Fanfiction Help/Anime Raps

Hello there~ I would be happy to help you if you need any suggestions about your fan fiction's story plot or characters (how to make them better). There's no guarantee I will be absolutely right, but I will try my hardest. (I mostly do anime and manga). I also make anime raps

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Anime Rap Battle Monokuma vs Korosensei

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Monokukma: Oh-ho-ho!! Look what we have here! A yellow tentacle freak who we suddenly have to fear. Destroying the earth? How cliche is that?! I control the whole universe with just a simple snap. Your students become assassinations, while mine become murders. The way I teach the brats is to become a little firmer. They have to kill you so everyone can be well. The Hovic has to kill me to be saved from hell! My Despair will beat your immortality, it's better than Analogy. I'll crush the hope out of you and smile in formality. The government sends you to teach and forgive all your crimes? I judge the culprit fairly with execution time!~ You’re a time bomb? Have you seen my machines? Once you see them, you'll have a face of red, permanently. I guess somethings aren't meant to be. Just like the  future for your lovely class-E. Koro: Npupupupu, you want to go against me? Your brain must be weak like your false reality. I can destroy the earth myself, while you need machines, you continued to fail by a hopeful group of three. Your thoughts are creative, and your style is alternative but you forgot that your assistance is extremely fabricated. Your 'smart' ideas are created by your crazy mind. I can have my students over and have assassination time! If you crush the earth, there will be nothing left. And just like your master, you're more annoying than death. My regeneration, can beat your complication,  of your energetic yet violent, murder mystery making.  Thinking of the different ways to have your plans at stake. Remember, a girl defeated you, and she was in eleventh grade! I hope that you came with your other robots. Because in 45 seconds, you're about to get shot. Monokuma: Blah Blah Blah! I can't understand you! You just want to make up for the girl that died for you! So what three brats defeated me, big deal! My soft yet deadly body is a deadly ordeal. I reward my students (if they solve the case right), You're only an alien who's looking for a fight. Check out the mono-flaming machines. It's waaay~ cooler than you pervert peeping schemes. And the alternate reality, just a simple disguise. In the outside world, I continue to rise. The trial has begun, let's start the fun, they're no point in bringing witnesses, either way, I won! Koro: Teach to me why is some girl trying to make me lose?

Karma: Maybe because she needs to go back to school. Thinking that their failure won and overruled? Much more complicated than Koro-sensei's color hues. 

Nagisa: Despair has more quality, a child knows that. Your purple colored blood is why you need more combats. 

Koro: So what if you almost destroyed the world, you honestly don't need children as a person who can serve. one-third of the moon, is on everybody's mind, This battles gonna end, and I have the last rhyme. 

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Anime Rap Battle Sebastian Michaelis vs Levi Ackerman

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Sebastian:  I guess this was fate that we would meet, but I must warn, I will not be beat. You see, my young master always directs me an order,  I believe your brain has an OCD disorder. When I look at you, you remind how humans are flawed. Not just by your thoughts, but how you're not tall.  You act like your some soldier in an actual battlefield. I was in London, trying not to reveal, something that can actually destroy the earth, while you were obviously cursed by the day of your birth. The future that you want is probably an illusion. The destruction of the wall would be an easy conclusion. I am an immortal being, sent down from hell, but all of your people might go there as well. I saw your brutishness from a mile away. And there is nothing you can do that can go and save the day. Even if your team came back from the dead. You might as well end up as my meal instead. Your ignorance of order will get you killed, it's obvious to everyone that you lack of skill. You think you’re emotionless, you haven't seen me,  I should have you stereotypical style demeaned. I am one hell of a butler, I am very known. You ending is not the next future untold. Levi: You telling me these rhymes, but I can't understand you. Your just a peasant who has a teenage boy demanding you. I'm a free man, while you're scrubbing floors by hand. You have a shitty memory, I'm the captain at hand. Those titans are ten times stronger than you. Once, your contract is up, you're going to be screwed. You'll forever be hungry lack a certain type of food. By then, you'll respect the rude. And if I die (I won't) I'll at least have some honor. You'll be trapped forever and remain from being a goner. You think I'm short, bitch please, I have an unbeatable streak, so you bow down to me. Someone like you couldn't keep an arm on your shoulder, No wonder your story plot is completely out of order. When Claude kicked your ass, it must have hurt. You need to clean your blood off the floor, get back to work! Sebastian: You know what, I'm actually getting bored of this game. Having singles battle is always the same. Levi: For once I agree, Let's double it up. And then we will see who's strong enough. Eren! Sebastian: Young master! **************************************************************************************************** Eren: Yes Sir! Ciel: What the bloody hell is taking so long?! I thought you were going to finish this? Eren: Who's this shorty? He seems like a kid, hey Levi, why do you rap to his clown, he obviously doesn't know his way around. Levi: That's the same thing I thought. Sebastian: Are you going to let them insult you young master? Ciel: What question is that? Of course I'm not! 

