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@michelleg121
CSW response
I really enjoyed the CSW. It was very hot and there but besides that everything went good. I liked everyone projects and their themes were very creative. Our table turned out great, which is a good thing. Everyone did a good job.
I decided to read the article titled “Converse Chuck Taylors: A personal Artifact” written by Sarah Brethen because I love Chuck Taylor shoes, and the title captured my attention more than any of the other articles that were listed. This article has a good story about the life of the author as...
We chose the same article to read. Just like you I also enjoyed it.
EM Journal Response
The article I decided to read was “Converse Chuck Taylors: A personal Artifact” written by Sarah Brethen. I chose to read this article because it was the only one that caught my attention by the title. I love chucks, all colors. From the title I didn't think it was gone be about how she got the shoes. Also I didn't think she was just going to be talking a pair a chuck Taylor's that her parents kept buying once the old ones couldn't be worn anymore. I thought she had different ones. Overall, I liked this article because for each pair of shoes she got she told an experience she had with them. I also like the beginning because it reminded me of myself and how I use to act in Christmas.
Response to Presentation
davidb121 I really enjoyed your presentation. You also did a great job! The most interesting part was the visual aid you showed, which was the outline of the school. I liked that you have your thoughts and every one else thoughts about the project.
Feedback from Presentation today!
michelleg121
Hey! You did great today. One simple question though, when did the drop out rate rise? Like what year or what generation?
Overall, seems like you’re doing great. keep up the good work.
Thank you ! I think in my research paper I told how the dropout rates been started but I had to focus more on the dropout rates in the last 5 years.
Response to Presentation
dajaj121 I really enjoyed your presentation. You did a great job! The most interesting thing I found about your presentation is the visual aid you showed. Also the amount of abandoned buildings and vacant lots was interesting to me because I had no idea it was that many.
I used this website, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hanover-Horton_High_School, as a source in my paper. Even through it’s a Wikipedia website I found the information on it was useful for my research plus the information seem to be creditable.
Hanover and Horton schools joined together to become…
I completely agree that Wikipedia was a good source for the research that we had to conduct for the paper. We both seem to have found research that is relevant and useful for our papers, and things that we plan on including in our paper. Good luck on writing your paper :)
-Kara
I like to use Wikipedia also. The only this I have trouble about is taking the time to look at where the information came from that is one Wikipedia. If I were you I would look into the sources that are connected to Wikipedia’s information.
I like to use Wikipedia a lot because it gives a lot of history on things. I think this would help you a lot with your research paper.
Research Paper
A source I used is http://www.drugabuse.gov/publications/drugfacts/high-school-youth-trends . I chose this source because the information seems to be true because it states statistics. I do agree with the information in this source because their are facts presented.
Thesis statement
I think I came up with a good thesis statement but I know I’m going to have a hard time forming my introduction paragraph.
My thesis statement is: If we stop high school dropouts it will decrease drug related crime on the East side of Detroit.
This is a good one. It gets right to the point and clearly shows your stance on the topic.
I agree. I wish I could be quick and simple with my thesis. Mine seems to always comes to be a run on sentence.
I will admit it's hard. I wish it was easy.
I finally think I have come up with a good thesis statement for my research paper.
"The Willow Run Bomber Plant is well known to all Ypsilanti residents for the product on of B-24 Bombers/Liberators during World War Two."
This is able to be argued by someone else because I do not know that every...
I like your thesis statement, that really is a good topic to argue.
Thesis statement
I think I came up with a good thesis statement but I know I'm going to have a hard time forming my introduction paragraph.
My thesis statement is: If we stop high school dropouts it will decrease drug related crime on the East side of Detroit.
My research project is going well. The only problem I am running into, is not finding enough information on the subject. If anyone has any suggestions I will gladly take them. So my project is on the fire that happened in my town. I have found information on the insurance company...
Yes I think you should check more into newspapers. They could be very helpful
I think my research paper is going good so far. I'm finding great sources about my research questions. The only thing that's going wrong is that I'm looking for one type of violence which is drug related violence. But the Internet keeps giving me results on all types of violence.
I found this article by typing in crime in Detroit.
Research Question
My research question is “Why hasn’t Detroit built a mass transit system?”
I like your research question. I also want to know the same thing.
Research Question
My research question is: Are high school dropouts the major cause of drug related crime on the Eastside of Detroit in the last five years?
Michelle, this is an interesting topic! I like the idea, what made you decide to do research on the reason for high school dropouts?
I chose that because high school dropouts is major with the kids today in Detroit.
Research Question
My research question is: Are high school dropouts the major cause of drug related crime on the Eastside of Detroit in the last five years?
