day version of China. Since Chinaâs coal industry is indispensible, the entire country is reorganized in Magpies in a way that all the carbon emitting industries are condensed into one area where the ethnic minorities[1] (Mongols, Koreans, Tibetans, Han, Miao, Zhuang, etc) live. The racial elites, or the Han Chinese, live inner land, high above the other regions surrounded by high mountainous landscapes. While scientists are supposedly searching for ways to further reduce the air pollution, little can be done if the country refuses to see the working class as human beings and not another robot to increase production. The Han are distinguished by their porcelain skin and delicate features. Those that are not full-blooded Han, also called dirty-bloods, have inherently darker skin and more unique features.
The Industrial Province is roughly divided in to 2 sectors: East for agriculture and West for industry. The climate and air in the East is significantly better than that of the West (though not as clean as the inner lands) as it is the area designated to grow produce and raise livestock for the country. Both sectors are densely populated and the majorities that live there are mixed blooded Han with varying degrees of non-Han heritage. Guards manage the workers that work 12-hour shifts six out of seven days a week, and enforce the border fences separating the Industrial Province from the Middle Lands. The air in the Province is so bad that the citizens must wear military grade gas masks when walking outside. These masks are provided by the government and are often surplus and defects from the military. Poorer homes lack proper air filtration and its inhabitants must still wear a mask, though not as heavy duty while more fortunate families can get away without a mask while indoors. Due to the poor quality of the air, many who live in the Industrial Province suffer from lung infection of varying degrees, many suffering or dead from cancer.
Majority of the Middle Lands, the lands immediately adjacent to the Industrial Province, consist of boarding schools and military training camps. From the ages 13-18, children are able to take tests of intelligence and fitness. Depending on their score, they may be allowed to attend boarding schools free of charge. Children from the entire country must be tested, though the children from the inner lands almost always pass because they receive proper training and/or education since they are young or their family has the money to pay for the education. While Industrial Province also has free educational institutions, many children are not motivated to attend and have their hands full helping out their family. The structure of the Middle Landsâ schools use a ranking system for the students that attending the school free of charge: the lowest ranking student of each bimonthly assessment is sent home unless they can pay for the education in full. Students who manage to stay in the system usually never return to their families in the Industrial Province. Upon entrance to the school, students choose a Western name.
Higher achieving students are granted access in the Upper Land in various occupations while others remain in the Middle Lands as instructors upon completing their education. Military students are stationed throughout the country depending on their abilities. The Upper Land is a metropolis of technological advancement and scientific discoveries. Politicians in the Upper Land make much of the decisions regarding the Middle Lands and the Industrial Province as well as foreign trade. Corruption and conspiracy exist amongst the elite and threatens to boil over the surface.
Little is known of the Imperial City, which is located in the center and most elevated part of the country. It is said that those in the City live in a utopia of luxury and wealth reserved only for the purest of Han. While the Upper Land elites control much of the countryâs decisions, it is believed that the Imperial City officials pull the strings behind the scenes.
Plot
Workers in the Industrial Provinces are allowed days off for traditional Chinese holidays and festivals, though they have lost the will to set up celebrations, their spirits seemingly crushed by unfair rule of the inner lands. Many in the Province only know of life of never-ending labor in a gray city and go through each day as a routine. Â The stories and myths that make up their culture are no longer passed on to the younger generation. Â Li is the younger of two children of an ethnic minority family, her brother, En, being 14 years her senior. En was forced him to drop out of boarding school due to his cancer. He uses what he learned in his short stay in the Middle Lands to teach Li to read and write, and about traditional myths and celebrations. Li is especially fascinated by the myth behind the Qixi festival[2] and awestruck that the inner lands have a visible night sky where one could see the Vega and Altair constellations meet.
Inspired by her brotherâs stories, Li plans ways to put âstarsâ back into the sky and become the magpies for the upcoming Qixi Festival. She befriends a young guard with too much time to kill and, along with several peers, they choose to fly the kites not just as a bridge for the Lovers in the Sky but also for the people of the Industrial Province. On the night of the festival, the kites are flown in the late evening and spark something in the people that gathered to watch the spectacle put on by kids they considered mere dreamers. Â The guards cut down the lights soon after they are flown, calling them a public disturbance but it was enoughâthe lights reignites the flame of life in the citizens that watched or heard of the event and also plants the seed of change.
