The Pragmatic Approach

Hi. Although this website is pretty dead I am very much alive. Gab:https://gab.com/Sodanium

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The trio have landed upon a strange forest.

Next video whenever.

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Jigsaw and Tiptoe have been exiled from the underground Tribe. Now the trio find themselves in the air again, but Jigsaw hasn't been the same after absorbing the last fragment.

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Apology for lack of video. Hard to find recording time these days.

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Jigsaw and co. managed to get the water system working again but how will his tribe react to his return?

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Last chapter we learned that everyone in Jigsaw's tribe blamed him for all of the loss of life following the collapse of the water system. He set off to attempt to restore the system along with his friends when they were suddenly attacked by one of the monsters inhabiting the underground.

Tried a different voice tone for the action sequence. Couldn’t summon it for all of the video. 

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Last time our heroes arrived via airship just outside the location of Jigsaw's and Tiptoe's former home in the underground caves. However, no one is ready for what they'll find inside.

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Once again our heroes set off to resume their quest for the next fragment— this time aboard the repaired airship.

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Fallout.

Congrate me cus I done it. By now this story has been significantly altered although the core plot remains unchanged. I still don’t feel the love triangle thing all too well but I hope my changes made it more tasteful. I won’t have to change much in the next few readings so the next few videos should not take this long. 

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Apologies. I’ll try to get the video done and up by tomorrow.

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Aright I think I managed to break through. Just some refinin’ and adjustin’ to do. 

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I’m stuck on one difficult and important spot but I think I’ll have the next video up this week.

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c27edit.rtf

Context: Incendia faces the repercusions of her confession to Tiptoe, who is the girl of Jigsaw, the real protagonist.. Changes were made in the last chapter to make Incendia confess to Jigsaw instead, and to generally remove all traces of dykery. This chapter must be heavily edited or rewritten...

Work text for the next chapter so far.

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Reading a few chapters ahead so I don’t get caught by surprise and to make sure I don’t edit/write myself into a corner. Should have done that before.

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Now they head inside the temple and into the underground to check out the airship. Meanwhile, the war outside Totemhoof still rages.

Whew. The story edit is not perfect but I believe it’s functional. I might have been able to do better but I have to keep the ball rolling. 

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bAiNTVKf4SBWcfkR-EpXNrMOTcndKnEp/edit

My edits to the text for the next video. 

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In a bit of a pickle with this story, but managing. I never thought I would have to edit or flat out rewrite parts of the story. I just wanted something fun to narrate, darn it. But it’s turning out not that bad, I hope.

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Anti-Notice: Incendia Alert and Brief Rant

Somewhere in the chapter I’m working on, which is chapter 26, Incendia finally drops the L-word on Tiptoe.

I’ve got some EXTRA work to do (thanks, author) so the next narration will be delayed.

But this is nothing, NOTHING compared to chapter 27, about one half of which is dedicated to the fallout of Incendia’s confession. Angst about being a fillyfooler with no filly to fool with ensues and somehow no one thinks this is weird at all. Other than that there’s something about Spike, and Jigsaw gets the airship going.

Anyway, I have some work to do. Wish me luck.