JUNGLE 3RD DRAFT FEEDBACK
This is the final round of feedback we received on our third edit. The second two points are very easy to fix and certainly points I agree on, I do think the pause in Joramâs audio is quite a poignant moment in the film and more time should be given afterwards for the message to sink in further. This links back to my issue with Human Flow, and also our own aims of making a more reflective and artistic piece that doesnât necessarily fit the representations of the Jungle that have been seen before.