The more Li flies her kites, the more people begin to stand up. The guards, noticing that the people no longer have a dead look in their eyes, begin to more adamantly cut down the kites and warning Li and her band of Magpies as it is better to nip the problem at the bud before it blooms out of control. Upon discovering Danielâs inner connection with the troublemaking group, the guards force him to be a double agent by threatening his place in the military. Too prideful to stake his position, Daniel attempts to discourage Li, but he is unable to crush her growing ambitions and persistence to fly her kites. Eventually, the people of the Province begin little revolts and Daniel is assigned to capture Li. The first arc of the story ends with Daniel shooting his gun, implying that the bullet fatally wounded Li who had attempted to run away, but her status is not confirmed.
Characters
Citizens are given a two three syllable Chinese name[3]âa monosyllable family name along with a one to two syllable given name. In the Middle Land schools, students given Western names[4]. Characters are listed with their full name then their Western name (if any).
·        Lei Li Na: A 12-year old girl with aspirations to create a world filled with lights, her innocence allowing her to see the Province as more than a city of smoke and pollution. She has eidetic memory[5] to the degree where she remembers everything she hears.
·        Zhang Jun/Daniel: A guard originating from the Upper Lands. He chose to join the military despite his high intelligence score.
·        Lei En Lai/Andrew: Liâs older brother with little time left to live.
Themes and Social Critique
Magpies focuses on the internal colonialism as well as the severe environmental issues in modern China. The story also touches upon the Han chauvinism, where the Han see their own race as superior to all others.
China is composed of many mixed blooded Chinese due to the large amount of immigrants from neighboring Asian countries. Ethnic minorities in China include Japanese, Koreans, Muslims, Mongols, etc. Much of Chinaâs current population still remains Han Chinese, the dominant race, though the minorities are growing day by day. The Han view all ethnic minorities as lesser beings in need of guidance. This aspect is reflected in Magpies where the racial elites all live in the best parts of the country (Middle/Upper Lands). The politicians, as Daniel reveals, are comprised of pure Han as most do not dare vote for mix blooded individuals. The privileged are the ones running the country and living on top of the food chain. Han are simply born into a comfortable life where their future place in the Upper Land is guaranteed for them since the day they are born. The truth is, those in the Industrial Province exist because the country needs workers to fill the factories and increase industrial output. The elites long ago decided that those of lesser heritage were perfect drones because manual labor suits their class. None of them wanted to work alongside a dirty-blooded Chinese. This aspect is hidden beneath the surface in the name of keeping fairness and equal opportunities for the entire population.
For this reason, the intelligence and fitness tests are offered to teenagers of all classes. While the same test is administered to Upper and Industrial children, the difference in availability and quality of education controls the amount of Province children that pass the examinations, especially the intelligence portion. The children born in the Industrial Province are given poorer education simply because the government does not see the use in wasting precious resources on people who they view as factory drones. Majority of the admitted from the Province are those entering the military, where they are again used as drones to serve the country. The citizens in the Province, however, believe that any place would be better than where they are because in the city of smog, they are the lowest rank in the country.
Counternarrative-
While Li is like any other child that is born in the Industrial Provinceâunderprivileged, dirty-blooded, and poorâshe  grows up like any other child with a family, a home, and friends. She may not own a computer, an iPad, or a cell phone but that does not make her unintelligent and lesser than the children from the inner lands. Li is creative and passionate, always searching for new things to learn from those around her. Contrary to a stereotypical image of a citizen of poverty, Li is not always wallowing in self-pity nor is she a mindless husk of a body that the government can bend and control. She shows as much respect to her elders as the Upper Land children do and her mind is just as bright and willing to learn. Li is given a glimpse of hope from her brotherâs stories and she holds on to that hope despite the conditions she was under. The author gives Li the power to remember every word she hears as a way to contrast her from her peers who have, for the most part, forgotten how to live. She wants to share with her people a sign for a better tomorrow by lighting a path for them. Her aspirations are huge, despite her young age, and she is not afraid of creating change.
