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[what-the-fuck-khr]

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Target 1: That Guy From Italy

[theauthor27]

Here’s a list of instrument and what category I think they are best in.

Funniest instrument: most instruments that you play with your mouth.

Coolest instrument: Metal guitar

Sexiest instrument: Saxophone

Most attractive but not in a sexual way instrument: Acoustic guitar

Weirdest instrument: Theremin

most sophisticated instrument: piano or violin

Most elegant instrument: Harp

Goofiest instrument: accordion

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[audram]

is it pitiful

that I hope my mother,

who is blind in one eye from the tumor

and the cancer she is fighting,

cannot hear me from the next room

as i sit crying.

Ashamed at the tears I shed

that they just might say

how much 

I rejoice in the time spent

the moments of silence together.

How joyful at just having her in my home.

For a moment

for an hour

for 2 days. 

Or just how much I'd miss her.