"Forgive me father, for I have sinned."
Warnings: Oral sex, nipple play, cheating, you're Williams fiance but show greater interest in his brother, Sex, dead bodies, gore, language, whiny Victor, mommy issues, victor is basically submissive??? Not really but SUPER whiny.
First post, don't be shy to correct me on some parts :)
The morning air was a familiar scent, the sun illuminating a certain dark, cold palace.
"You must stay here, creature."
A voice spoke aloud, a set of chains rattling with each movement. "Victor..." The voice sounded rather distant from a humans. Victor's smile broke as he onced admired his piece of work—the success of bringing a human back alive was enough pleasure for him as he chained the creatures hands.
But that pleasure didn't last long as Victor was angered by its stupidity. The only word that left the creatures mouth was his own name.
Victor walked around in fury as he picked a boot up, "Can you say boot?"
The creature only whispered his name as Victor threw the boot down and screamed words.
As he walked closer, he yelled at the creature once more before the knocking on the door ricochet off the walls and into the ear drums of Victor's; he gazed at the creature before glancing at the
exit. He didn't mutter another word, the air was filled with silence before leaving the room.
Victor glanced out the window, seeing the familiar face of Y/n and his brother, William.
"Shit..." Victor muttered under his breath as his conscious reminded him of the death of Y/ns uncle.
He sighed before opening the door. "Y/n! William! Come, you should see what I did, my notes—come, come now!"
His tone was ecstatic as Y/n tilted her head in curious. Victor grabbed Y/ns arm, bringing her forward as he wanted to show her his work. "Victor, wait. Where's my uncle?"
He stood dead in his tracks, his heart pumping against his ribcage. "He's gone, but he'll be back in three days."
Y/n wanted to believe him, but couldn't. The main reason she came was to see how her uncle was doing—and also to see Victor again.
A deep warmth clung to her heart as she looked towards William; a sudden feeling of guilty overcame her as she noticed a spark of tension in the atmosphere, and the disappointment on Williams face.
"Why don't you come see what I did?" Victor let go of Y/n as he brought William in. The two guys went upstairs as Victor had the behavior of a child who created something for their parents.
Y/n watched in admiration as she watched Victor's every move up the stairs, his neck length hair bouncing with each jump up the stairs.
He looked back, towards Y/n, giving her a slight smirk as William noticed.
The men were out of sight as Y/n stood there awkwardly, replaying the moment of Victor giving her a smirk. It felt so wrong, but yet it felt so right considering the fact that William has been so distant—it seemed he had no time for her; No time to talk to her, hug her, kiss her, or even satisfy her.
She only had silence from him. She wondered if he was as guilty as her, maybe he too was sinning, lusting for another woman.
Y/n turned her head towards the room where the voice came from. She swallowed, taking small steps as she reached the room filled with water.
Y/n turned her head, taking in detail of the place before noticing a creature ahead of her. Her eyes widen as it noticed her; the creature left his spot on the windowsill.
Y/n sauntered towards him, her demeanor held calmness and no sign of wanting to hurt the creature.
The creature seemed at ease as he slowly reached his arm out; his cold hand touched her face as she smiled.
The two stood in silence for a good while as Y/n kept taking in even more details of him, notcing scars and how blood seemed to slowly drip down his body.
"So I see you have found my creation." Victor stood not too far behind them as he smiled. Y/n jumped as she relaxed at the familiar voice.
Y/n said with a light chuckle as Victor smiled in awe. "This, is my new creation. With the help of your uncle i was able to make this. Great healing it has."
Victor explained more, filling Y/ns head with information as he touched the creatures body to show off more parts.
As the sun was chased away by the moon, it cast a gentle glow onto the earth. Y/n was in a room, laid out on the bed in a white night gown. Her mind filled with dirty thoughts, pure lust filled her heart as she felt guilty. William was laying beside her as she sat up.
Y/n looked over to William as she lowered her head, feeling a sense of culpability.
Y/n slowly got off the bed, trying to stay silent to not wake William up. The floor creaked beneath her as she opened the door, shutting it.
She looked around before going downstairs—she wanted to see the creature again, he fascinated her.
Y/n smiled at the creature as she set her candle down while the creature watched her every movement.
She whispered, the creature tilted his head.
He said back after struggling a bit. Y/n was surprised as her smiled widened. "Can you say my name? Y/n. Y/n."
Y/n brought the creatures fingers towards her throat to feel the movement after each word. "Feel how my throat makes sounds?"
She repeated as the creature was silent. Y/n brought his hand down as she just gave him a gentle smile. "I must go now. Goodbye."
Y/n sat up again as she walked out—the creature felt a warmth as he whispered her name.
Y/n walked past Victor unknowingly. "You shouldn't trust it."
Victor spoke coldly as he sat on a chair, a green robe around his body that exposed his chest and stomach.
Y/n let out a chuckle as Victor leaned forward. "Yes, it. It's dangerous."
Y/n rolled her eyes as she turned her head. "HE doesn't seem dangerous; he just seems misunderstood. He may seem odd on the outside, but his actions show pure innocence."