The master narrative of the story is that the people of the Industrial Province are people too poor and uncultured to be able to rise above ranks of the âusedâ. However, the counternarrative arises when it is shown that the military plays a hand in making sure the oppressed remain oppressed. By cutting the kites, the oppressors are snipping the chance for the people to even begin celebrating the culture that all citizens of the country share. Because they are born with foreign heritage, the people of the Industrial Province are seen as an âotherâ and are treated as such.
Influences
China 2015-
Magpies is inspired by the racism and environmental problems in China, where âalmost a third of all global carbon emissionsâ is produced. The skies are âcovered in a âtoxic gray shroudâ that essentially becomes a barrier blocking sky. As a result of the unclean air, cancer is the leading cause of death in China according to the Chinese Ministry of Health Chinese environmental experts estimate that premature death by air pollution would by up to 550,000 in 2020[6].
While the Chinese government has been passing regulations to reduce coal-fueled emissions, their growing industries require an increasing amount of coal. The âwealthier Chinese provinces [push] their emissions and production into low-income provincesâ where marginalized, non-Han Chinese citizens live. While it may seem that the poor provinces are being offered chances by large corporations to make more money, they are forced by their poor circumstances to accept manufacturing proposals. The low-income cities are populated with racial and ethnic minorities that need the industries to make a living and are too poor to afford rejecting the proposals despite knowing the consequence of severe pollution. Essentially, the wealthy are âpushing pollution and other ecological issues into smaller and smaller boxesâ and calling it environmental reform. [7]
Chinaâs huge industrial output relies on human labor. The western Chinese city of Yiwu, for example ships out about 65% of its products nationally and internationally.[8][9] The workers labor away 12-hours a day, 6 out of 7 days a week and earn between $200-300 each month. While Yiwu ranks high on Chinaâs list of open markets, many of Yiwuâs inhabitants are workers that produce trinkets for richer cities and countries to enjoy. Women sit inside âshabby industrial building[s]â sewing hats and putting together cheap plastic signs. Men work in under dangerous conditions in the factories and perform jobs such as melting down plastic and remolding them into decorations. [10][11]
The Weaver Girl and the Cowherd-
Magpies is also inspired by the flock of magpies that form a bridge for the two lovers in the classic Chinese myth, The Weaver girl and the Cowherd[12]. The bridge is a symbol of hope to persevere through another year despite the hardships and the conditions; that it was worth living the past year and it will be worth living another year. In Chinese culture, magpies symbolize good fortune and joy for where they nest.[13]
 The concept of the light strung kites is inspired by the ongoing web-comic, Knite[14], by Wenqing Yan. The story focuses on a dreamer who flies his light strung kites to put stars back into the sky.
Visual and Literary References
Visual References-
The fashion of the citizens of the Industrial Province references the fashion in modern day Beijing, China where many of the citizens where a paper mask over their mouths when out on the streets. The factories and streets are inspired by actual suburban factory cities in China as well as the constant smoggy air. The factories all have flat top roofs and multiple floors, divided by tasks. There are many abandoned factories that the homeless take shelter in and that Li flies her kites from. Besides factories, the homes are mostly shoddy apartments, with a few small houses. The fences separating the Industrial Province from the inner lands are similar to the electric wire fence in The Hunger Games.
Large prison-like boarding schools make up the Middle Lands along with a few nice apartments for academic instructors. The Upper Land is visually based of off New York with a slight futuristic spin. The air is clear in the Upper Land and blue skies and cool weather most days. The Imperial Land is imagined (by Lin) to be exotic in a way not unlike the Forbidden City[15] but also like the Capitol in The Hunger Games[16].
Author
Elliette is self taught writer- artist and aspiring visual storyteller. Although she has had very few opportunities to formal art training, she is adept in Photoshop, InDesign, and Paint Tool SAI and adequately experienced in the fields of digital art and graphic design. She worked on a school Newspaper staff as a graphic designer and layout designer in 2013-14. In the same year, she placed second in the category of editorial cartoon at the SCJEA state write-offs and third at the ELAJEA regional write-offs in the same category.
