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@maythewriter-blog
WELCOME
Hey there. Welcome to maywrites.net! You’ll find lots of writing tips and tricks, as well as my own personal frustrations when it comes to figuring this whole book writing thing out. There are also a few book reviews here and there that you should definitely check out — I don’t hold anything back! I don’t always update as often as I need to, but don’t worry – that just means I’m writing!
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SWITCHING IT UP
I’m back! Summer is always such a hectic time around my house. Especially when the weather has been hot, and ungodly humid. That means both the kids and I are stuck indoors lest our clothes be drenched in sweat, or our heads ache from possible dehydration. Having two boys, this can be a bit of a problem. I had to take a mini-hiatus from everything. My twitter, this blog, and even my writing all…
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INK AND BONE
I was looking for a new release book to add to my list of book reviews, when I stumbled upon Ink and Bone by Lisa Unger. It had a different, interesting premise that instantly drew me in. Ink and Bone is a Supernatural Thriller that starts with the disappearance of a little girl, Abbey Gleason. The book follows several different main points of view: Finley Montgomery, who is haunted by prophetic…
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ADD IT TO THE LIST
ADD IT TO THEÂ LIST
Sometimes motivation and determination come in the strangest forms. I saw an oil spill on the road the other day that looked sort of like pooling blood, and it gave me an idea for the next chapter of my book. Which was great, because until that moment I hadn’t been able to think of anything good. One time I had a dream that loud, ear-piercing sirens were going off around me and then I was hit…
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The muscles of writing are powerful: determination, attention, curiosity, a passionate heart.
Natalie Goldberg (via psliterary)
If a story is in you, it has got to come out.
William Faulkner
Yep. Pretty much.Â
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If a story is in you, it has got to come out.
William Faulkner
An accurate representation of writing.Â
Ten Common Writing Mistakes
This is a great list to go through while proofreading your copy! Remember, nobody is perfect. Even great writers get tripped up by little things. Just make sure you can identify your mistakes and correct them!
A character can still be a great character without being a good person.
In fact, some of the best characters are terrible people.
Because a character’s worth should be based on how complex and interesting they are, not their morality if they were real.
SAY IT AGAIN FOR THE PEOPLE IN THE BACK
5 Common Story Problems with Simple Fixes
Our stories are often plagued with these common story problems, but if we don’t know how to fix them, we’ll never improve our writing. It’s important that you remember you don’t need to scrap your novel if you keep having the same issues over and over again. Hopefully this list will help you pinpoint what’s going on and provide ways for you to improve your novel.
Problem: Unmotivated Characters
If you’re having trouble figuring out where your story should go next, the problem could be with unmotivated characters. Characters aren’t in your novel just so you can push them around every once in a while and make them do things. They need to develop over time and keep your story going in the right direction.
Solution:
Work on your character’s wants, goals, and motivations. You need to figure out what’s driving your character if you want them to do anything. Where do they want to end up? What’s standing in their way? What’s their plan? Who will help them? Think about everything your character will need to do to resolve your novel. Focus on what they want and what motivates their actions and your characters will stop being dull and lifeless.
Problem: Boring First Chapters
A boring first chapter is dangerous because you want to captivate your audience right away. You don’t want to lose readers just because of this, but sometimes it happens. You should give enough information to keep your readers interested, while also keeping them intrigued enough to figure out what happens next.
Solution:
Putting emotion into your scenes from the beginning will not only help set the tone, but we’ll get an immediate understanding of your world. The best advice I can give is to construct a scene that helps us best understand your character. If they’re on the run, show us that they’re being chased. If they’re sad and lonely, construct a scene that lets us feel their isolation. You don’t necessarily need to open your book with action, but you do need to introduce the conflict. Think about what your character wants and go from there. Think of your first chapter as an introduction to an essay. You don’t go right into the points immediately, but you set us up for something good.
Problem: Plot Holes
Writers worry about forgetting to include important information in their novel that’s necessary to the plot. If you’re discovering that readers often point out plot holes in your story, maybe it’s time to reevaluate how you plan your novel.
Solution:
Pre-planning or prewriting your novel often solves any plot hole problems. If you take the time to write out important scenes so you don’t forget them, your story will become stronger. However, if you’re not someone who likes to do so much planning, you can tackle plot holes during the editing phase. Take notes when you’re editing so that you can catch these plot holes and figure out where you can add necessary information. A plot hole does not always mean your novel needs loads of reworking, but it is something you need to take the time to fill in.
Problem: Poor Pacing
Poor pacing can ruin a novel, but luckily it’s something you can tackle head on before you even start writing your story. Good pacing helps add tension to your novel and helps you make sure there’s enough rising and falling action to keep your story interesting.
Solution:
Planning out your novel ahead of time also helps solve pacing problems. You can create a timeline that helps you keep track and plan out when you want certain things to happen. Read up on story arcs and try to plan out your scenes accordingly. If you’re already done with your novel and you notice poor pacing, try rearranging scenes or spreading out the action.
Problem: Info-Dumping
A very common writing problem is info-dumping. This is when you tell your readers loads of information at a time without showing them anything important. Info-dumps usually occur in first chapters of novels, but they can happen anytime during the course of your story. Info- dumps can drag down your story and bore your readers.
Solution:
Cut out long paragraphs where you explain what’s going on in your novel and show your readers instead. Avoid over explaining things that can be explained through action. Letting your audience figure things out instead is a much more satisfying reading experience and it lets your readers connect with your characters on a deeper level.
-Kris Noel
5 More Common Story Problems with Simple Fixes