Victor raised an eyebrow as he stood up, walking towards Y/n as he towered over her. "Pure? Innocence? You seem to not understand its true nature: it attacks, hurts, and disobeys. I should know how he is, i created him."
Y/n looked up at Victor before looking down to his exposed body. Only his pants covered the rest of him. Y/n could only scrunch her eyebrows.
"If you created him, why did you make him out to be evil? His intentions show no signs of nefarious purposes. He just seems tensed, like he needs to understand something more."
Victor tilted his head, humming as his fingers gripped Y/ns chin. "Tensed? Are you describing the creature or yourself? Do those words that fall from your mouth speak of the creature? Or does the utterance of your deep emotions depict you?"
Y/n widened her eyes as Victor could see right through her. "How...How did you know?"
Y/n choked on her words she whispered it. "Your body language explains it all. Why don't we go to my room and you can explain it all to me. Tell me every deep emotion that you feel, I can listen to anything you say."
Victor's hand lowered to his side as he grabbed her hand, walking up the stairs. He shifted the conversation to get over talking about the creature. He didn't like the fact that Y/ns attention was on the creature and not him.
Sure he was excited at first, but now that Y/n sees his creation as pure, it exasperated him.
Y/n stopped in her tracks. "This doesn't feel right."
Victor looked back. "What doesn't feel right?"
"Going into my finances brothers room while he is 5 feet away."
Victor tilted his head. "It's like seeking an answer to a longing question that needs to be answered. Let me answer those questions that you desperately seek; you shouldn't worry for my brother like he doesn't credence the relationship between you two."
Y/n bit her lip as she sighed.
The two entered Victor's room as he pat his bed. Y/n hesitated before sitting down as He sat in a chair in front of her. "Tell me, Y/n. What is distubring you to the point of being so visibly tensed?"
He crossed his legs as he leaned back. "It's my fiance, your brother. He has been so distant. He has no time for me. No time to pleasure me like he used to."
Y/n stopped after she realized what she has said. "I'm sorry, I don't think I should've said that."
"No, no... No apologies should be said, continue on..."
Y/n looked up as she began fidgeting with her night gown. "And I think it has to do with my sister, Elizabeth."
Victor spoke like he knew who she was, like that name was already familiar on his tongue. "You know.. her?"
"Ah, yes I do. We share a few things in common..."
Y/n felt jealous as she looked away. "And I too have been... Lusting. I've been thinking of another man and the guilt eats me alive."
Victor uncrossed his legs as he sat up. "Who is this man that you speak of?"
Silence filled the room as Y/n finally looked at Victor, his brown eyes connecting with her e/c Eyes.
Victor raised an eyebrow in curiosity as he waited for a name: Hoping it was him, his own name that he so desperately wanted to hear.
"It's his brother. You. It's you, Victor. I feel guilty enough, so why I'll just admit it while I'm already talking to you."
Victor felt his heart skip a beat as he longed to hear those words fall from her mouth. Y/n closed her eyes as she looked down, clenching her nightgown in embarrassment.
She opened her eyes; Victor was close to her, their noses almost touched.
"There's no need to feel guilt. If William is leaving no time to spare for you, then maybe it isnt right to be with him. Especially if he is close with your dear sister."
Victor went on as he softly touched Y/ns face. "But Y/n."
Y/n felt her cheeks heat up as all the dirty thoughts she had earlier troubled her mind again. "I longed to hear those words fall from your pretty mouth. I knew we felt the same ever since the last time we were together."
Victor went on as he gentle pushed Y/n onto her back as he got on top of her. Y/n felt her heart beat fast as she touched Victor's cheek with her hand.
"So please, Y/n. Let me pleasure you in a way my brother has never. Let me show you what you're truly missing. You don't have to chase after what you've been needing after we're done."
Y/n couldn't whisper anything as she just stared, moving a piece of Victor's hair out of his face.
"What do you say, Y/n? Let me guide you to another pleasure you never knew existed. Please, I would do anything to show you another feeling...Please..."
Victor whispered in a subtle moany voice as he leaned down to kissed her cheek, then her neck. Y/ns throat was clenched by something that refused to let her speak. Now that she's in the moment she always wished for, she felt like a doll that couldn't move.
"Yes. Please, Victor. I've felt so alone for weeks, and yet you're the only one who brings me an unfamiliar warmth."
She finally spoke as Victor moaned in reply due to the pure exhilaration he felt.
Y/n opened her legs more as Victor moved his waist to be in-between her legs and closer to the heat in between her thighs. His erection pulsed in need as it pressed against her clothed wet, needy clit.
Y/n moaned quietly as Victor moved his waist, pushing into her so that she could feel how hard he was for her.
"Do you feel that? Do you feel how bad I need you? There's not a single day that goes by that i don't think about you..." Victor whispered in her ear before biting her neck, leaving faint marks as he kissed her flesh. "Mm, I do...Victor."
Victor continued to grind against Y/n as she too, moved along with his movement. She wanted to feel him more, but she couldn't when cloth was separating them.
"Victor, I need you so bad..."
She whispered as she gripped his green robe, wrapping her legs around his waist to bring him in closer to feel his need.