In her spare time she enjoys reading young adult fiction and doodling in her ever-growing collection of half-finished sketchbooks. She also likes experimenting with various art styles, her own not yet set in concrete. Elliette strives to create a style that is both impactful and bold to make people want to stop and understand the messages being conveyed in the images. She enjoys creating characters and plotting out stories for them, though none of her novels have evolved passed the planning stage as of yet.
Episodes
âSmileââ
Lin wrote a short, 2-page episode called âSmileâ about Daniel and Li that takes place in an abandoned factory where Li works on her kites. The scene opens with Daniel explaining the Blue Skies Project (based on the Blue Skies Project[17][18] in China). It is clear in this comic that Daniel is extremely proud of the progress the Upper Land scientists are supposedly making in improving the air quality in the Industrial Province. When Li disagrees, Daniel takes extreme offense and accuses her of being âonly a 12-year old Province kidâ that could not possibly comprehend how great the scientistâs achievements are. Because he was born and raised in the Upper Land, Daniel grew up learning that his kind, the Han, is always right and always knew best and that the people in the Industrial Province are uneducated and unintelligent.
The scene shows how ageism plays a role in how people judge others. Daniel assumes that Li knows nothing because she is a child. It is similar to how adults call children stupid because they could not possibly understand what they consider âa grown-up situationâ. In Asian countries especially, age plays a big role in how one is treated. A child is taught from birth to respect their elders: listening without interruption, greeting them, and also adding honorifics to their names. Li addresses Daniel as âDanial-gegeâ, which roughly translates to Older Brother Daniel in English. The honorific can be used even for older boys that are not blood related.
The episode ends with Li removing her paper face mask and giving Daniel a slightly sad, but determined smile while stating her promise to create change.
Criticism of Magpies
Some criticism on Magpies concerns the failure to cover the colonial aspects of the fictional China. While the graphic novel does touch up on classism by having two main characters from contrasting backgrounds, the difference in classes may be shown in a superficial manner. Li often corrects Daniel when he makes claims about the Province from things heâs learned from his peers or in books. Being a new guard Daniel is oblivious to the reality of the Province and he often approaches Li with an air of superiority, to which Li is not intimidated. She is able to make a friend out of Daniel and often open his eyes. In this way, the story falters to analyze the counter narrative and may instead be just a reversal of the master narrative.
Critics have pointed out that Linâs use of structure in Magpies is reductive and simplistic rather than sophisticated and highly developed. The characters too are said to fall into simplistic categories like hero, victim, and villain and require more complex desires and relationships.
Illustration Gallery
Early and finalized concept designs for Li.
Early and finalized concept designs for Daniel.
Concept design and breakdown of the country.
References
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^2. âQixi Festival.â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
^3. âChinese Name."Â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 7 June 2015.
^4. "Western Names."Â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 7 June 2015.
^5. "Eidetic Memory."Â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 8 June 2015.
^6. "Pollution in China.â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
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^8. âYiwu.â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
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^11. Wainwright, Oliver. âSantaâs Real Workshop: The Town in China That Makes the Worldâs Christmas
Decorations.â The Guardian. The Guardian, 19 Dec. 2014. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
^12. âLegend of The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl."Â Chinese Culture. ILearn, n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
^13. Lio, Ada. "Magpie, a Symbol of Happiness.â China News. About.com, n.d. Web. 29 Apr. 2015.
^14. Yan, Wenqing. âKnite (comic)."Â Knite Wiki. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
^15. "Forbidden City."Â Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 05 June. 2015.
^16. Â "The Capitol."Â The Hunger Games Wiki. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 June 2015.
^17. "Blue Sky Project Proposes Low Carbon Plan."Â - China.org.cn. Creinglish.com, 13 Sept. 2011. Web. 9
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^18. "Blue Skies China."Â Blueskieschina.com. Media Karma, n.d. Web. 9 June 2015.
External Links
·        Elliette Linâs Tumblr













