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Starset - My Demons

Take me over the walls below Fly forever Don’t let me go I need a savior to heal my pain When I become my worst enemy The enemy

Well, I had to separate them, because I changed my mind about Gavin’s nature in this AU. I think it’s time to draw some demons :>

#oh my GOD #big companies gonna hire this artist #art #rk900

cyon-animation

family movie night

#Perfect......#Dbh connor #Dbh hank #Dbh art #Dbh #Art #Q

defenestratin

Released August 15, 2038

(something I did for Connor’s birthday on twitter, just forgot to post it here!)

#My god the imagery here #👌👌👌👌#Dbh #Dbh art #Dbh connor #Art

relssah

#Eating that ice cream would kill me but that has never stopped me from eating anything #Dbh connor #Dbh hank #Dbh art #Dbh #Art #Q

brynwrites

Do you have any advice on writing in a way that makes the reader feel confined/suffocated/trapped like the protagonist feels in the novel?

Writing overwhelming emotions.

My advice is to approach it the same way you would when you’re trying to make the reader feel a character’s overwhelming emotions in any situation.

Describe the character’s surroundings using words that add weight to the character’s emotions. (The tunnel was very small. -> The walls of the tunnel seemed to tighten at the edges of my vision, like a thousand small, shadowed hands reaching toward me.)

Show the character’s physical sensations. (A was afraid. -> My lungs tightened, refusing the stale air.)

Use sentence length to your advantage. (All the oxygen seemed to be gone from the air. -> Stale air choked me. Suffocating. Constricting. Too little oxygen.)

Build more tension with action. (A sat there and cried. -> I scrambled backward, but my shoulder slammed into rock. I recoiled. My elbow cracked against the other wall. Yelping, I flinched away from the pain, knocking my head into the ceiling. Darkness swarmed in.)

Adjust thought patterns. (If I stay here for another ten minutes with limited air supply I might pass out. -> Oh god am I going to die here. I can’t die yet. I can’t. I won’t.)

Remember that the tension should build as the scene progresses, meaning that the pov character should continue to feel more and stronger emotions and sensations until they reach a point where they make a choice to either put those feelings aside or to escape their predicament!

#Fic notes #Writing tips #Q