"I know, dear. I know. For so long I needed you. Ever since the day I met you along side with William, I felt jealousy. How does my brother get to stand beside a lady like you...?"
Victor whispered back, kissing Y/n as he touched her breast over her nightgown.
Squeezing it, he kissed harder, hurting Y/n with his teeth in desperation. Y/n whimpered in slight pain as she grinded against his hard cock.
Their tongues danced together as their bodies become hotter. Victor left Y/ns lips as he was breathing heavily.
"Fuck..." Victor groaned as he moved his hips faster.
Y/n suddenly spoke as Victor stopped. She slid the strap of her nightgown down, exposing her breast as Victor watched in surprised.
"Take your clothes off too."
Victor didn't hesitate as he threw his green robe on the ground. He got off of her as he took his pants off, still watching Y/n who took her night gown off.
She was in nothing but her panties, which were damp. Victor licked his lips as he fell down to his knees, Y/n gazing down at him in just his underwear.
His bulge was enough to say how desperate he was. "What are you doing?"
Y/n asked as Victor looked up at her. "Don't worry, please lay back and relax..."
Y/n nodded her head as she leaned back down. Victor touched her panties with his shaking hands, slowly but surely pulling them down as her clit was in view.
Victor pulled her panties off her legs, throwing them in the pile where his clothes were.
He placed his hands on both her thighs as Y/n shivered. Victor leaned forward, licking her clit as Y/n moaned.
He gave kitten licks before attaching his whole mouth onto her vagina, sucking in her clit and juices.
Y/n moaned as her hand was placed on the top of his head, grabbing a fistful of his hair.
Victor showed no signs of stopping as he continued to suck her dry, licking sometimes before putting a finger in her tight hole.
Y/n threw her head back as Victor began fingering her heat. It felt too much, but still felt like his mouth was adept. He was a messy eater, which showed his desperation.
Victor picked up his pace until she moaned out as an orgasm overcame her.
"You're a good worker, Victor. It feels like you've done this before."
Victor smiled as he stood up to look down at Y/n who sighed. She looked back at him as he fondled with his underwear.
She watched him take it off as his erect cock stood.
It was 7 inches, circumised, and he had a bit of pubes.
Y/n felt her mouth water, her own body feeling need, another kind of ecstasy
Victor moaned out as Y/n slowly sat up, wrapping her hands around his erect cock. It felt like a hard item covered with cushion fabric.
She continued to pump his cock until pre-cum leaked from the tip, wet and drippy as it settled on her hand. She smirked as Victor was gripping the bedsheets, moaning out her name in pure desperation and gratification.
"Come on, Victor. Show me how badly you need me, show what you're cable of doing, love."
Victor looked up with docile eyes as he closed the gap between them.
Victor grabbed his cock, rubbing his tip in between her folds as she bit her llip.
"Please Victor, please show me another kind of love. Please give me your cock."
Y/n begged as she held eye contact with Victor who groaned.
Victor used his fingers to get some of the remaining juices out of Y/ns hole to lubricate his hard cock.
He stroked it once more before sliding it in. Y/n gasped as she kept her mouth open. Victor groaned as his forehead pressed against her shoulder. "Fuck, Y/n... Hah..."
Victor moaned as he slowly moved in and out of her. "So tight, and so warm. Like you were only meant for me."
Victor praised her as he kissed her shoulder down to her breast. He kissed her left breast before attaching his mouth onto her nipple. "V..victor!"
Y/n stuttered as she moaned, throwing her head back once more as she felt immense pleasure. Victor continued to suck her nipple as he placed his hand on her waist, squeezing it.
When Victor left her breast alone, his lips attacked hers as his cock slid in and out of her vagina.
Y/n kissed back harshly as she wrapped her legs around his waist, squeezing him as she clawed at his back.
Victor fastened his pace as he pounded into her profusely, chasing his orgasm as he let go of her lips, groaning.
"You're so gorgeous, Y/n. Fuck, you grip me so well... I'm going to cum.."
Victor warned as he sucked her neck, leaving a mark. "Cum in me, please. I'm going to cum too.."
Y/n asked as she moaned, the bed creaking.
The sound of fleshing clapping against each other and moaning filled the room. Victor pulled his cock out of Y/ns vagina before pushing it back in deeper, groaning while cumming inside her as his warm, salty cum filled her vagina.
The two were breathing heavily as they reached their high. "You're so amazing, Victor. You're a professional..."
Y/n softly said as she rubbed Victor's face with her head as he leaned into it, his chest going up and down.
Y/n immediately woke up as she hurried to get her clothes on. Victor was already gone, probably with the creature.
She hurried out the room and into the room she shared with William; William was already up, reading a book in a chair.
William asked like he already knew the answer.
Y/n swallowed her guilt as she spoke softly. "I was downstairs with Victor examining his new creation."
"The entire night? Were you with Victor?"
Y/n stopped in her tracks as she bit her lip hard. "No, i was just downstairs getting water. You must not skip to ideas like that, it makes me think you don't trust me."
Couldn't find any whiny or submissive Victor fanfics so I took the matter into my own hands. I hope you enjoyed and don't be afraid to criticize my work ;)