Why am I looking at some anger issued titan, a simpleton like him couldn't make an alliance. He always has to be watched by a self-centered shortie. This is the exact reason why the story is becoming boring. I have a demon on my side, he can easily kick your ares. Once you were eaten, everyone knew that you turned to trash. I can't wait till the titans conclude, at this mainstream story that will finally loose. 

Eren: Whatever! I can turn into a titan and easily kill you! You can't even take care of yourself, forget you! I have some sort of freedom in my heart, while your parents died in a fire and you were lost. Some bipolar kid proved who's boss, placing your servant into a knot,  I heard your butler was named after a dog, so  you and him go woof along.

[reniningyo]

Anime Rap Battle Johan Liebert vs Light Yagami

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Light: Johan Liebert. Is that really your name? Such a common simple thing would be simply just a shame. I’ve seen your face already, so easy to remember. So what you had people shot, murdered, and severed? Remember I killed thousands, there’s nothing you can do. I actually make justice while you go shot and screwed! I can’t believe someone like you could be better at manipulation, I want to see you try and kill the entire human nation! You’re a pathetic waste of space, I actually do some good. You should go home to your mommy and die understood? Your pretty boy image, has made you looked like a loser. Your trainer needed to treat you a little more crueler. This is something you can’t win at. I’m just too powerful for you! So why don’t you back to Czech and make out with your boyfriend Suk? You’re just a simple fairy tale created by someone else, I at least defeated someone as great as myself.

Johan: Ah ah ah remember, there’s nothing you can do. I can have someone kill you and after that you’re through, I have my criminals next to me so what you killed more people. Over my entire life my philosophy was equal. And yes you are right, Johan’s a simple name, but having my real one unknown helps me rise in this game. You have a black book, created by a rogue shinigami, I was over at Prague causing the uprising of Nazis! Your thoughts about the world have destroyed your sense of good, those successors had you humiliated and tranquilized for good! You think you can kill me? You must be slowly than Richerd, I can immediately place your thoughts into a despair blizzard. My pretty boy image, has convinced people to trust me, you were able to rule the world because you were lucky, my existence is unknown, I murdered at a young age, Das Monstrum, in meinem is already out of it’s cage.

Light: To be honest with you, I really don’t care, that your past was so horrible that it made a tiny flare. Deciding that some doctor, would come and shoot you down. Even though you ruled you wanted to be killed right then there and now? They’re imposters (*rapping fast) Thinking that something so good would come out of something so terribly bad? So what you have powerful men, I don’t need an army! Do you wanna know why? I’ll tell you the truth. You’ll just disappear like your military dad! Fainting over a children’s book and wearing that outfit proves you’re soft. Believing that you’ll disappear will just make everyone feel lost? Killing children? How heartless can you be? Everyone might think you’re a monster but your attempt at death was weak! Schwuald looked through your eyes? Tenma forgiving all your crimes? Thinking you look cute cross-dress? Then you must be out of line! Let’s make this quick (*exaggeration) Johan, you’re running out of time. Learn how to be useful like the last monster who died!

Johan: Running out of time? Just like your dad. Who believed his own son wasn’t Kira, how sad. I can make people love me, with just a simple phrase. You were whining like a bitch ‘I don’t wanna die!’ okay? Look into my eyes and see my empire of greatness, when you immediately died, people decided to become faithless, I leave fear on earth while you got caught with a smirk, I made the next recreation of battlefield earth! I can see why L thought you were the bad guy, you had bad acting to cover up your disguise. You thought I was pathetic? I had six children murdered with the severed. People might not give me credit on what I actually do, but I know you operation will be over like the apple of a fruit. You should have killed yourself, you would have more honor that way, you think I'm gay, you must forgotten your last name backward is spelled imagay. I’m through with you. Just how Matsuda shot you, and Near stating at the end you loose. The Death Note today, is now a useless book, my fear can control everyone. Join me and take a look.