#1st shoot

[ekniemisba2a]

I edited my first shoot slightly so that it cuts to black when the shot is fired, this gets rid of my mistake of not moving the card when hit, plus adds a little bit more suspense as to whether the Card is alright. The gun shot is isn’t clear yet without the sound but hopefully what I want to portray with this shot will come through in post-production.

[ekniemisba2a]

This is the animation I shot in my first shoot for this project. Overall, I am pleased with how it is looking, however, there are several improvements I would like to make when it comes to reshooting. The Hat’s ribbon doesn’t look very smooth when it moves, and I don’t think that the Hat teasing/provoking the Card is portrayed clear enough. I would like to come up with a different way of showing this other than wiggling his ribbon. I wish I had spent more time at the beginning, making each beat of the card’s reaction to the confrontation of Hat clearer and longer. For example, I don’t think the shake of the head is exaggerated enough. Finally, I think I should have moved the card slightly when shot, this is so the audience knows there has been an impact even if I don’t show what has hit him until the next shot.

[uncletimothy]

[uncletimothy]

[taemgorilla]

[sophierrruf]

[ellenayoung]

Taranaki St 

My first street to be completed I found documenting, each building easy if not repetitive. The photos came out well framing both the building and a portion of the road to give me something to work with when it came to editing. light conditions changed throughout the shoot so some of the photos maybe harder to edit.